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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: fizy_wizy

Firstly let me tell you make the next one even more emotional as it will be the climax and I am a fan of emotional and hilarious stuff 😆
Coming to the update. Wow!! 👏
I loved how you managed to bring the wanted Om out as a result of Gauri's presence in his life. How Gauri told him to jump off the clip 😆 She used the reverse technique on him. 😆 She telling him how important he is for others. For his mother, brothers and most importantly to the person who's life is now connected with his. How will she live without him. She tried really had to never get feelings for him but who can resist Om. Tou hogaya Pyar❤️.

I know these ChulO moments will cone as flashbacks for Om in the show and he will realise that she was always telling her story to him. She wasn't lying. But when he'll understand Gauri might change and then we'll see Om ki Deewangi for the girl who brought him back from the darkness he was caught into 😊

PS. Thankoo for the PM :)


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Can't say anything about the next😆
Reverse Technique Right😆
Yea I feel the same... Those ChulO moments will surely be flashbacks...!!!
I m not sure about Gauri changing...something big has to happen for that😆

Thank You For This amazing Comment⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
My gawd Anni!!!!!!!!

Aap toh hasati thi; aj rula kaise diya 😭😭

The update was super fantabulous and what not!!!!

Took my heart away totally!!! Abhi bhi bolne ki zarurat hai how good it was?

I am in love with it and I want the nxt part soon!!! 😃


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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: KashiTessa

I am a shivika shipper, but by god you had made me a Rikara fan! 😉
I don't have words to describe, it was wonderful.
The way you portrayed both of their feelings. ...just awesome.
Waiting for next update!
Thanks for the pm, 😳


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Thank u so much..!!
Ur words of appreciation Mean a lot⭐️

Originally posted by: smrithy14

i loved it
make me cry yaar
why gauri love om that she is ready to leave him forever if he don't want to see her in his life
make sure om s feeling for gauri is as strong as gauri s love for om but i believe in rikara love story mein gauri love will one step ahead than om


In no love story can one person be ahead in love always..it keeps altering with situation...

Glad u loved it⭐️

Originally posted by: appynehra

My gawd Anni!!!!!!!!


Aap toh hasati thi; aj rula kaise diya 😭😭

The update was super fantabulous and what not!!!!

Took my heart away totally!!! Abhi bhi bolne ki zarurat hai how good it was?

I am in love with it and I want the nxt part soon!!! 😃



Haste Haste Rula Diyaa...
Rote Rote Hassa Denge...😆

Thats y I prefer not to write emo...
I don't like people crying n all...

Next Story will be Romance or Comedy
To compensate for this😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Shoot!! NOoo!!! I never meant that!!
U are fab at writing emotions too. Puhlease continue!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Both the parts were amazing 👏Superb dialogues and loved how Gauri made Om understand 😊 Hope we get to see something like this in the show too 😳
Beautiful update 😊 waiting for the next part

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Posted: 8 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: appynehra

Shoot!! NOoo!!! I never meant that!!

U are fab at writing emotions too. Puhlease continue!!!!


Arey...😆
I was just stating fact...in fact even I like writting emo just that it leaves me a little drained...
When I write comedy it leaves me insane😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: -yami

Both the parts were amazing 👏Superb dialogues and loved how Gauri made Om understand 😊 Hope we get to see something like this in the show too 😳

Beautiful update 😊 waiting for the next part

Thank You⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Read both the shots at one go...both were Outstanding...👏⭐️
Om is full of guilt & blames himself for every bad thing happening with others...he was sooo depressed...😭😭
Gauri told her truth to Om & Om felt betrayed...😒 sookar hai baad mein he considered the thought that even if she told the lie, yet she was the one who told the truth too...
Om ran out to commit suicide...😭achha hua Gauri jagi hui thi & she followed Om...😊😊
Gauri managed to convince Om to get rid of suicide ideas as his mother, brothers, family & she live for him...& Om even listened & felt sense in her words...😊⭐️
The car ride with Gauri sleeping & Om analysing was superb...👍🏼
Gauri will leave, but she is in love with Om & hence she is in terrible pain already with just the decision of leaving...chali jaayegi toh she will b fully broken...😭😭
Hope Om will stop her & accept her...
Om painted with bright colours after a huge span of time...that is Gauri-effect...😃😉

Continue soon...😃
Thnkxxx for pm...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Beautiful...
U wrote really well.
Pm me next time
Luv
Aru
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Roselind

Read both the shots at one go...both were Outstanding...👏⭐️

Om is full of guilt & blames himself for every bad thing happening with others...he was sooo depressed...😭😭
Gauri told her truth to Om & Om felt betrayed...😒 sookar hai baad mein he considered the thought that even if she told the lie, yet she was the one who told the truth too...
Om ran out to commit suicide...😭achha hua Gauri jagi hui thi & she followed Om...😊😊
Gauri managed to convince Om to get rid of suicide ideas as his mother, brothers, family & she live for him...& Om even listened & felt sense in her words...😊⭐️
The car ride with Gauri sleeping & Om analysing was superb...👍🏼
Gauri will leave, but she is in love with Om & hence she is in terrible pain already with just the decision of leaving...chali jaayegi toh she will b fully broken...😭😭
Hope Om will stop her & accept her...
Om painted with bright colours after a huge span of time...that is Gauri-effect...😃😉

Continue soon...😃
Thnkxxx for pm...😊


Thanks for the beautiful comment Rose..!!!⭐️

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