RiKara OS - Unforgiven - Page 3

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Awesome OS

Just what I wanted

Omkara suffering

Repenting every word he ever told her

That she deserves to be happy

Glad shivaay supported Gauri

Instead of his brother

The girl deserves her freedom

It is omkara who lost the one person

Who truly loved him

And not his name

Waiting eagerly for Gauri's POV

Update soon

Originally posted by: popeye

Beautifully written.. I could feel Omkara's angst while reading it.
Can't wait to read the next part with gauri's emotions

Originally posted by: saske

First of all I apologize for not being able to comment on the other updates... Culprit : EXAMSSS...Those were really good... Coming back to this one...you really gave words to my imagination... I had really been imagining about such a plot where Ri really leaves Kara and OM...really beautiful... Couldn't have been better... ❤️
I also wanted to ask about Everything I Do...is it over or is there more?
Update soon...Love Saske ❤️

Originally posted by: Shrishti.

Absolutely loved it. I really want to see how Om makes up for how he hurted Gauri in the show. :(

Originally posted by: ehmmbhluvr

Though I am head over heels in love with omkara...I still want him to realise his mistakes earnestly..I am very glad that you highlighted this aspect..it was superb...I would love to read more from you.. please go ahead with your plans..if possible PM me..😊

Originally posted by: Shabana0786

Interesting..

The regret in Omkara is well deserved..

Would definitely read da follow ups on this piece..

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome

Do continue

Looking forward to read more

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

To be honest, I can't see Omkara in pain..he had enough since his childhood..dard se purana rishta hain uska..I believe he deserve all the happiness of this world... But the girl in me wants him to realize his mistake of judging a woman's character without even knowing the whole truth...I really want to see his tadap... And believe me, nothing could convey his pain, his tadap, his guilts, his sufferings better than your this masterpiece... He's going through the phase of life where he hate himself more than anything or anybody in this universe..he's ashamed of himself for hurting her...he's in pain for making her cry...he's suffering for being the reason of her tears... His mind wants her to be happy without him..but somewhere in his heart, he's screaming for her support...their memories are haunting him..she's haunting him... I don't know how to describe..maybe I need my pillow to hug nd cry silently to the feelings bothering me at this moment... You know..I always thought his pain connected him with the die hard fans of Omkara...and today, once again you created a moment where his pain could touch our soul...thanks for this.. I would love to read more of this...in fact I'll be waiting eagerly for it's next update..plz continue if time permits...

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Awesome Loved it yar...

I too think om deserves this much because he needs to know wat gauri means to him...its only possible when she is away from him... you portrayed his emotions very well yar... the guilt and pain he is undergoing now is well shown

Originally posted by: perfictionist

how much i want a redemption track of rikara! i wish the cvs would take a page out of your book cuz the way you sculpt their journey is just so real and raw! please update soonish!

ps - i am also eagerly waiting for your update on everything i do😛 hehehe i never could deny greed🤪