RiKara SS ~ Silent Tears (Completed 3/1/18) [CHECK PG 87 similar OS] - Page 8

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Women are the epitome of patience and strength..but taking them for granted isn't something appreciable...a person should realise they're human being and have their own, mental stress and physical problems..I flinched reading the part where she was asked to do the preparation to welcome the elder couple...poor girl...
And Omkara ignoring Ri while taking the family photo was the limit..how could he..?? For whom he wasn't considerate towards his wife, was leading a happy married life away from the family..and the whole family was blinded by their love to even look at those efforts Gauri did to keep the family together..I hate Pinky from the starting..so nothing to say about her..but Daadi announcing Anika as the only daughter in law of the house made me hate her..Omki broke my heart today..can't he see anything rather than his brothers..?? I love Obros..but I love Rikara too...so can't stand with this fact...he disappointed me..
Rudy was the sweetest towards Ri..he at least tried to make her feel important..I loved him the most among Oberois..

This is beautifully sad. 😭

Very emotional..

Originally posted by: lovesick23

Yes will definitely love to read more parts of this. I want Omkara to realise and infact everyone to realise their mistake. Although I don't find him as much at fault because I know that it's only writers reluctantly to give a proper scene to Rikara and not Om as a character being thankless.

Originally posted by: Savinaa

My poor Gauri... it broke my heart when she said in defeat, with regard to babies, "Do what you want but after 3 days" I almost pictured her lying next to Om, in a defeated manner. I know my wishlist is long, but the next day i want Om to see Gauri carrying out her daily chores mechanically, with no more emotions in her ,Like even if he were to pull her closer to romance her, i wish to see her just blank and motionless, as if just letting him do whatever he wants but refusing to reciprocate. The very thought of it is geart wrenching. And if Om tries talking, i need her to respond to him with the way she responded about having babies. I need these Oberois to notice how lifeless gauri has become.

These Oberois have killed my happy n dabanng Gauri. She's lost herself trying to save others, annd whats worse is that they do t even know of it. Please do update soon...

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

Women think sacrifice is their department nd sadly men think the same... If not appreciation at least recognition required

Daadi always loved Annika more... She has never shown even half much love to Ri

Om can be very insensitive when he wants to be... For brothers he ignored his own wife

Just because gauri is quiet , she is taken for a ride...

Rudy is always my sweetheart

Omkara's character as a brother is the most loving, caring and bhai ke liye kuch bhi karoonga type..but he isn't a good husband at all..I don't blame his for being clueless about his wife's sacrifices..writers never gave him anything as Gauri's husband..adarsh bhai is unexplored as a husband..he need to realise he has a wife to..
About Daadi, I think she loves Shivaay and Anika most..I've no problem with that..but treating the other daughter in law as a servant (I'm really sorry to use this word..but that it what she made me feel) is too much..you know I'm just frustrated with everything..
Your continuation part will be the sahara of my broken heart..will be waiting to read the next part..this lifeless Gauri is making my heart bleed..she's like done with everything..the chirpy, dabang Chiraiyya is lost..I hate Oberois for making her feel this way..continue soon..I know you would do justice with Gauri..

Finally managed to squeeze time to read few stories here

Originally posted by: SRKisLove

This is beautifully sad. 😭

I'm feeling so choked right now.

I know I hardly comment, but I should since I love your works (have read all of them recently).

This is so realistic. Like its not really fiction, its canon. Om has ALWAYS taken Gauri for granted. Be it DBO or IB.

And the funny thing is the old Om was a nice guy. Om doesn't take anyone for granted except Gauri. He doesn't treat anyone unfairly but Gauri. (You haven't seen DBO right? Free ki advice, don't watch it, the Om in DBO is an abuser, nothing in common with IB Om except his obsession with truth)

Gauri's selflessness has always been mistaken for subservience.

The Omkara in your OS is so close to the one in the serial.

I wish like the Gauri in your OS, the Gauri in the serial would also understand that she is being abused. But nahi makers ko fursat kaha to give Rikara any depth.

I love how you expressed Gauri's feelings. ❤️

I'm going to live in the fanfiction world of Rikara from now on, 'cos serial mein toh kuch hai hi nahi.

Please continue, and I hope Gauri leaves never to come back. Because she has frankly given Om lots of chances and he's never going to change, never going to be deserving of her.

Supremely well written. 👏

I'm fan since I read the Kara series.

Originally posted by: arshifansiri

Very emotional..

Poor guri..feeling so bad for her..

She has took care of everyone n everything but their is no single person in that house to even ask about her wellbeing..

I soo hated om in this,specially when he scolded her..bechari was just trying to cheer Rudra..he is so heartless..how can he treat his wife like this..even dadi didn't consider her feelings..Guri got hurt listening dadi only consider anika as her babhu..all took her for granted n now really wants to see them realising n repenting for their mistakes..

Om should realise how badly he hurt her with his behaviour n feels guri shouldn't forgive him easily..

Plz continue this..

Very beautifully written.

Thanks for d pm:)

Rudy is the only kind soul of the lot

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Omkara's character as a brother is the most loving, caring and bhai ke liye kuch bhi karoonga type..but he isn't a good husband at all..I don't blame his for being clueless about his wife's sacrifices..writers never gave him anything as Gauri's husband..adarsh bhai is unexplored as a husband..he need to realise he has a wife to..
About Daadi, I think she loves Shivaay and Anika most..I've no problem with that..but treating the other daughter in law as a servant (I'm really sorry to use this word..but that it what she made me feel) is too much..you know I'm just frustrated with everything..
Your continuation part will be the sahara of my broken heart..will be waiting to read the next part..this lifeless Gauri is making my heart bleed..she's like done with everything..the chirpy, dabang Chiraiyya is lost..I hate Oberois for making her feel this way..continue soon..I know you would do justice with Gauri..