New AdNi SS ~ And then Chandni Happened! ~ Chap 4 on pg15 updt 5 Apr

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

I am so happy with such a long update

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deepa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Lost_Somewhere
I loved it Deeps. The last line of the update rocked yet again. 👏 I am completely in awe of this ff.
Update soon. 🤗

thank u dear...every single word of appreciation means a lot to me🤗

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deepa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: hailly
Amazing update, loved it.
Continue soon please.

thanks hailly 😃

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deepa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Anraysha
Hello Deeps 😊 this is Ayesha,from Twitter, hope you recognized me,Your SS is really Cute,and I guess,a twist is awaiting,the short girl named Chandni gonna be his Love,that's what I found,Anyways Brilliant job,Amazinggg,Lovelyyy story❤️👏👍🏼

thanks Ayesha ...glad u like it😳

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deepa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Anraysha
Second Chapter is seems like a beginning of a Love Story between Advay and Chandni ❤️Advay is getting affected, seriously by her simple beauty,honesty,her words,dedication, love for her Work,her Actions on that Party night too, Fantasticcc👏👍🏼

thanks again dear

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deepa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: 2filmy

hahaha ok 😆
even if it is inspired from her
that is a great example

rofl ...u never know priya

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deepa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Namitje
you are an amazing writer i love thi chater can't wait for the next one

thank u so much...each comment means a lot

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deepa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: 2filmy
thanks for the update
it was a dhamakedaar one

Originally posted by: 2filmy
I wonder what will happen
when Chandni will know
he is Pooja's brother
I would love to see her reaction then

Originally posted by: 2filmy
finally I know the name of the girl
Rachana a beautiful name

Originally posted by: 2filmy
how free they are with each other
the conversation flows so smoothly
it feels they know each other for long
they share their personal feelings so well

Originally posted by: 2filmy
Loved how she spoke about acting
it is her passion and she loved it
good to see her respect for Rachna

Originally posted by: 2filmy
the last part was an eye opener
he was so engrossed in her
that he did not notice the music change
and he forgot to look for Rachna

thank u priya for u detailed comments🤗