Ashlok TS: Time Machine (Part 3 - Page 3)

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Hey Friends... I am back with another TS on my favorite pairs... In this I am adding my another favorite pair Jodha-Akbar from par
t 2... Please do read and comment...

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Part 1:

Bhopal: Khan Mansion:

"Jaldi kijiye Mr. Khan... Humein airport jaana hai..." She moved away to take out dress for him... He held her hand, pulled her back... "Yeh kya kar rahe hai aap..??"

"Pyaar Mrs. Khan..." He didn't leave her...

"Hum pyaar baad mein bhi kar sakte hai... Abhi Aastha-Shlok aur Arjun-Sakshi aarahe hai..." She relieved herself and stood before him... "Abb chup chaap taiyaar hojayiye..." She pulled him out of bed and pushed into washroom...

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Airport:

"Humare luggage abhi tak nahi aaya hai Shlok..." Aastha rolled her eyes on moving belt with coffee mugs in her hand...

"Meri maa, abb tak 10 baar bol chuke ho... Aajayega... Par yeh Arjun aur Sakshi kaha rehgaye...???" He looked around to find them... He heard a voice from back and turned... "Kaha gaye te tum logh...???"

"Hum, tum logon ko doondte - doondte, coffee shop chale gaye te..." Arjun replied with smiling Sakshi standing beside him...

"But luggage...???!!!" Aastha questioned handing her coffees for her and Arjun...

"Humne collect kar liya hai..." Sakshi pointed trolleys in their hands...

"Arre yaar tum ladkiyon ko humesha luggage ka kyun pada rehti hai...???" Shlok looked at Aastha...

"Kyun ki tum ladke bahot careless hote ho..." She raised her eye-brow...

"Sahi kaha tumne..." Sakshi joined...

"Hum...!!! tum ladkiyan zaroorat se zyada careful hone ke wajahe se hum careless lagte hai..." Arjun defended...

"Accha, issi liye pehli baar Arjun Suryakanth Rawte tickets ghar pe bhool gaye te..." Sakshi stared at his changing expressions...

"Pehli baar hua hai, Kya kare Pyaar ne nikhama kar diya, nahi toh hum bhi kabhi kaam ke te..." Arjun said smiling...

"Waah... waah..." Shlok supported...

"Hogaya..." Aastha looked with her bouncy eyes at Shlok...

"Abb chalein..." Sakshi showed Arjun path...

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Outside Airport:

Asad and Zoya are waiting for both couples to step outside airport... "Yeh logh abhi tak kyun nahi aaye...???" Zoya repeated for 10th time...

"Aajaynge Zoya... Yeh lo aagaye..." Shlok and Arjun stepped out with Aastha and Sakshi beside them... Zoya went and hugged Aastha and Sakshi... They were so excited like class five students who get not to attend classes for school picnic... Asad welcomed Arjun and Shlok hugging...

"Kabse wait kar rahe hai, pata hai...???" Zoya questioned...

"Inn dono ke wajah se late hogaye..." Sakshi and Aastha said in chorus...

"Hum dono ke wajaha se...????" They blurted out...

"Chodo yaar, ladke humesha late karte hai... Pata hai Mr. Khan aaj kitna late karne wale te..." Zoya complained...

"Mein...!!! Ha.. Par busy tha mein... Kya kar raha tha aapko pata hai na Zoya... Kitna important kaam tha... Batyiye..." Asad smirked...

"Woh..." She stopped and looked around... She tried hiding her red cheeks from gazes around... for changing topic... "Abb ghar chalein, airport mein din guzarenge kya...???"

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Khan Mansion:

Everything is all set for their New Year 's Eve... All three men in their elegant black suite are waiting for their lady love to step out of there room...

"Yeh ladkiya kitna time lagate hai yaar..." Shlok is annoyed waiting for her... It's been fifteen minutes they are waiting for them...

"Inke aane se pehle New Year bhi aajayega..." Arjun added...

"Mujhe lagta hai New year aane ke baad bhi yeh logh nahi aane wale hai..." Asad laughed...

They stood up and turned towards the stepping down sounds... Three beautiful angels gently placed there foot down on the floor... Bloomed smile glorified their faces... All three stood with a smile lost in there beauties... They looked like stupid Romeos waiting for their Juliet's... Asad, Shlok and Arjun's gaze followed their loved one's paths... Zoya, Aastha and Sakshi came and stood with grin on their faces... All three couples charm lightened the place around...

"Aap bahot khoobsurat lag rahe hai Zoya... Aaj sabb logh mujhse jalne wale hai..." Asad soft gaze on her made her blush...

She looked up with questioning eyes, "Kyun...???"

"Mujhe aap jaisi sundar begum jo mili..." He gave her all-time favorite rose...

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"Tum itni sundar lag rahi hai ki chaand bhi sharma aakar chup jaayega..." Arjun moved front looking at her smile...

"Yeh kya kar rahe ho Arjun...??"

He smiled and pulled out a rose, "Tumhari saamne yeh rose bhi sharma rahi hai, itni sundar ho..."

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"Aaj na teri iss smile ke saamne saare tare chamak na bhuljayenge... Itni chamak hai iss mein..."

"Koi taareef karna tum se seekhe..." Aastha smiled...

"Koi smile se katal karna tumse..." He gave her a rose...

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Pre-cap:

Asad - Hum yeh kaha aagaye...???

Zoya - Sixteenth centuary mein, waha screen pe likha hai...

Arjun - Sixteenth centuary matlab Mughal dynasty..

Sakshi - Abb hum yaha se bahar kaise jayenge...??

Aastha - Mujhe bahot darr lag raha hai...

Shlok - Don't worry, hum kaise bhi karke yaha se waapass chale jayenge...

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Thanks for reading... Please do like and comment...

Part 1 - Above

Part 2 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-ek-baar-phir/3870810/ashlok-ts-time-machine-part-3-page-3?pn=2

Part 3 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-ek-baar-phir/3870810/ashlok-ts-time-machine-part-3-page-3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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You Are Awesome!
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Nice update SIS.. Interesting again between three couples..
Loved Aastha and shlok..shlok blaming Aastha for forgetting luggage..
Update more soon sis.
Lovely.
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awesome start...
loved it
interesting
continue soon
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Permission is given to all those who want to kill... This is really a late update... But long update... Please do read and share your views...

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Part 2:

Boating:

Asad-Zoya, Arjun-Sakshi and Aastha- Shlok had great time together... There first New Year together in Bhopal... This new year carry paramount memories in their lives... This first new year after Asad and Zoya's marriage... This first New Year for Aastha and Shlok after their engagement and this New Year is special for love-birds Arjun and Sakshi... This New Year has more relevance for love... Every moment is filled with love and happiness...

All sat in circle holding their hands to welcome there new life with new hopes, welcoming new memories brushing off old thoughts... Silence around is waiting to get covered by their happy laughs and screams to welcome New Year...

Asad-Zoya/Arjun-Sakshi/Aastha-Shlok - 5...4...3...2...1...HAPPY NEW YEAR...

They hugged one another wishing happy New Year to each other... They had great time there... They danced on soothing music with candles around in glass jars... Cool breeze complimented there dance...

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"Yeh aap ke liye..." Asad gave her a gift wrapped in a red shining paper...

"Iss mein kya hai...???"Zoya is excited like a small kid who is ready to receive a gift on her birthday... Asad smiled seeing her excited to open wrapper, but she stopped for a moment...

"Pehle aap yeh batayiye ki aapne mujhe new year gift lane ke liye promise kyun liya...??"Zoya questioned, hugging gift...

"Kyun ki mein kudh apna gift mangna chahta tha...???" He stood crossing hands against his chest...

"Kya...???"

"Pehle gift toh kholo..." Her eyes are filled with surprise, happiness and tears... It is collage made of his and her childhood photos framed up in wood...

"Mujhe ek choti Zoya chahiye..." She raised her gaze to him... She hugged him tight...

"Ha..." This is her best New Year gift for new life... "Toh aapko New Year gift meri ha' chahiye tha..." He held her tight sighing yes...

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"Meri gift kaha hai...???" Aastha questioned with rainbow eyebrows and hands on her hip...

"Pehle mera gift nikhal..." He asked hiding gift behind him...

"Ladki se gift maang rahi ho... sharam naam ki koi cheez hai..." Aastha giggled...

"Accha, humesha gifts ladke ko dena padta hai... Par Shlok Agnihotri har kisi ki tarah nahi hai..." Shlok was stubborn not to show her gift until he gets his gift...

"Ok baba, ye raha tera gift..." Aastha placed a velvet box on her palm and pushed it forward to him...

He received it with a wide smile and opened it... Box contains two watches in it, " Kya baat hai...!!! kud ke liye bhi gift kareed li..." He laughed...

Aastha gave a smack on his hand, "Inn dono watches mein ek specality hai..."

"Kya...???" He is took his watch and wore it...

"Yeh doo..." She wore her watch... She pressed button beside dial... Shlok felt vibration on his hand... He looked confused at her...

She smiled, "Yeh button press karoge toh meri watch vibrate hogi, mein reply mein yeh button press karrongi toh tera watch vibrate hoga... Hum humesha saath rahenge..." She pressed her button and he replied pressing his button... She pressed her eyes with a smile, "Meri gift kaha hai...???"

"Bhulgaya..." He rolled his eyes... She crossed her eyes with fallen face... He smiled and lifted her face placing his finger under her chin... He pulled a golden rose flower from his back...

Her face lightened with smile seeing it, "Bahot sundar hai, par golden kyun...???"

He gently held her from soulders, "Taaki humara pyaar ki tarah yeh bhi kabhi murjana jaye..." They hugged one another wishing happy new year...

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Arjun and Sakshi were smiling completely lost in one another's eyes... "Aapne mere liye kya gift laaye hai...???" Sakshi questioned...

"Gift...??? Kis liye...??? Sakshi tumhe pata hai na.. yeh gifts-vifts mein paise karab karna mujhe pasand nahi hai..." Arjun said with stern smile...

"Aap kitna unromantic ho...???" Sakshi turned her face...Arjun bent down on his knees surprising Sakshi, he pulled out ring from his pocket... Sakshi didn't expect this from him...

"Miss. Sakshi Anand, will you become Mrs. Arjun Suryakanth Rawte..." She nodded in yes with happy tears in her eyes... He raised her hand and pushed ring on her finger... They hugged as surrounding is filled with applause by Asad-Zoya and Shlok-Aastha...

"Abb aapka gift...!!!" She broke hug...

"Mujhe tera haa hi sabse bada gift hai..." She smiled and gently pulled his hand up and made him wore ring which she brought for him...

"Ring...!!! Par...??!!" He asked in surprise...

"Mujhe laga ki aapka proposal ka wait karte karte mein buddhi ho jaungi.. issi liye mein kudh propose karne ki sochkar yeh ring kareedi thi... Thank god pehle aapne propose kardi..." She gave her antic smile, Arjun shook his head but he also joined her smile... Both hugged...

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With sudden movement of boat all three couples trembled... They were informed by boatmen that, there is some problem in boat and they were stuck in middle of nowhere... He also informed that other boatman with him is trying to do something... Suddenly boat started moving and after reaching bank it was stuck again... Other man who is trying came to them and informed that there is some problem in engine...

"Abb hum kya karenge...???" Zoya spelled out...

They looked around to find some way... Asad and Arjun is talking to boatmen to find some way... Shlok got down boat and looked around, he saw light which is about 200 meters away from them...

"Guys woh dekhiye waha kuch hai..." Shlok pointed...

"Shlok lagta hai waha koi ghar hai..." Aastha said..

As boatmen informed them that it will take time to get boat ready... They decided to go there which is better than to stand shivering...

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Door opened as they rang bell... 50 year old man with white hear, wearing spectacles opened door...

"Uncle aap...!!!" Zoya exclaimed...

"Kya tum inhe jaante ho...???" Sakshi questioned...

"Subha walk ke liye ati thin a, tab mein uncle ko mili thi..." Zoya exclaimed...

"Tumne kabhi bataya nahi..." Asad looked at her...

"Topic hi nahi aayi..." Zoya said...

"Andar aayiye..." Old man invited them inside... Everyone went inside except Arjun...

"Kya hua Arjun...???" Sakshi came to him...

"kisi anjaan aadmi ke ghar rehna..." He doubted...

"Oho Arjun, Zoya inhe jaanti hai na..." Sakshi explained... "waise bhi, Kuch nahi hoga, humare saath ACP Arjun jo hai..." She winked as they entered inside...

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They sat in the living room chatting with old man... Zoya introduced him addressing him as her morning friend, Hora'... He gave a warm smile and offered hot tea and coffee... Fog surrounded the huge wooden cottage making everything around blurd and white... They had normal chat as silence surrounded few seconds... Everyone found Hora' as welcoming host than a defending person... They found him as person of knowledge... They discovered him as scientist in his late age... He worked in IIARS (Indian Institute of Advanced Research in Science)...

Enthusiastic six showered him with questions about his experience... There first day of New Year welcomed a knowledgeable year... There interesting chat was engulfed in darkness with sudden power-cut... Dr. Hora excused himself to switch on his alternate source of electricity, electric generator... It's been fifteen minutes he left... There is neither sign of light nor his presence... Shlok stood up in search of him but all five stood up along to accompany him...

They moved using their mobile torch showing path... All three girls held each other's hand... Running words on their soft lips, Bhoot jaye sasural aur hum jaye ghar' ... Silent room resounded with three men laugh hearing this... What type of wish is that...??' asked in chorus... They glared at them... Zoya took a step but slipped back dragging Aastha and Sakshi with her... They fell back hurting their back... How hard they fell can be understood with thud sound rang in that room... Asad, Arjun and Shlok moved front to pick them as light made its way from bulbs...

They looked around and they were in some other world of science... Machines, chemical theories on boards, Physics formulae are all over... There is a round big ball like mechanical working machine in the middle... It is transparent with visible operative things inside, with revolving chairs in it... Only question running is, What is this...??' ...

"Time Machine..." They turned back hearing this most famous but impossible word... Dr. Hora walked in slowly and normally with no expression other than a twinkle of success in his eyes...

"Yeh time machine hai, mera 15 saal ka mehnat..." he said caressing that non-living thing with a happiness which is visible only on father's face...

"Time Machine...???!!! But it is impossible...!!1 Mein ne iske bare mein ek article bhi pada hai... They said that it is waste of time working on it..." Sakshi said in surprise turning everyone's gaze towards her...

"No...' Dr. Hora scream in anxiety... "Yeh ho sakta hai aur hua bhi... It is working... You want to try...? You can..." He said proudly...

"No... Hum nahi karenge..." Arjun replied...

"Arjun sahi keh raha hai... Iss mein risk ho sakta hai..." Asad supported...

"Both are right... New Year ke saath new ending na hojaye..." Shlok added...

"Kuch nahi hoga.. mein ne yeh already try kiya hai... Yeh mera successful Invention hai..." He said confidently...

"Humein try karna chahiye..." Zoya exclaimed...

"Ha... Zoya sahi keh rahi hai..." Sakshi added...

"Darr lag raha hai, par life mein issa experience hona chahiye..." Aastha smiled...

"You people are..." Asad started.. "Unbelievable..." Arjun added... "Impossible..." Shlok completed...

"Tum logon ko nahi aana hai..." Zoya started...

"Koi problem nahi..." Sakshi continued...

"Hum logon akele jayenge..." Aastha completed...

Zoya, Sakshi and Aastha are out of league and not stoppable... They entered time machine with Dr. Hora's assistance... Asad, Arjun and Shlok couldn't leave them so they joined trying but didn't stop there trials to stop therm... Dr. Hora explained everything...They randomly pressed some dates... Arjun, Asad and Shlok asked them to think once but they were stubborn to move... After too many arguments Zoya panicking three of them pressed the start button...

There was a sudden revolving movement in that ball shaking all six throwing them here to there... In fraction of second's world moved nothing was visible... As they closed and opened there eyes they were in place unknown to them... Greenery made place beautiful... Front door opened making a path to get down... They all six got down and looked around...

"Hum yeh kaha aagaye..." Asad turned around...

"Sixteenth Centuary mein... woh mein ne waha screen pe dekha hai..." Zoya showed them...

"Iska matlab hum Mughal Dynasty mein hai..." Arjun said..

"Hum aa toh gaye but waapass kaise jayenge..." Sakshi questioned...

"Mujhe bahot darr lag raha hai..." Aastha held Shlok...

"Don't worry, hum waapass chale jayenge..." Shlok patted her in assurance...

They walked to look around... They moved front hearing argument behind bushes... They walked up to bushes and saw two people standing in ancient attire arguing with each other...

"Jodha Begum, aapke wajah se Iss mughal saltanath ka shehensha ka nishaana choot gaya hai... Mere shikaar ko bhaga diya aapne... " Jala Complained with arrow and bow in his hands...

"Humari koi galti nahi hai... Ek masoom janwar ko marna shehnsha ka shaan kaise ho sakta hai...???" Jodha questioned...

Their argument continued with no knowledge about spectaculars... Asad-Zoya, Aastha-Shlok and Arjun-Sakshi acknowledged from argument that one of the person standing in front them is Jodha and other person addressing her as Begum should be Akbar... There dresses, language are completely different... They are using ancient Hindi...

Jodha wore traditional lehenga with heavy embroidery... one inch long border on her duppata covering her head with maangteeka falling down on her forehead... Her necklace fitted and covered her neck studded with rubies and diamonds... Her ear rings were swinging in rhythm...

Akbar wore his elegant long coat bearing thread embroidery... He wore his king cap showing his authority... Arrows and bow in his hand and sword in sheath hanging down in his hip...

Zoya suddenly started laughing hard pointing Jalal and then Asad, "Jahapana Six Packs..." Everyone around Panicked... Jodha and Jalal looked at them shocked, Confused and Surprised...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow super cool update...loved the way the exhanged their gifts...so lovley...and dr.hora and that time machine was so...like techincal...so enthusiastic,,...loved the last part where zoya laughed hard pointing out to jalal and asad..."Jahanpana Six Packs"
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Love this update

I miss zoe calling Asad Jahapanah Six packs*Sigh*

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beautiful...simply superb!!!😉
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Hey tis is amazing...
luv it...
superb...
thx fr the pm...
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So now it has become a 4shot wit the entry of jalal and jodha...nice update

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