Pyaar ka Bukhar Collab: OS8 ObBros*SIDE EFFECTS* pg26 -annikaa

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Mystery1234

@Mystery1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: annikaa

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ENOUGH IS ENOUGH . WAT IS THIS ? HOW CAN SOMEONE WRITE LIKE THIS .
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This amazing ,awesome , fantastic, beautiful, best ,superbbb. OS... HOW CAN SOMEONE WRITE LIKE THIS ?? U're literally FAB .
The whole time I was laughing like anything🤣
Daksh and Svetlana 🤣...
Ishqbaazi is in the air...
Loved it ❤️

😆 Such A Dramebaaz Comment..!

Thank You Harshi..🤗

I know.. I know.. I am a dramebaaz.. 😆

Yrr.. Bass itni bhi tareef mat Karon.. Mein itni bhi kuch khaas nahi hun 😛

Hahaha😆

❤️Luv u Anni🤗

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Risha

@--Risha--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: Roudy1
Risha GM mode fully on 😆 😆
Lovely os. Maza aaya 😉

Thanks Nadu!

Originally posted by: rani-lucki
Risha please forward this piece to harneet cos this is just perfect.
You've raised the expectations sky high so if this doesn't happen I'm gonna have to keep reading this OS
Thank you for sharing your creativity with us

Thank you for such kind words! and thank you for reading and commenting.

Originally posted by: .Dalisay.
@Risha You are one heck of a writer.. what an amazing read.. from start to end the sexual tension was spilling there all over..😳😆
Abosolutely LOVED it dear.. 👏👏
My Fav bits are.. when the vibrancy of the gulaal reminded him of her lips..😳 n him calling her dimaagh paagal 😛😆
the way he smeared the color all over her skin ..hot hot hot..☺️ ☺️
Keep writing such amazing shots ok dont stop now.n dont dare say u r not good at this ..its not true. 😡😆

Aww Rucha! Thank you so much yaar! My ShivIka fan girl just emerged from nowhere while writing this 😆

Originally posted by: NYCForever
@risha
beautifully and hottily written! show mein toh aawww aahhh se aage nahin nikal rahe! iss level tak pahunchne mein toh hum boodhe hojayenge😆 so thanks for writing 👏

Ruz -

this belly armaan I've had since I started watching so fulfilled it here 😆. Mujhey pta hai show main shayad itna na dikhain. 😆

And thank you for reading!

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Mystery1234

@Mystery1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Mystery1234
How dare you say that you are not good at writing fictions...😡
It is the joke of the century... 😆
Temperature is rising... Feeling hot... 😳
I was blushing all the while reading this...☺️
It will suit the song Lahu Munh Lag Gaya 😉..
Loved it ❤️

@Bold: My chotee si aasha. Please Harneet ji sun lo! 😆

Thanks so much!

Umeed pe hi duniya kayam Hai balike 😆

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Risha

@--Risha--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: bworm

You are giving sound effects to Rishas story😉

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🤣 🤣

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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Oh my god Risha!!☺️

This was so hawt! Like you really can't do anything but blush and that's too much... My mom was giving me such weird looks I am telling you... 🤣

But seriously this just increased the temperature so much!

Cheapda SSO is so ❤️☺️

It was amazing and brilliant, kay? ;)

Damn... How can you say you aren't a good writer and it's not just because of the extremely hawt OS but also because of the writing flow 😉

I would love to read more from you :D

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sky-if

@sky-if

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#136

@Risha, omg! whoa.. that was too hot to handle..

And, this for your first OS?! wow. Hope you write many more before Billuji in the show recovers from his "Aww.." 😆

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asya34

@asya34

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#137

Jezz!! Risha ... yeh kya tha??!! Are you trying to kill the ShivIka fans with this OS??? Because CV's isska 1/2 bhi nahi dengey humaey !!!
That was awesome

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Amrita Kirana

@spankinew

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#138

God...!! Now I need a cold shower to cool of the steam!! If that's even possible. ...

It was fan-frigging-tastic!!!

And you tell that your are not a good writer!!!

Seriously gal! !...one of the best OS that I have read...

Please do continue writing more shivika romance...

Loved it..

mmmuuaaah!!!

Amrutha

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Staysh

@Staysh

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#139

GAAASHH Risha!!!

What the heck was this????

So much hotness so much👏

And this was the first time you write?? O my mataa.

I dont know if this is the first time and you say that you are not good at writing? If this is not good I really want to know what good is!!!!!👏👏👏❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️