ADVINI OS - CHHUP CHHUPKE Uptd Pg 1!

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2filmy

@2filmy

Trailblazer

Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Barunkidiwani
It is already under construction will start that SS in Nov

oh wow i am so happy to hear it

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AshtaVasus

@AshtaVasus

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Sorry for sounding a villain, but I am glad that this was not your usual Shayri embedded story.

I have always wondered how would the actors feel, when (and after) they shoot such intense moments... Would they feel awkward having to do such sensual scenes while being watched by so many people around (light men, camera man, stills men, make up men, assistants, helpers, director, other side actors as vamps or villains etc etc ... For us viewers, its just the Hero and Heroine doing the scene with a close up shot.

Your story gives the story behind the screen ... and its quite an interesting start.

You left a bit of loose ends in the story - So I am guessing that its not an OS... Yayyy... Its the marriage sequence done on the sets, but no mangalsutra in Chandni's neck yet... although she wears sindoor chori chupke.

As usual, Advay is having difficulty keeping his hands off Chandni, but he has shirked off his Casanova image, at least convincingly enough for Chandni. But he is still rubbing wrong sides with Yash.

Lets see how Chandni faces her father about the marriage and how Advay is gonna convince him that he can be a good SIL. But no shayri in this story please ... keep that sequence separate dear.

Edited by rajatshweta - 7 years ago

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2filmy

@2filmy

Trailblazer

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

nazia really this secret meeting is so cute

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Neha

@Loving2Missing2

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Ekdam hatke idea!⭐️... n your writing made it believable!👏 Nice dialogues matching with good concept...so our given award was very correct😎 ...keep writing more 👍🏼

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