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here is my second os on ashlok for you.this is a simple story of pure love.iam a budding writer so please forgive my mistakes


THE DEPTH OF LOVE...

what happens when you were inch close from losing someone you love... someone who is worth more then your own life. That incident get stamped in you heart, mind and soul.fear of lose

the same thing happened in the life of astha agnihotri...

It was in a cold day of december. Despite of her numerous attempts to read his mind,astha failed.she never understood his feelings for her...nor did he expressed it once.

sometimes words are left unspoken waiting for the moment one can truly feel its depth and intensity


evening shlok got a urgent call from suresh to come and check a construction site far away.he got ready and left without informing astha...
Once he was done checking the construction building, he decided to do re-check every corner of the building for any faults...
It had been few hours since he was exploring the area and it was growing dark, so he decided to walk back to his car,He was walking back, when due to the dark he didn't see a deep trench in behind him. Even though the trench was small in width but was quite deep. He fell twenty feet down the rough slope, hitting a number of trees, before he landed on a ledge. He could tell right away that something was terribly wrong with his left leg. he lied there unable to move a little...he was bleeding heavenly but still in consciousness...
Stunned by the fall, it took shlok a little while to realize that he was too crippled to walk. Then, shlok knew he was in serious trouble. Night would fall soon and not a soul knew where he was. He had to get to himself up to the top some how or he might die out there before anyone could find him. He braced the broken leg against the other leg and resting his weight on his hands, he began inching his way up.
Making slow and painful progress, shlok often stopped to rest and call for help. The only response was the sound of his own voice echoing through the darkness. As the sun set, the temperature began to drop. It was a chilling cold night and shlok knew that he would probably lose consciousness soon.. It was increasingly hard to move, but he forced himself after each pause to keep hauling his sore body forwards on his aching hands. He continued this awful journey for another few hours.
Finally, his strength and determination gave out. He was utterly exhausted and couldn't move another inch. Although it seemed futile, he summoned up a last burst of strength and shouted for help.
He was astounded when he heard a voice return his call. A real voice, not another mocking and empty echo. It was shlok'sdriver, Astha had sent to search for him.she was hell panicked ..no response to any of her calls to his phone...

when shlok didn't come home, she got worried and called suresh
At first, suresh tried to find shlok himself and he drove all around the construction site looking for shlok. He did find him, suresh and the driver looked around few more times, but couldn't find him. suresh had then called the police and reported shlok as missing.
astha kept calm and strong outside until the moment the driver had called and said he'd heard shlok''s voice.
she dissolved into tears, finally feeling the fear and dread she had been pushing aside for hours. It took over two hours for the rescue team to pull shlok up

The paramedics trundled him away on a stretcher and when astha got to see him at the hospital, her tears started flowing a fountain. The thought of how close she came to losing her soul broke her...to the core...

It was only when she felt shlok's arms around her that she finally stopped sobbing. As she sat next to his hospital bed, her eyes fastened to the face she had been so afraid she ould never see again. shlok told astha his story of accident


shlok:Immediately after i slide down the trench and realized the seriousness of my predicament, i thought of you astha -he said with tears

Love is the voice under all silences, the hope in every pain...thought which overcomes every fear...


As i lay at the bottom of the rough and deep trench, i groped around until i found a suitable rock. Using the rock, which was sharply pointed, i managed to carve a message to you on a large rock near where i lay. If the worst will happen, i hoped that you would eventually see that rock by my lifeless body and know that you are always with me close to my heart.


she started weeping all over again. she knew how deeply she loved shlok...he is her soul.. but she was unprepared for the depth of his love for her...his unspoken love for her...


she hugged him close and kissed him

astha:never ever leave me shlok

shlok:i love you so much astha...your love saved me today...i always loved and will love you forever

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astha woke from her thoughts by shlok's voice

he noticed her crying

shlok:astha you are still thinking of that incident ...see how strong your hubby is now...

he wiped her tears

astha:i can never forget that incident shlok..the day i felt the intensity of your love for me...the day your love touched my soul

shlok:my love for you is still the same,will always be the same

astha hugged him tight

astha:i love you shlok

shlok:i too love you my astha...for ever...

tears rolled down their eyes...those silent weeps are the music of two loving hearts..which beats as one

Of all the music that reached farthest into heaven, it is the beating of a loving heart that the god love the most!


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Far somewhere deep in the wooded hills of delhi, there is a large rock with a heart carved on its side. And in that heart it is carved I LOVE YOU ASTHA

As light turns into darkness, we run through the night
Stopping for breath, as we hold each other tight
Nothing can pull us apart, we'll always be together
You know I'll always love you, forever and ever

Flowers to flowers, oceans to oceans
heart to heart, both always in motion
So powerful this love, linked as one
It'll never go out, it's as bright as the sun

My soul is your soul, never it split
Always a candle, forever lit
no one will separate us, forever we'll be
Always together, you and me





here ends a tale of love that never ends...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written dear...loved it from the core of heart...
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Very Nice os .totally loved it. 👍🏼
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Originally posted by: jhalu

Beautifully written dear...loved it from the core of heart...

thanks a lot dear
thank you so much😊
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Originally posted by: mehaksobti

Very Nice os .totally loved it. 👍🏼

thank you so much
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thanks a lot dear
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thanks a lot dear😊
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Very we'll written, Lechu. After impatiently waiting for IPKEBP episodes these days, now I am waiting for your FF chapter updates 😒
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Originally posted by: abhi_guru

Very we'll written, Lechu. After impatiently waiting for IPKEBP episodes these days, now I am waiting for your FF chapter updates 😒

thank you so much dear😊🤗
will update ff tomorrow
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thanks dear😊

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