Rikara FF - Devotion (Updated Chapter 3, p.2)

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Hello everyone! This story exists in an alternate universe. There are certainly similarities with the show and the character's backstory and personalities are close to the actual show. However, I have a slightly different take on events and this story starts from the very beginning Omkara and Gauri's story. I hope you enjoy this first chapter even though its mainly an introduction. Please read and review, comments of all kinds are welcome!

Chapter 1:

From the small streets filled with vendors to the magnificent mandir that was the town's pride, Gauri loved every inch of Bareilly. As she walked through the vibrantly colored marketplace, she had to make an effort to not stop at each shop. Her mother needed her medicine, and she only had enough money for that. So while each colorful dupatta called her name, the vision of her ill mother prone in bed pushed her past all of those wonderful temptations and towards the small pharmacy.

"Uncle, I need to fill this prescription. Gauri handed over the slip provided by the doctor.

"Your mother hasn't improved yet, beta? Maybe you should take her to a different doctor? The old man in the pharmacy frowned when he saw the dark circles under Gauri's eyes.

This was one downside to living in a small town. Everyone knew about each other's business and, in her case, everyone knew about her mother's illness. But to Gauri, this simply meant she had to be strong for her mother, to show everyone that she was fully capable of caring for her little family.

"Actually Uncle, Ma is feeling much better. We just have to continue with this medicine. Gauri forced a smile onto her face and quickly thanked the old man, rushing out of the shop with the medicine tightly gripped in her hand.

She hurried towards her house, and as she pushed open the front door, she came face to face with her aunt and uncle.

Along with her mother's illness, everyone in Bareilly knew about her terrible relatives. Distantly related to her long-deceased father, her aunt and uncle had leached onto her family, draining their resources until Gauri barely managed to care for her mother and herself. Though, given the amount of jewelry on her aunt's neck and the finery of her uncle's clothes, one would never guess that Gauri and her mother lived dangerously close to poverty.

Gauri quickly hid the medicine in her bag and seeing the wide smiles on her aunt and uncle's faces, she narrowed her eyes.

"Oh don't look so suspiciously at us, her aunt exclaimed, quickly moving towards Gauri. "You should be thanking us! We've just come from a meeting that will make us all rich!"

Gauri huffed and while slowly inching towards her mother's room, replied, "Really? Did you find more of my parents' things to sell?

Her uncle quickly blocked her path, "Now why would we do that? Honestly, you always think the worst of us! He smiled again and slyly looked at Gauri's aunt.

Rushing forward to stand next to her husband, her aunt exclaimed, "We've just arranged your marriage! To Kaali Thakur!

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"You know, typically a businessman shows confidence by arriving a bit late. You don't have to drive this fast Om, Jhanvi reached out to place her hand on her son's shoulder, trying to calm his nervousness.

The mother and son pair were on their way to Bareilly to finalize a land deal for Oberoi Industries. Jhanvi was glad her son had finally taken an interest in the family business. While she knew that this business could drive a person to greed and carelessness, as evidenced by her own husband, she felt that Omkara's temperament would make him a grounded yet excellent businessman.

"Sorry Ma, but you know that I'm nervous. Omkara eased his foot of the accelerator and relaxed his fingers that had been tightly gripping the steering wheel. This deal was minor for the Oberoi's, but it would be the first that he oversaw on his own, without Shivaay's help. After all that he had put his family through, especially his mother and brothers, he needed to prove to them, and himself, that he was capable of bring something good back home.

Omkara wasn't too thrilled that his mother had decided to come along. He might appear weak or inexperienced with her at his side during a business deal. But she was old friends with Kaali Thakur's wife Nadini, and that connection may end up helping him secure the land. Plus, it had been a while since his mother had smiled as widely as she had when describing her childhood alongside the thakurian.

The pair spent the rest of the journey in comfortable silence, each lost in their own thoughts.

As the car slowed into the lawn in front of the Thakur's haveli, Omkara and Jhanvi looked in curiosity as the lavish decorations that littered the haveli's exterior. Flowers of every kind and bright lights covered the majority of the haveli.

"I know that I've mostly grown up in the city Ma, but I'm pretty sure that this isn't the norm. Omkara turned to his mother for an explanation. She had grown up here after all, and for all he knew, thakurs kept their homes decorated as a show of their wealth and status.

"Om, I'm as surprised as you are. Jhanvi furrowed her eyebrows as she tried to remember whether Nadini had mentioned a special event for this weekend. "But it's been a long time since I last visited this town and maybe they have a festival or something.

The two stepped out of the car and approached the large double doors at the front of the haveli. Before Omkara could knock to announce their arrival, the doors swung open to reveal a flurry of people moving in each direction.

As Jhanvi and Omkara made their way into the house, they saw a man, dressed in lavish clothing with a jeweled turban atop his head, sitting on a couch while surrounded by a multitude of gifts.

The man raised his head and saw them approaching. His face broke into a wide smile, "You must be the Oberois. Wealth recognizes wealth, doesn't it?

Omkara quickly approached the man and stuck his hand out, "Omkara Singh Oberoi, it's a pleasure meeting you Thakur. He then stepped aside to make way for his mother. "And this is my mother, Jhanvi Singh Oberoi.

Kaali Thakur looked up and down, assessing Jhanvi and then exclaiming, "You don't have to introduce a beautiful woman like her, especially when she is from Bareilly and a friend of my wife's! I'm sure you've heard of the saying; a sister-in-law is like half a wife. He and his companions laughed loudly.

Jhanvi quickly laid her hands atop of her son's clenched fists. It would not do them any good to make scene immediately upon their arrival. She quickly changed the topic, "Your haveli is beautiful Thakur saab. Pardon me for asking, but is there a special occasion? I don't remember these lights and flowers from before.

Thakur laughed, "Oh it is a special occasion! You see, I'm getting married in two days.

Chapter 1: above

Chapter 2: scroll down (bottom of page 1)

Chapter 3: page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Glad that you started from the beginning of our rikara journey..are r planning to create the same misunderstandings like the show between them or omkara will understand the pov of gauri..?? I think when jhanvi is there omkara won't abandon gauri and take her with him after their marriage..anyways we've to wait for the next update to know what's gonna happen..it seems promising..continue soon...
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awesome Loved it...
I really hope that there will be no MU here...

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Awesome start
Looking forward to read more.
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Here's the next chapter! I hope you all enjoy it. Please leave comments and suggestions, I want you all to enjoy the story as much as I enjoy writing it!

Chapter 2:

From her brightly colored suits to her dangling earrings, Gauri had been known for her love of brightly colored clothes and jewelry. What color was lacking in her life, she made up for in her attire. But here she was, adorned in lavish jewelry and clothes, yet this was lowest moment of her life. The bangles that dangled from her wrists were beautiful, but they had been given to her by the vilest man she had ever met. As she stared at her image in the mirror, her own sad eyes reflecting back to her, she willed herself not to cry. Not only would it make Thakur angry, and who knows what consequence that would have for her mother, but it would also give him some kind of sick pleasure to know what pain he had caused. While she may be helpless in her circumstance, she could at least attempt to keep her emotions in control.

Gauri took a deep breath and forced a smile on her face. However, she could still see the sadness reflecting in her own eyes and her smile faltered. If she couldn't even lie to herself, how was she going to convince others, especially Thakur that she was happy. And how long was she going to have to keep up this charade? For the rest of her life? At this thought, Gauri's face crumbled and tears began to fall.

The sound of the hard knocks at the door echoed throughout the room. Quickly standing up, Gauri wiped away her tears and steeled herself to face the rest of the night, or perhaps even, the rest of her life.

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In another room, two women sat closely together on the bed, each holding onto the other for support. When Jhanvi had heard that Omkara was going to Bareilly to meet the man her friend had married, she had been so happy. After so many years, she was going to have her childhood friend back again, someone to share her troubles with, troubles that had taken over her life. But, coming here, Jhanvi realized that Nadini's problems were as worse as her. Under the guise of providing comfort and assuring Nadini's compliance, Jhanvi had convinced Thakur to let her meet her friend. Now, the two woman discussed the horrible events that had unfolded in just a few days.

"I woke up that morning thinking about changes I would have to make around the house to prepare for your visit. But by the end of the evening, my world had been completely uprooted. Nadini held on tightly to Jhanvi's hands, tears dripping down her cheeks. "Thakur was always a horrible husband, but at least I had the comfort of knowing this was my home. But now? Where is my home now?

"This is still your home Nadini, no one can take that away from you, Jhanvi tried to console her friend, but her mind kept returning to her own husband's actions. She knew what it was like to feel insecure in your own position in the family, especially when a woman's life was so connected with her husband's.

"But that's what that girl is doing Jhanvi! That beautiful young girl is going to take everything from me. You probably saw the smile on her face, does she look like the type of woman to refuse any of the luxuries she will have as Thakur's wife?

Jhanvi thought back to the woman she had seen upon her arrival. The girl was definitely beautiful, stunning in fact. And she had been adorned with jewelry and was clearly not putting up a fight. Just like Svetlana, this girl seemed to be an equal part in this affair.

Squeezing Nadini's hands, Jhanvi again tried to reassure her friend, "It doesn't matter what either Thakur and that girl are trying to do, they will get what is coming to them. But what matters now, is that you don't accept defeat, don't blame or hurt yourself for any of this. You have to be strong for yourself, and don't give them the pleasure of knowing that they have any effect on you.

As Jhanvi spoke these words, she thought of her sons, her strength during those trying times. But Nadini had no one to support her. Again, she clasped Nadini's hands, hoping that a friend's presence would be enough to stop Nadini from crumbling.

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Omkara had thought that the haveli was extravagantly decorated before, but now during the sangeet, it seemed as if every corner had enough lights to blind anyone who walked by. People mingled happily all around the hall, as if this was just another wedding for them to attend. As if, Omkara thought angrily, a woman's life wasn't being destroyed by selfish people.

Jhanvi placed a hand on her son's shoulder. She too was distressed at the clear denial on everyone's shining faces. Nadini was upstairs crying her heart out, and here people were celebrating her heartbreak.

"How is Nadini aunty, Ma? Is she okay? Omkara hadn't wanted to risk asking Thakur to meet Nadini. But having seen his mother go through Tej Oberoi's affairs, he had an idea of the pain Nadini must be going through.

"She's not good Om. But what can she do? Even in the city, a woman is helpless in the face of this kind of situation. And this is Bareilly, and Thakur is a powerful man.

"Isn't there something we can do. Thakur may be powerful, but we're Oberois. And I can't sit back and let these vile people ruin a life.

"Om, we're surrounded by people who are loyal to Thakur. We'll discuss this later. Jhanvi patted his shoulder. Hopefully, they would be able to do something to help Nadini, if not put a stop to this marriage.

Before Omkara could reply, music began playing loudly and everyone in the room stared up at the top of the stairs where Gauri was standing, surrounded by Thakur's men. As she made her way down the stairs, Omkara was taken aback by her beauty. Although the jewelry and her lehenga were stunning, they had no comparison with the woman who was now walking past him and his mother. But when she momentarily looked up, Omkara caught a glimpse of her water eyes. Confused, he stared at her back as she made her way to Thakur.

"And finally, here is my wonderful bride. Isn't she a jewel? Thakur exclaimed loudly, one hand holding a glass of whiskey and the other grabbing onto Gauri's arm.

Thakur's voice broke through Omkara's thoughts. Beautiful? Maybe, but this woman was also despicable. He looked up at the bride and saw a wide smile on her face.

Omkara shook his head and turned away from the happy couple to face his mother, "How can people be so duplicitous Ma? Some people look so innocent but are deplorable under the surface.

Jhanvi looks at Gauri, trying to glimpse a bit of that cunning woman Nadini had spoken of. But when she made eye contact with Gauri, she caught a sight of the same watery eyes that had confused her son. Jhanvi narrowed her eyes, as she recognized the smile on Gauri's face. The same smile that she herself had used so convincingly every time she was faced with another one of her husband's misdeeds. This girl might have a smile on her face, Jhanvi thought, but even I know that smiles can be forced, especially when one if fearful of the consequences of not smiling.

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I think my face hurts from smiling, Gauri thought. Finally, that horrid function is over. But the thought of the events to follow this night stopped Gauri in her pacing.

The door thudded open, and Kaali Thakur walked in with a smile on his face.

"Tonight was amazing; you were amazing my blushing bride. He grabbed Gauri and made to pull her closer.

Gauri pushed herself away, "You promised that I would be able to speak to my mother if I behaved. Can I please speak to her now?

"Of course, how can I deny my bride anything, he leered. Thakur dialed a number of his phone and handed it to Gauri.

Gauri quickly took it and began to turn away, but when she saw that Thakur was still standing in his place, she faced him.

"I would like to take to my mother alone. I haven't even seen her in days, please can you leave?

Thakur took a step forward, and Gauri quickly took a stumbling step back.

"We're going to be husband and wife tomorrow, there shouldn't be any secrets between us. Thakur crossed his arms and indicated his head towards the phone.

Wanting to yell at him, Gauri quickly turned away to prevent herself from doing exactly that. She quickly put the phone to her ear, eager to know of her mother's condition.

"Hello, Ma? Are you there? Are you okay?

There was silence on the other end. Then, a quiet voice responded, "Gauri, is that you?

Gauri could feel tears falling down her cheeks, "Yes Ma, it's me. How are you?

"I'm okay beta, but I'm not sure where I am. Are you okay? Who are these people?

Looking over her shoulder to see Thakur staring intently at her, Gauri sighed, "I'm fine Ma. But are you sure you're okay, have you taken your medicine?

But before her mother could respond, Thakur snatched the phone out of Gauri's hand.

Gauri quickly turned around, "Please, I have to know if she's okay. She needs to take her medicine every day. Please, she's very sick. Gauri pleaded to Thakur, but the smile on his face quickly told her that her efforts were wasted on him.

"You were able to talk to her and she's clearly fine. You'll be able to talk to her more after our wedding. He smiled again. "Well, only if you behave.

He walked out of the room and Gauri collapsed onto the floor. Her tears didn't even touch her cheeks before they fell to the floor.

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Jhanvi sat quietly on the bed and watched her son pace the floor of their room.

"I just can't wait until we can leave. If this weren't my first solo deal, I would have left by now. Omkara ran his hands through his hair.

"Me too Omkara. But we can't leave Nadini here to face this alone. And something about all of this doesn't feel right Om.

"Of course something doesn't feel right Ma. Thakur is marrying that woman even though Nadini, his wife, is still alive. And he's looked her up in her room without any care for her wellbeing.

Jhanvi stood up and moved towards her son. "No, I think something else is wrong. That girl, Gauri, she didn't seem to be happy during the sangeet. I think she may have been forced into this.

Omkara scoffed, "She looked plenty happy in all of that jewelry. And she was dancing Ma. Would she have been dancing if she weren't happy? You know as well as I, that some people will do anything for money, even marry a man like Thakur.

Frustrated with her son's dismissive attitude, Jhanvi replied, "I also know what it is like to be forced into a situation where one is fearful and what I saw in Gauri's eyes wasn't happiness but fear.

She walked out of their room. Sometime Omkara was so difficult, the events with his father had made him begin to see everyone is a black or white manner, especially woman.

As she moved through the hallway, Jhanvi came upon a bright window. When she looked inside, she saw Gauri sitting on her bed, weeping. After looking around for anyone else out for a nighttime stroll, Jhanvi quickly entered Gauri's room.

When she saw Jhanvi enter, Gauri quickly stood up and faced away from her to wipe her tears. However, Jhanvi saw this gesture and slowly approached Gauri.

"My name is Jhanvi beta. Is there something wrong? Why are you crying? Jhanvi asked calmly. If this girl was afraid of something, she didn't want to scare her further.

Quickly turning around with a small smile on her face, Gauri replied, "No aunty, I'm fine. I'm just a little nervous, you know, for tomorrow. Gauri hoped she looked like a nervous bride.

Again that forced smile, Jhanvi thought. "I'm sure you're also missing your family right? I didn't see anyone from your side at the sangeet today. Where is your family?

Gauri looked down, not wanting Jhanvi to see the tears that were forming in her eyes against her will. "No aunty, I only have Ma and she is too sick to go anywhere.

Jhanvi approached Gauri and placed her hand on Gauri's shoulder. "It is important that a bride have her mother there to support her through her wedding. But since your mother isn't here, I hope I can offer you some support. If there's anything wrong, beta, you can tell me.

Hearing those words, especially after that every brief conversation with her own mother, Gauri lost the small amount of control she had and rushed towards Jhanvi, tightly hugging the woman.

Suddenly, the two women heard footsteps approaching the room and they quickly separated. Thakur strode into the room, but stopped in his path when he was Jhanvi and Gauri together, tears in their eyes.

"What is this? Gauri isn't meant to have any visitors. You will have to leave. He gestured for his goons to escort Jhanvi out of the room.

Jhanvi put up a hand and stepped towards Thakur. "I'm sorry for the intrusion but I was just explaining to Gauri what her duties would be as a wife. I'm sure you can understand that it is important for a girl to be aware of her responsibilities to her husband. I didn't see anyone from Gauri's side at the wedding so I decided to be of some help, to make things smoother for you Thakur. Jhanvi smiled politely at the man who struggled to find a response.

Not wanting to Jhanvi to suspect that Gauri was being held against her will, he quickly agreed. "Yes, yes, thank you. But now my bride needs her rest. Tomorrow is our wedding after all. And you should get your rest too.

"Of course Thakur. Good night, Jhanvi turned around and hugged Gauri. But as she enveloped Gauri in her arms, Jhanvi slipped her phone into Gauri's hand and then moved back to smile reassuringly at the girl.

As Jhanvi stepped out of the room and Thakur's attention was still on Jhanvi's figure, Gauri quickly hid the phone behind her back.

Gauri stepped forward towards Thakur, "I'm sorry Thakur saab, but aunty didn't give me a choice. I know she's here to make a big land deal with you and I didn't want to offend her lest it cost you the deal. She looked down shyly.

Thakur smiled and caressed her cheek, "See you're already becoming the perfect wife. Now, rest up, tomorrow is a very special day. He laughed and walked out of the room, followed by his goons, this time making sure to lock the door.

After checking to see if he had indeed left, Gauri quickly took out of the phone. Why did Jhanvi aunty give her this phone, Gauri thought. She stared at the phone, wishing that she knew how to contact her mother or anyone else who might help her. But she sighed and closed her eyes. She didn't know anyone who could help her, she was alone.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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A new FF
Nice concept
Starting from beginning

Omkara n Jhanvi both have come to Bareilly
Glad Jhanvi accompanied him
She understood Gauri's pain
She knows what it is to fake happiness

Omkara n Jhanvi both were blown out
Seeing the beautiful Gauri
Glad Jhanvi decided to help Gauri
But how
KT has her mother
He has even kept her away from everyone
Who will help her n how??

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Superb concept yaar...
Just go ahead
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I am happy at least janvi is trying to understand her... I am waiting for the next chapterplz update soon
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Am just loving this story.continue asap
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awesome...loved it...
jhanvi understand that gauri is forced into this..
I really hope that gauri escape from kali thakur

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