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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

Hola everyone

I am Poorva, an active IB forum member wanting to make some suggestions to the team behind the camera and on the writer's desk ...

To begin with I will just say for any love story ... Confession and intimacy are never the end and no drama basically needs extremes every time ... The characters and the storyline can be normal and good at the same time! Coming to what I have in mind ...

ShivIka

Okay so the eldest couple of the trio are something which GK & TEAM does best ... They were very well scripted from day one ... But I don't feel like saying so now ... About them I would like to suggest that ...

1) Make both of them work as professionals ... As far as I know Shivaay is supposed to be a businessman and Anika an event manager

2) Make Anika trying to adjust in the lavish lifestyle and social status because of the gravity of being Mrs. Kanji Eyes

3) Let them have simple clashes like any other married and settled couple

4) Anika taking up responsibilities as the eldest OBahu and making according changes in the functioning of the Oberoi Mansion ...

5) Anika expecting a child will be a treat to watch.

RiKara

The second couple in league and line are two married strangers doing almost nothing about progress in their marriage for the last six months ... Their characterisation has so much potential ...

1) Please go and lock Omkara in his studio and bring a tutor for Gauri.

2) The first thing both of them need to do is talk! They need to give each other time, make their marriage work

3) Make both of them put efforts for each other ... Simple gestures

4) They need to fall in love ... Please make them fall in love ... They are married for six months

5) Please let them enjoy a normal life romancing each other ... Circumstances being the reason ... Individually both of them deserve it

RuVya

The youngest couple is a modern age love story with a thriller background and a cop as FL ...

1) Give them a romantic clarification, conformation and so confession of being in love ... Their attraction towards each other is evident

2) Make Rudra think about his own life ambition and career ... Owing to the fact that Bhavya is a cop.

3) Bring them together in a way they trust each other and Bhavya tells him about her life and family

4) Give Rudra's characterization some mature treatment as Bhavya is the one elder to him ... They have to evolve

5) Get them married ...

For all the three couples let them have good family time, send them on a vacation, celebrate festivals ... Bring in some business crisis, Bring in an element from the past of Oberoi khaandaan, Make brothers stand for each other in problematic times like always ... The three stories can very well run parellaly ... ShivIka being the mature and experienced ones ... RiKara being the intense and passionate ones and RuvYa being a crisp and fresh take ...

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aditi

@aditiyuvi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_
Hola everyone
I am Poorva, an active IB forum member wanting to make some suggestions to the team behind the camera and on the writer's desk ...
To begin with I will just say for any love story ... Confession and intimacy are never the end and no drama basically needs extremes every time ... The characters and the storyline can be normal and good at the same time! Coming to what I have in mind ...

RiKara

The second couple in league and line are two married strangers doing almost nothing about progress in their marriage for the last six months ... Their characterisation has so much potential ...

1) Please go and lock Omkara in his studio and bring a tutor for Gauri.
2) The first thing both of them need to do is talk! They need to give each other time, make their marriage work
3) Make both of them put efforts for each other ... Simple gestures
4) They need to fall in love ... Please make them fall in love ... They are married for six months
5) Please let them enjoy a normal life romancing each other ... Circumstances being the reason ... Individually both of them deserve it

. The three stories can very well run parellaly ... ShivIka being the mature and experienced ones ... RiKara being the intense and passionate ones and RuvYa being a crisp and fresh take ...

well written abour rikara...I really want something to happen between them...in bil boley oberoi...they were shown great...but in IB...how come they are so much side tracked...I sometimes feel...what the hell is happening...

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-JollyJabeen-JB

@-JollyJabeen-JB

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Lovvvely post.. i hope you don't mind me adding a few things? Here are my hopes:😆

Shivika:

1. Every since Mahi's behaviour, i've wanted Annika to have a conversation with Shivaay where she gets a clarification/guarantee that he will love her/always be with her despite her crazy personality. Clarity that he loves her tbh.. just raw feelings and love. ❤️

2. I want to see Shivika go away somewhere.. just privately. I want their cute tari back.. like after they got married post Daksh mu.. (was watching the scene where Shivaay is going to make breakfast for her for the first time and gifts her a phone too. Absolute cuteness "thode pyaar seh bologe? Pyaar seh?"🥳

Rikara:

1. First of all, please give them good screenspace. Agar yeh nahi hopara, then really is there any point of hoping?????

2. These 2 need to talk. I haven't caught up with the episodes yet so don't know about Barielly wali mu but still. Communicate people.

3. This is more of a personal wish/wiah cvs wwnt along this roite: in terms of the inspiration scenes, i reallly wish Gauri took Om to secluded areas/beaches/for a walk like we saw in a really early episode of Ishqbaaaz (when Ishana was following Om!!).. that was so serene. I think that would have been beautiful.. but regardless now😵

It actually feels so good letting these thoughts out..

Edited by -JollyJabeen-JB - 8 years ago

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farinaks

@farinaks

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome nd beautiful advices poorva

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rithika2015

@rithika2015

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

i agree with every word of rikara.. initially om was not ready to listen and now gauri throwing attitude.. thye need to talk about their pasts..

i really wish ridhima makes a comeback.. so that atleast we have om trying to explain him to gauri.. otherwise once he says i will win her back and other sec he will give angry glares to her..

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LAKSHMI KRISHNA

@lakshmi32

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

this is too awsome pooru..

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priya_86

@priya_86

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

So finally you made this post...good job...👏

Can I add two more...?

1. Please for heaven's sake stop showing TejViLana...seriously no one is interested...MultiLana was responsible for the downfall of DBO and she is doing the same for IB

2. Please stop giving importance to that adh nangi nagini...who wants to see 20 minutes of vamps in a 40 min serial?...

And apparently the PH spends a fortune on the maintainance of these vamps...instead spend the money to get a good stylist for the casts...this is the only serial where vamps wear designer clothes...and the heroines wear table cloths and curtains

Edited by priya_86 - 8 years ago

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ShivaayAnika

@ShivaayAnika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_86
So finally you made this post...good job...👏
Can I add two more...?

1. Please for heaven's sake stop showing TejViLana...seriously no one is interested...MultiLana was responsible for the downfall of DBO and she is doing the same for IB

2. Please stop giving importance to that adh nangi nagini...who wants to see 20 minutes of vamps in a 40 min serial?...

And apparently the PH spends a fortune on the maintainance of these vamps...instead spend the money to get a good stylist for the casts...this is the only serial where vamps wear designer clothes...amd the heroines wear table clothes and curtains

So true. I though TejviLana drama was going somewhere and they will soon involve Om/Whole fam in this but now its pure dragging. Hoping they conclude this soon.

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ShivaayAnika

@ShivaayAnika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Great post PrincessPooru. Great tracks for all the 3 couples. Hoping CVs atleast opt for something from what you have posted 😊

Although would like to correct something. Shivika and mature doesnt suit together 😆

They will always be the tadibaaaz couple 😳

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yayini

@yayini

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#10

My advice. to CV's.

1. First know what is love "Love" like Ishq wala Love.. its not something which comes in fights, misunderstandings, when u see patni doing seva, when u see someone flying in air.. Love blossoms when u understand a person's character and u like it.. Basic lessons.. Get it right.. Stop showing unnecessary ego clashes between couple (shivika) in the name of Love, unnecessary pati adoring Patni's seva, ignore maro patni keecho andolan, believing-random-strangers-not-patni (Rikara) and i dont have a clue on the other.. please excuse me..

2. Get Vamps out.. Give only 5 mins of SS for entire Vamp fest.. Vamps eat friggin 15 min sometimes.. No nagini, no pinky, no lana... Please baksh do.. humhe..we are over with it..

3. Dont get in to unnecessary functions/rasams/rituals for TRP's. TRP janta are not fools for heaven sake. They know last time a marriage happened in the show. and getting married the same people for 4 th time, 5th time is gonna be boring for them, since they had already witnessed it once. Concentrate on the story before and after, love blossoming between them instead of unnecessary grandeur and recycled clothes.

4. Fire the designer.. like Seriously!!

5. cut the community scenes.. like community love scenes, community song sequences and community SR (If you have planned one.!!🤢). Seperate couple scenes.. have it dedicated..

6. Follow points 1-5 after keeping aside your dinosour sized ego and prude attitude.. or else be ready for Babaji ki thullu in the name of TRP's 🤣

Pooru.. me lubs you for making this post..👏🤗

Edited by yayini - 8 years ago