Shivika OS: Seperated But Never Apart

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Anika Patel

@AnikaPatel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.
Wow just wow.
A whole lot of perfection with great writing.
ABSOLUTELY ADORED IT.
Do continue if you can
Please

Thank You, Ritzy, For The Lovely Compliment ❤️ And I'm Happy To Know That You Enjoyed It 😳

This OS Was A Totally Unplanned Thing, So About Continuing..I'll See What I Can Do 😆 Hopefully My Brain Cooperates

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Anika Patel

@AnikaPatel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-
Amazing just loved it so much.
Incredible.

Thank You, Sweetheart ❤️

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Anika Patel

@AnikaPatel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
Awesome...loved it yar...

Thank You, Aparna 😳

And Also, Congratulations On the IF Promotion 🤗

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Anika Patel

@AnikaPatel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
wow so real
i waiting for something like this to happen in serial
haha pinky ki to Oh my mata ho hi jayegi

I Also Want Something Like This To Happen...But I Guess This OS Will Have To Do 😆

I Dislike That Pinky Won And I'm So Impatiently Waiting For Her OMM 😆

Thank You, Sumi 😳

Edited by AnikaPatel - 8 years ago

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Like the rest of your works...I loved this one too!! The realistic realizations and the possibility of Shiviika being in this plan together...though painful...is realistic and somewhat logical too. Hoping the CVs get some inspiration from this!!😉

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lamz325

@lamz325

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

I love your writing so much!! I think I've read all of your work so far, but I've never commented. This is such an interesting take on the separation track! I loved it! You beautifully articulated the need Anika and Shivaay have each other, how the separation is wreaking havoc on them. And you did all this, while having your own little twist! I'm adding you as a buddy, so please PM about your future works if you can! :)

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farinaks

@farinaks

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Awesome...shere they both r in a team
Continue soonish
Do pm me if possible

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hiya

@coolhi1988

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Omg

Few days ago even thought this will happen in show

Very well written

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moon99

@moon99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

PERFECT!!!!!!!!!

I mean do I really need to say more Anika

Just think, do I really really need to say anything more of the OS 😳

Perfect, just Perfect ...

Yeah, no second thoughts, it's Perfect 😛

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗