Shivika TS : Slightly Wicked : Part Three : Page One : 20.Oct.2017 - Page 4

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar... Thanks hun😛

it was too intriguing but too exiting also... hehehe thank you

so much twist and turns...I never thought that the story will talk a turn like this but I really loved it awww glad u liked it... hope you'll like the next part too😛

Originally posted by: ithihaas

OMG, what a story !!! Never have I ever imagined Shivaay with a characterization in your story. haaayi... glad u liked the story and Shivaay's characterization😃

I just couldn't stop reading and wished that it wouldn't end. that is so sweet hun... next part is also pretty long😛

Your story is simply awesome. Its so intriguing. I loved your story telling. thank you so very much dear😃😃

Originally posted by: kinnika

This is incredibly well written!! Look forward to the rest of it!

Originally posted by: S.love1

This was one awsome story I have read so far, AMAZING that is so sweet hun.. thank you so much🤗

it was long and I am thankful to you for that, but i am impressed that you you wrote such a lengthy update so beautifully, just perfect. i was trying to make it a One Shot.. but it got very long, and i decided to make it a three shot... the next part is also pretty long.. hope you'll like it😛

Loved anika and shivaays story, although shivaay seemed a little too possessive and overprotective but that's why I love shivaay. Annika in the other hand seems very naive and innocent. Shivaay did wrong by manipulating her and at one point it made me think that he is a obsessed lover rather than being a true lover. However I love the way you concluded the chapter with shivaay letting annika go for a while at least, and that made me believe that it's true love. Shivaay is going to be unappologetically manipulative through out the story😆.. but yeah, he does truly love her😃

The thing that I absolutely LOVED was shivaay- ranveer's convo. It was very funny to me for some reason. And in all honesty I loved their lovestory or relation/bond better than shivika, (and I am a true shivika fan to say the least) HAHAHAA same here... i actually felt like writing a story with Shivaay kidnapping Anika and keeping her like that, while her fiance/boyfriend married someone Shivaay is close to (like his sister)😆😆 and he falls for her... Exactly like this Shivaay-Ranveer story

All I can say is am really excited and eagerly waiting for your next update!

Much much love!

thank you so much Soumya, hope you'll like the next part too😃😃

.Soumya.

Originally posted by: perfictionist

Magic!That is what you create! 😳awww thank you so much hun🤗

The title is so apt! Shivaay is so deliciously wicked all the while being so adorably loving caring and ...perfect! Yes... he is a little scary, a little obsessed, a little mad but his love for anika is his undoing...the beast becomes the perfect primce charming for his princess!❤️ yeah... his love for her, actually humanizes him😳

I thought i would be a little disturbed by His way of marrying anika through deceit.. yet i found myself sympathizing with with his grieving heart ..his pain to have known the woman he loved with all his heart loved someone else! It uncanny the way he understands and anticipates her every emotion and move... ofcourse she loved him.. how do i know that? Cuz Shivaay said so... and shivaay can never be wrong about his anika! hahaha, yup, Shivaay knows her more than she knows herself... and he grew up with her, so it is pretty easy for him to read her.

Him and ranveer! oh lala😉... hotness overload! lol.. him taking care of ranveer only because anika 'thought' she loved him shows how much anika and her happiness means to shivaay! And the reason he deceived her is not because he couldnt live without her but because he knew she wouldnt be the happiest with him and shivaay wouldnt stop unless his anika is the happiest woman on earth!... yup, he knew the disaster tht awaited her if she married Ranveer, married to Ranveer and pining for Shivaay

Ruthless Rudra was a little hard to digest honestly! Cuz i always found him the most sorted ... funloving and care free inherently but can more than take over responsibilities as and when required.. hes so flexible and can fit anywhere perfectly! And you perfectly fit him as a badass gangster!.. 😳 yeah i know... but i wanted all three brothers to different from each other...

Mr goody two shoes standing up for what is right staying true to his character.. The ever so righteous Omkara said some powerful lines there and made my hopeless heart flutter all the more! And his adorable sidetracked (lol. the incorrigible truth) love story with Gauri grabbed more of my attention than it should. And here is a hopeless rikara lover requesting you to write a sequel to this focusing on my endearing OMRI...🤪

hehehe i love writing about Om and Gauri... they are my fav... 😳

CANNOT wait for your updates! i love that they are sooo long and sooo fulfilling! Thankyou❤️🤗 awww thank you dear... will post the next part soon🤗

Originally posted by: sweetie_angel

Nice one

Originally posted by: bworm

Wow. Amazing story. Long update...loved it

Anika Ranveer unusual combination.

You have me hooked...waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: lolololol

Awesome ...

I loved it...

Please continue...

Update soon

Originally posted by: priyanka_22

Amazing.. please try to update soon

Originally posted by: farinaks

It was amazing awesome fantastic mindblowing khidkitod chummeshwari fabulous... Loved it frm the heart
Shivika never missed a chance to kiss each other
Nice start nd different too
Continue soon
Do pm me of possible

Originally posted by: kavya009

❤️

OMG it's a freaking awesome story, one of the best story I have ever read in IF. So beautifully written. The way you have portrayed all the characters in it is just amazing. I am in love with your version of Shivaay who is little obsessive, dark shaded though protective, caring and hopelessly in love with Anika. ❤️❤️
awww thank you so much dear... so glad u liked the story and Shivaay and the other characters😛

I am going to read the part again and pretty sure will continue to do so in future (I always love to re-read my favorite stories). Can't wait for the next update. Please update it soon. Otherwise I am going to stalk you for update 😉. Do send me PM if possible.
awww that is so sweet yaar... hope you won't get bored with this story😳... will send u pms😛

Lots of Love ❤️
Kavya love ya🤗

Originally posted by: GoodGoneWrong

loved it... Actually love all your works. I am glad there won't be a redemption arc. awww thank you hun... so glad u don't want a redemption track🤗And I am intrigued how its all going to work out. Few biggest stuck out to me and I hope u plan to touch on those stories too, even though it is essentially a Shivika story. thank you so much for liking my stories... i hope you'll continue to like them😃😃

1. gauri doesn't know Om exists, but everyone knows bout her. I wonder if Anika will go to her and thus the Rikara story would start. No hun, Gauri will come only in the final part😉

2. Rudy's never been in love... Will we see him fall in love. Also u mentioned he is the ruthless one, I hope to see him soften. As of now, he is going to be the same... don't know, if i'll change that... do have an idea... but not a very clear one.. so might won't use it😛

Last but not the least... Are u a Balogh fan? I think u mentioned her or her works once before too. I love the slightly series even though it is a little convoluted. Actually I like most of her work. i have heard great things about her book... haven't read one.. but her books are there in my to-read list... my fav is Julia Quinn😃😃

Rivs

Edit: did u change the title from slightly to simply? Why? no hun... i don't know why, i keep unconsciously typing simply instead of slightly