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Originally posted by: mayukatta
So .. people what do you think! Iam sort of okay okay with this . I mean we are getting so good episodes that what ever I write falls short of what we get to see. My feeling about this situation is still not clear. Should I feel happy that we are getting such good stuff.. or sad that my writing is below the par? Will think on that😊Meanwhile u can tell me what u felt about this post. Suggestions for improvement always welcome. Thank you😊
Hello Mayu my darling ,
Sorry about the late reply,
But girl you are seriously one hell of a writer yaar, Simply loving your Dhaava wala OS .
What are you on about " Writing is below par" Its really very good,
The concept is in itself very good, Lets hope this is how things will pan out tomorrow.
You need write more often probably on a regular basis and treat us to these OS .
I loved the last bit , that meri dard ka dawa tum ho chandini bit 😳. Oh i am in heaven now, just hope CV's make Barun say those lines to Chandu tomorrow.
I have gone back and re read it , just one slight criticism, please take it as a positive criticism , you might have to pay more attention to your tenses. Thats all. I am only saying this so your writing gets even better and tighter, no that i am a good writer or anything. But just saying it from a readers perspective.
Shiv Shakti
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
