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I found this poem in one of my old love struck diary entries. Astha reading Shlok diary made me read a few of my old diaries. And I found this poem.
I'm not without my regrets
Not without my fears
Your words have the same effect
As your ice cold glares
It is ironic to be told
Love isn't for people like me
By the one I want to hold
I'm not her
I often wished I could be
But today I realise I'd rather be plain old me
Because She hurt you
Broke your heart
I don't want to be her
She let you fall apart
So bad that you are blind to the little fact
I love you still
Would it kill you to just once
Maybe love me back?

Would it sound like something Astha would feel or say?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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it perfectly suits aastha and it made my heart break again,poor aastha😭..thanks for poem
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very Aptly u hv voiced asthas feelings...u write so beautifuly😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: infernofyre

I found this poem in one of my old love struck diary entries. Astha reading Shlok diary made me read a few of my old diaries. And I found this poem.
I'm not without my regrets
Not without my fears
Your words have the same effect
As your ice cold glares
It is ironic to be told
Love isn't for people like me
By the one I want to hold
I'm not her
I often wished I could be
But today I realise I'd rather be plain old me
Because She hurt you
Broke your heart
I don't want to be her
She let you fall apart
So bad that you are blind to the little fact
I love you still
Would it kill you to just once
Maybe love me back?

Would it sound like something Astha would feel or say?

abso lovely poem
great stuff and absolutely apt for this track and aastha's state of mind
liked it👍🏼

btw whats yr name?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jonee


abso lovely poem
great stuff and absolutely apt for this track and aastha's state of mind
liked it👍🏼

btw whats yr name?


Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
I'm Ashlesha.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishaa3

Very Aptly u hv voiced asthas feelings...u write so beautifuly😊


Thank you! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well suited poem for astha you wrote long time back
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really nice. True aasthas feeling.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely poem Ashlesha 👏
As if written for Aastha!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice poem😊..apt for Astha

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