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Posted: 8 years ago

Superb ending dear.

Their confession was superbly mind blowing. The way you used the bangles given by Mallika... Awesome👏.

Loved this story of you dear Kshithi.

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Posted: 8 years ago

The forum remembers the bangles with love and affection.. And yes, they are significant. They represent the unsaid words and they represent the promises made to oneself for the sake of significant other. You depicted that beautifully. It was a cute ending. I loved every bit of your story.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome. .Loved it.

Beautifuly done.

Bangles, piil, shivika and ending with a wet cat...

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome update

The ending was awesome.

Do write more.

Fantastic story.

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Shaina744

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Posted: 8 years ago

Love the confession a lot... This part is amazing ... Shivika s incomplete without their usual nokjok

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Sonali

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Posted: 8 years ago

wow loved it! lol, hope you are feeling better soon, and that you consider writing a sequel to this masterpiece!

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Larae

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Posted: 8 years ago

Aww, this was beautiful. I love it!

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MeethiMirchii

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Posted: 8 years ago

I really enjoyed reading this!

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S.love1

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awww lovely confesssion and a new journey for shivika

Fabulous story of deals

Much love

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.Aashi.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Read all parts in one go - absolutely loved it, wonderful story 😊

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