'Mere Saath Bhi ek Dum Aisa Hi Ho Raha Hai': Shivika - Page 2

Oh so true and lovely, every word you said.

Would she ever have thought this Shivaay who is so caring and loving would become more unbearable than the aggressive baagad billa she once knew. His every touch, every word, his very presence evokes a storm of emotions within her. But the more she tries to fight them, the stronger they come down on her drowning her , sweeping her away with endless love for this charming man.
The kiss scene was beautifully shot except for the lack of proper continuity from the earlier scene. It would have been more impactful had they shown Shivaay actually turning back and and then coming and kissing her . It looked more like her sweet imagination as we don't get to see any reaction from Shivaay's side later. Oh well, let's count our blessings, what an amazing onscreen pair, they do set the screen on fire!

Originally posted by: blackorwhite

Wooow.. I missed this post!! 😳

Beautiful lines Geet..👏

Originally posted by: geet.a

My life meant nothing much, did it?

For a moment, I thought it did.

He told me to be myself. Who else was I before that?

Did he imply that the person I was when I was terrified for him and his family, was not real? That my only identity implied a static relationship with Sahil?

I thought when he held me, that I meant more than someone who could be a headache; like my aches could be manipulated into happy, futuristic adjustments. Unfortunately, those do not involve murderous databanks. At this point, there are rarely any persons who would remain loyal; as it is, she wipes her tears, blinks the salt away, and waits.

I see him as mine,

as he lowers his head to my temple,

my wounded lips seek his heart

and as we meet,

there is an ache

of words and sounds,

looks and aches:

He is mine now,

as I am his

Originally posted by: AreYaar

Oh man, I had no idea you made a post for Saturday too...I was out that day...

LOVE the poem! Sooo beautifully written as always👏👏

Originally posted by: Roudy1

Lovely post geet 😳

Originally posted by: swaram

Oh so true and lovely, every word you said.

Would she ever have thought this Shivaay who is so caring and loving would become more unbearable than the aggressive baagad billa she once knew. His every touch, every word, his very presence evokes a storm of emotions within her. But the more she tries to fight them, the stronger they come down on her drowning her , sweeping her away with endless love for this charming man.
The kiss scene was beautifully shot except for the lack of proper continuity from the earlier scene. It would have been more impactful had they shown Shivaay actually turning back and and then coming and kissing her . It looked more like her sweet imagination as we don't get to see any reaction from Shivaay's side later. Oh well, let's count our blessings, what an amazing onscreen pair, they do set the screen on fire!