Rikara OS - Worries (21/11)

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| Prompt: A Post-Reunion tiff |

Note: No proofread or spell/grammar check.

This is my first time writing about Rikara, so be gentle. Being a Shivika fanfic writer, I can't help be mesmerized by Rikara too.

This story is inspired by YRKKH.


Worries

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It happened suddenly. Omkara Singh Oberoi had been kicked off his bed by Gauri. Om hit the ground hard. He rubbed his neck trying to sit up from the worst wake up call.

"Gauri-" Om started but realized that Gauri had been sound asleep.

"In one kick I'll drop you to the ground..." Gauri mumbled in her sleep. Om raised an eyebrow. What in the world was she dreaming about?

Admiring his unique wife and her strange antics, Om shook his head. Only her...

Om lay back on the bed, trying to fall asleep again. It was all in vain. Gauri kicked Om back off the bed again. Om thumped to the ground as hard as the last time. "How dare you..." Gauri murmured in her sleep.

Om stood up furiously. "That's my line." Om grit his teeth. His anger subsided at her peaceful face as she slept. Gauri looked absolutely precious when she's sleeping. It silenced his anger. He pushed Gauri's hair behind her ear and stepped away. Om took his pillow and a spare blanket. He rested himself on the green sofa of their room, falling asleep as soon as he tucked himself in.

The morning came. The sun rose. Gauri woke up stretching in fatigue. She noticed Omkara wasn't in bed. Did he get up early?

Gauri noticed Om sleeping on the couch. She raced out of bed. "Omkaraji!" Gauri panicked s she called her husband out of his sleep.

Om's eyes snapped open. He awoke to Gauri's scream. Rising from the couch in haste, he held onto Gauri. "What happened Gauri? Are you okay?" Omkara asked impatiently, worrying for his dazed wife.

"That's what I want to ask you! What happened? Did I say something to hurt you? Was it something I did? Omkaraji, are you okay?" Gauri trembled as she questioned Om.

Om raised an eyebrow, making a weird face. "What would happen to me?"

"Why are you sleeping on the couch?! I thought everything was normal between us now. You seemed fine last night." Gauri's fist clutched as she complained.

Om laughed at Gauri for a moment, much to her shock. He pressed her shoulder, assuringly. "Relax, relax! It's nothing that you have to panic over. Actually, in the middle of the night, you kicked me off the bed a few times and took control over the entire bed. So I just slept on the couch because I didn't want to wake you." Om teased as he watched Gauri start to flush. She covered her face in embarrassment.

"I'm sorry, I-"

"It's okay, I understand." Om passed Gauri a reassuring smile as he held her shoulder. "You don't have to worry, Gauri. I'm always going to be here for you from now on. We're in a new beginning, let's forget the old and bitter memories. Its time we let them go and start our new relationship on new expectations and understandings."

Gauri rejoiced with a soft smile as tears were going to fall out. Om kissed her forehead. He wiped her tears. "And no more crying, we're definitely done with that. Now you go get ready and come out fresh. We'll have breakfast with everyone." Om requested. Gauri nodded and left to go the bathroom.

Om smiled to himself as he watched Gauri go. A resolve shook in his voice. "I swear, the days of me hurting you are over, Gauri. Never again. That's my promise to you, from your Omkaraji."

To Be Continued In The Small Extra.

CHECK OUT THE NEXT POST FOR A SMALL EXTRA!!!!

I hope you enjoyed the chapter everyone! Please leave a like and comment, feedback is much appreciated.
-Jesal

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LordLuminous thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Note: No proofread or spell/grammar check.

This scene is something that happens but is generally not necessary to insert into the OS, but I couldn't help but think of this when I was writing.


Worries (Extra)

The couple made their way to the dining table for breakfast. Sitting down, Om rubbed the back of his neck. It still hurt from last night when Gauri kicked him off the bed.

Shivaay noticed Om in pain. "What's wrong, Om? You didn't sleep well?"

"No, it's that Gauri kicked me off the bed and I think I hit the wrong place. It's still hurting." Om explained unconsciously, still running his neck. He realized only after he spoke that he regretted it immediately. Om's eyes widened as he watched his family erupt into laughter. Gauri hid her face in embarrassment.

"Omkaraji..." Gauri complained, still hiding her face.

"Sorry..." Om apologized, pouting to her.

"Isn't that a surprise? You know Om, Annika does the exact same thing!" Shivaay confessed to Om publicly as Annika's eyes widened.

"That's a lie!" Annika cried out.

"I have video proof, Annika!" Shivaay exclaimed back to his wife.

Om and Gauri started to feel less embarrassed as they began to laugh with the family.

"So, both of my Bhabhis have a habit of kicking in their sleep?" Rudra inquired, astonished by the coincidence.

"Honestly, I sometimes think Annika and Gauri are sisters. They have all the same problems." Shivaay teased.

"And the same personalities to. They're pretty much almost same-to-same." Om added on.

"Shivaay please."

"Omkaraji, please."

Annika and Gauri spoke at the same time to reprimand their husbands. This only made everyone burst into laughter, teasing them.

If only they knew...

The End.

That AniRi though. What a tease and foreshadow it would be for the Chutki reveal.

I hope you enjoyed the chapter everyone! Please leave a like and comment, feedback is much appreciated.
-Jesal

Edited by LordLuminous - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Dear that was wonderfully written
I enjoyed it very much
You portrayed both Characters perfectly and the added scene with the entire family was really sweet and adorable
:D
Hopefully we will read more from you on RiKara :D



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Jesal always wanted them to be sisters, hope it comes true
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Such a lovely OS. You've written it beautifully.
Loved reading it. ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very good
That is something I would like to even see in show before AniRi are disclosed as sister's, their similarities being discussed by families...

Do write a lot on RiKara
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yay..more Rikara stories to read! Very nice.
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Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Dear that was wonderfully written

I enjoyed it very much
You portrayed both Characters perfectly and the added scene with the entire family was really sweet and adorable
:D
Hopefully we will read more from you on RiKara :D





Thanks! I needed that. I feel as though I still don't know much about the pairing that I can write a great story. I have a lot to learn. I'll try to write more.
LordLuminous thumbnail
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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

Jesal always wanted them to be sisters, hope it comes true



They are sisters. They always have been and when they unite, it'll be the best.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing one shot loved it so much.

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