Shivika OS: The Near Death Experience- COMPLETE

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Anu

@chottekikhushi

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

This was beyond beautiful!! I cried and I am in love with these two all over again!! And thank you for Anuradha and Kabir and Mr. Oberoi! I am going to re read this again!!

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#32

wow...awesome

i must say this is the best version I had read...

its so beautiful and magical

so different from other versions

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rarefan

@rarefan

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

It is amazing how well you write.. Excellent piece of work.

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

How beautiful is it? No word is enough to described the plethora of emotions I felt while reading this ❤️

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zeherili

@zeherili

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

I don't have words

This story has etched itself into my brain

thank you

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moon99

@moon99

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

That was really nice. Actually much better than nice. It was AMAZING! ❤️

I loved the concept. It was so new and refreshing. 😊

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

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smileyallora

@smileyallora

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

I read and reread the story😊 brilliant imagination this is😊

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Aashti

@Illuminati07

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite
A very beautiful read from you, once again Ashti.

I completely loved it.

Especially the last line of your shot - That was something which came out so beautiful to me. Fascinating, I would say.

Brilliant work.

Love
- Harshada

Thank you Harshada..

You always make it a point to comment.. It means a lot

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Aashti

@Illuminati07

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
It was amazing!
Annika dying, meeting her parents, meeting Dadaji was unexpected but really nice.
Loved the slight hint that says Gauri is her Chutki indeed!
The conversations they shared were beautiful! To see Annika and Gauri's parents still inlove, even in their afterlife gave me immense satisfaction
The last scene, where Shivaay and Dadi realize that Annika hadn't dreamt of meeting Dadaji in her sleep but actually died and met his soul was spooky but heart touching!

Lovely!

-Sanu

You caught the Gauri Chutki thing..yay..

I dont know if anyone realized that Annika was an amalgamation of ANuradha and KAbir

I'm glad you liked it Sanu

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Aashti

@Illuminati07

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: veens_11
I am speechless...Such a lovely sweet OS.
You write beautifully.

Yes, Shivaay was head over heels in love with Anika way before she feel in love. He was just stubborn about admitting it to himself... Love the glimpse you have given us of Annikas parents.

Going back to read it once again.

I hope they mention that in the show as well.. It may be as Om or Rudra's observation but I wanr to believe that Shivaay fell for Annika on the one night stand confession day,

And it scared him so much that he ran in teh opposite direction

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