ShivIka OS - A Living Death [Sequel Updated PG 8] Completed 8/6/17 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Have your time Sharmi dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing update dear
i loved it very much
it really emotional one
tia psycho errr my shivika 😭
and thanks for the pm dear

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Take your time Khushi
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Originally posted by: Nohsin10

It's so emotional and heart touching😭😭. It's a beautiful story. Well doneπŸ‘πŸ‘



Thank you so much dear.
Glad you liked it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: KrUtI97

beautiful...bechaari annika...she lost her mother and her love...same with shivaay too...he lost his part of life...well done harshada...




Thanks a lot kruti.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: MorningStar01

Res'ing

Until I can get my emotions under control😭



Ooops! I making you emotional beyond limits, ain't I?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alvapriya



Ooops! I making you emotional beyond limits, ain't I?




OK, so I'm back to unres' and tell you how amazing I think this OS is 😳 😳 😳 first, thank uUu for the p.m πŸ˜† I always get happy to see your p.m's πŸ˜†πŸ˜† secondly, sowii for unres'ing so late I have really bad memory problems πŸ₯±


Coming to the beautiful heart wrenching story you have typed out πŸ‘ from the title I knew you was going to make me get all emotional&sh*dd πŸ€” no prob' tho' I survived πŸ˜† ... it was als so beautifully written, beautiful emotions, beautiful plot just beautiful err'thing ❀️ their connection eventho' they'd both suffered, one from loss of a loved one & one from betrayal of a loved one.

"He was broken the same way she was. They both weren't perfect. They both had flaws but they filled the gaps in each other's life, bringing out a new one out of them"


I loved those lines, I felt like I could relate to these two characters that have been through so much and yet still found that there's someone who will be the candle to your darkness that there's someone out there who will accept you, for you, even with all the baggage you have 😭


They got married even without confessing their love for each other 😳 I'm glad they did realise their love and confessed it too 🀣 Anika let Shivaay do the all work of planning & worrying about if she'll reciprocate the feelings or not πŸ˜† && ofcoz he would have felt the same with Tia, Tia was just someone who was meant to be in his life as a passing moment, she was meant to be in his life to break him, so that Anika's broken heart could fit together with his own broken heart to make a beautifully pieced together heart ❀️ (not sure if that's gonna make sense, but I promise it made sense in my head)


But then again Tia came into the picture, but this time she broke the heart and threw the pieces back to their owners 😭 if she wanted to die, then she should have died peacefully, why did she have to drag Anika down with her 😑 ... Shivaay acted like a fool, I get that he did what he did because he loves his mamma but he should have at least explained the reason for his doings to Anika. She of all people would understand why he did it. Because she herself loves her mother a lot. πŸ˜’


The end was so emotionally ddraining, like I honestly don't what what to say about how you ended it 😭 I don't want it to end like that, please don't end it like that for them to lose everyone they loved and to finally find someone who's your light and then to have to lose that person as well can be painful on so many different levels. 😭😭😭


I was experiencing feelings of wanting of throw either my phone or chandi' at you but unfortunately I'm in S.A and you're all the way on the other side πŸ˜† ... do you have any intentions of writing another part? 😳😳😳


P.S. On a scale of 1-10, If I were to sue you for emotional harassment, how angry would you be? πŸ˜†



Sending hugs&chandi πŸ€—
-Shan'e
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it made me emotional... heart touching feeling bad for ShivIka... πŸ˜”
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Posted: 8 years ago
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EMOTIONAL,,,, HEARTTOUCHING,,,,,,, BEAUTIFUL ,,,,,,, SUPERB UPDATE!!!!!!!!! LOVED IT TO THE CORE
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Gr8 work yr
Such an emotional nd amazing story


Loved it

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