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sara1990

@sara1990

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Wow, it is great. Honestly speaking... I am glad she left them... She will not be heart broken or disappointed anymore. She deserve to be happy. I am a bit disappointed with Omkara though. He didn't even realise she was not there and not willing to share anything with her ..

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Palakh Aggarwal

@RudrakshPreesha

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#32

that was so beautiful 😭👍🏼

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OoViVioO

@OoViVioO

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Farri25
Viiivvvuuu 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
OMG how do I describe how amazing this waasss !!!
So so well so beautifully written... everything well balanced... Omg this was AWWEESSOMME ! ❤️ 💔
So heartbreaking... but very much needed 😭... I so hate everybody 😭... The way you showed them breaking down... girl I literally held my breath so many times like No No No plz don't let that happen...😭 💔 ❤️
So good that I've decided to TRY not troubling you for another update for few days... You realise how much I loved this one now ? 😆
It was AmAzing ❤️

You hate everybody?😆...So glad you liked it 😊...I think I am going to take a break writing sad OS's ...

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OoViVioO

@OoViVioO

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sara1990
Wow, it is great. Honestly speaking... I am glad she left them... She will not be heart broken or disappointed anymore. She deserve to be happy. I am a bit disappointed with Omkara though. He didn't even realise she was not there and not willing to share anything with her ..

Thanks. I wished I could write Omkara's character better but the way makers are writing him its better that he has no wife 😆

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OoViVioO

@OoViVioO

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: DilBoleRikara
that was so beautiful 😭👍🏼

Thanks 😊..

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aayushi1

@aayushi1

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#36

This was heartbreaking...

Gauri's anger and miseries are way beyond any decent person can take...

Thank you for making her half off...She definitely deserves better and omkara needs to learn how to treat his lady love in a better way and to prioritise her...😊

Edited by aayushi1 - 7 years ago

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OoViVioO

@OoViVioO

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: aayushi1
This was heartbreaking...
Gauri's anger and miseries are way beyond any decent person can take...

Thank you for making her half off...She definitely deserves better and omkara needs to learn how to treat his lady love in a better way and to prioritise her...😊

Im glad you enjoyed it. For me Gauri in IB would not be angry regarding this track but rather hurt. When you realize you were never needed nor belonged its heartbreaking 😭

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aayushi1

@aayushi1

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: AMIEO

Im glad you enjoyed it. For me Gauri in IB would not be angry regarding this track but rather hurt. When you realize you were never needed nor belonged its heartbreaking 😭

I agree to it...But we all fans ain't any saints like gauri...

I have written something on this track to...

If interested do check it out...would love to know your views...!😊

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Sayma Afrin Khan

@AfrinHrid

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#39

It broke my heart💔

Omkara was so disappointing😒 how could he forget their anniversary!

The way she made everyone realize their mistakes was just amazing.

Loved this strong decision of gauri..

Very beautifully written

Loved it so much

Edited by AfrinHrid - 7 years ago

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OoViVioO

@OoViVioO

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid
It broke my heart💔
Omkara was so disappointing😒 how could he forget their anniversary!
The way she made everyone realize their mistakes was just amazing.
Loved this strong decision of gauri..
Very beautifully written
Loved it so much

Thank you. I feel happy because I was trying to pull at my reader's heartstrings ...Im glad that it worked. Who doesn't like to read a little angst and sadness sometimes..reminds us we are human with different emotions. 😊

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