Wedding Drabble - Updated!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Everyone, My name is Noor and I just came up with this drabble due to my disappointment with Gul which stems from me being an Intersectional feminist. For once, I could really relate to Anika's character and I hate seeing Anika this way. I should be writing my essay for class, but instead I wrote some fanfic drabble for the first time. I'm sorry for it being shitty and not edited - I would love some feedback!






She stood there hugging Dadi trying to tell her that it was her, Anika. Not wanting to let go as the wedding rituals had come to an end. She was trying to find solace in hugging the woman that had given her so much love, support, and care in the past few months. She wanted to cry out as Dadi backed away from the hug, giving her her blessings

"Tum dono ki Jodi, rab humesha banaye rakhe"

She choked back a sob at those words, wanting to run away from it all. Yes she had loved Shivaay, begged him to say what he wanted to say a few hours ago, but this - this isn't what she had envisioned or what she had ever wanted for her future. This marriage - was it even right to call it a marriage?

A marriage, where he thought she drove away his Lady Baba due to her "obsession" for him. He found her there, in the room that Tia was supposed be in, with Tia's goodbye note in her hand which blamed Anika. To say that Shivaay had lost it then, would be an understatement. The fury that was unleashed on her - he took her Sahil, her anchor, her family, and blackmailed her into marrying him. It was Anika who was broken - not the furniture and dressing room that Shivaay had torn apart hours earlier. It was Anika who had been chased, blackmailed, and torn down. It was Anika who had told Shivaay that if life couldn't tear her down, then who the hell was he? And yet it was Shivaay who broke her - the same Shivaay she loved, trusted, and let into her heart.

Anika was broken, but Anika will rise. For the world, the couple had taken seven vows, but Anika had taken one - and that was to make Shivaay pay, and pay he will.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautifully written! Do write more, Noor. Maybe continue this one...would love to know how Anika holds her own.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Brilliant..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thank you so much!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thank you so much for your words!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: twerping

Beautifully written! Do write more, Noor. Maybe continue this one...would love to know how Anika holds her own.


thank you so much for your kind words, they mean a lot!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A year, it had been a year since the wedding - hers or Tias, she still couldn't tell

Anika stripped out of Tia's wedding dress - or was it her own wedding dress, and changed into her old green suit. She gave Tia her wedding dress, and made her way out of Shivaay's bathroom and bedroom without making eye contact with either Tia or her Shivaay Baby. She crossed the hallway to the room where Sahil was held captive. She found him, on the bed sleeping after he had clearly cried himself to sleep. There were bruises on his arm from where Shivaay's men had grabbed him, and tears ran down her eyes. She had vowed to keep him safe and happy - she failed, she failed because she had fallen in love with Shivaay Singh Oberoi and this had ruined her, but enough was enough. She picked Sahil up in her arms and left without saying goodbye to any member of the Oberoi household. She sold her house and managed to get a good amount of profit which allowed her to pay Dadi back for all her loans and still save money. She moved to Delhi where she set up both of her businesses, Sahil's Fun Caf for Kids, and her even planning business. It had taken a while for her to get on her feet, but once she did, there was no turning back. She had managed to get herself into night classes to finally educate herself, get Sahil into Delhi's best school, and to buy them a 4 bedroom house in a bustling neighbourhood of Delhi. Dadi had pleaded with Anika before she moved her to come back to the mansion - for her true bahu to come to the mansion but Anika never gave in. Anika wasn't her bahu, she was a pawn in Tia's game and a rag doll in Shivaay's. Besides, she didn't have the naam, khoon, khandaan he always seemed to gloat about.

It was a mildly chilly November afternoon when Anika sat down with a warm cup of hot chocolate and her favourite biscuits, basking in the sunlight as she turned on the news, and what was on managed to make her spit out her hot chocolate all over her yellow blouse and giggle at the catastrophe that had just hit her, mmm "husband".

" Daksh Khuranna comes forward as Tia Singh Oberoi's First Husband"

Edited by zeherili - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely little piece. Very touching.. ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update! Now that is more like what a normal person would do! Love you for writing this. Her refusal.to be the pawn in the hands of these carelessly cruel people is such a welcome comfort!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing update... if yr gonna end this at a good note for shivika and get them together then make shivaay cry...

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