Oberoi-fic-|| Entangled Branches Of The Family Tree||

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Posted: 7 years ago
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ShivOmRu were the reason I watched this show and still are!
Something entangled in my brain, about complicated families, ties of the heart and bonds of the soul. Trying an altogether different take.😊

Skipped Shwetlana here, she is already too much on the show!πŸ˜†


Here's the teaser,

Would love to know if you would all love to read more.

Teaser:-

"I introduce to you all Abhay Singh Oberoi. My younger brother. He had been abroad but is now back and from tomorrow, he joins the Oberoi Business Empire. Smiled Shivaay looking at Abhay. Everything was going right. The happiness he saw on Daadi's face was unbeatable. Though the senior Oberois still looked unconvinced with the decision. There was applause followed by a photoshoot of the new Oberoi in town. Reporters from the entertainment to the business industries were all over the mansion shooting videos to break the news to the world about the New Oberoi Bachelor in town.

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While Rudra simply turned to look at Abhay. His frown automatically appearing on his face. For once he did not support his brothers' decision though on the top he showed he did. Shivaay had very delicately explained to him that Daadi was right. Omkara had seconded it. Abhay was an Oberoi and deserved all that the three had. In fact he deserved more than the legal rights, he deserved love that he had been deprived of. But, for some reason unknown to himself he just couldn't stand it all. His entire respect and love had been for his two brothers, how could he give the same to another man, despite the fact that he came from the same calling as them. But, his brothers seemed to be doing just that. They were already treating Abhay like a younger brother. Was he jealous he wondered? No he couldn't be., he knew what he meant for the two. But still a part of him was at war. He had never felt so uneasy before. He din't know what he was to make of it. But he was certainly not at peace.


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Do comment your thoughts and let me know if I should continue this to a one shot or two!πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 7 years ago
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You are on a roll today.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Res.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Unres😳😳
I started watching the show because of the first promo and I liked Swetlana there... even before the Obros.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

About the teaser, I am looking forward to this. Something nrw. πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
Edited by Rainzz - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rainzz

You are on a roll today.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Res.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


What if I say...Shhh...kuch nahi.(because I m slow and have no heart to kill expectations. AND i have a working sat and sunday at college so...MUM for now)

your res ke baad...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

make me go...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

and πŸ˜†
Edited by annikaa - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rainzz

You are on a roll today.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Res.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Unres😳😳
I started watching the show because of the first promo and I liked Swetlana there... even before the Obros.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

About the teaser, I am looking forward to this. Something nrw. πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Me too! not to forget those short sneak peaks at bors life they were amazing as well!
As a vamp you mean!πŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: annikaa


What if I say...Shhh...kuch nahi.(because I m slow and have no heart to kill expectations. AND i have a working sat and sunday at college so...MUM for now)

your res ke baad...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

make me go...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

and πŸ˜†


Ohh God... Working Sat and Sun at college
This makes me go .. .

You stories make me go.. 😊 πŸ˜† 😳 🀣 and sometimes ☺️ too.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

Loved the start.
Continue soon.


ThanksπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: annikaa

Me too! not to forget those short sneak peaks at bors life they were amazing as well!
As a vamp you mean!πŸ˜†

Yehhh... That sneak peaks were cool.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
I found Swetlana classy. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rainzz


Ohh God... Working Sat and Sun at college
This makes me go .. .

You stories make me go.. 😊 πŸ˜† 😳 🀣 and sometimes ☺️ too.


get Set and ready...cause I m going to reply that by...




"Awww..."😳

u put dancing also there🀣 singing samaj aata cause i use songs dance kaise?πŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rainzz

Yehhh... That sneak peaks were cool.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
I found Swetlana classy. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰


Jaanvi was classy for me😳
Shwet gave me vamp feels to power 50 from the teaser only
πŸ˜†
How i wish they could still make those sneak peaks once a while!πŸ˜”
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: annikaa


get Set and ready...cause I m going to reply that by...




"Awww..."😳

u put dancing also there🀣 singing samaj aata cause i use songs dance kaise?πŸ˜†

Arre dancing , when I see the your new updates.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

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