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preity_d

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: kusharberry
preity i know this story
i really loved this its just awesome
plzz do continue soon

I know that u know 🤣 have seen ur likes in that story 😳 Hve mde some changes in this story though 😳 Updating

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preity_d

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: chaturchipkali
awesome prologue prietu 😊
continue soon
anikara married..
Murder mystery n thriller m excited .
ye vala pehle kis couple ke lie likha tha??

Bu yeh prologue ni chapter th 😆 Thnks yr, hoping to do justice with the genre in this story 😕

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#23

Originally posted by: chaturchipkali
ketu maine v do tin bar padha .. bahut complex type ka h , intriguing maja aaega

u two r amazing 🤣

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Frozen.K
Tu ne Anika ko Omkara ki wife banadiya Preity 🤣 Ab tu bohot pitne wali Hali hai 🤣 Jokes apart good one though 😆

😈 haan 🤣 tu pakadne se pehle me skate wali khargosh jaise bhaag jayungi 😉 Thanks yaar 😳

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#25

Originally posted by: twerping
Brilliant concept! I almost felt like I had stepped into a Ruth Rendell novel! Can't wait to know further...
who is this modern day Jack the ripper?!

And will our SSO be able to track him down?

And do these three have a shared past? Can't wait to know...

Ri, thank u for introducing me to Ruth Rendell ... Will read her works now... 😳 n mere jaisi chote mote ko un logo k aaspas mat la 🤣

Thnk u 😳 next is coming 😳

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#26

Originally posted by: lucky_princess
Priety...this one also love triangle...
Well it's intresting...really intresting...
So Shivaay is an private detective...
Nd AniKara r husband nd wife...
Maybe past mein ShivIka loved each other...
Welll continue sooon

Love Sharmi

Thnks... pta nai ku triangle aa rahe hain sab dekh tu aage aage 😆 THanks yaar 🤗

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preity_d

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#27

Chapter : 2

"Mrs.
Omkara Singh Oberoi?"Private investigator SSO called out.

She
looked back at them with an inquiring look."Yes"they
heard her reply.

"How
are you feeling now pretty lady?"Martin asked her.

Anika
rolled her eyes on him and Shivay signaled Martin to stop.

"Mrs.
Oberoi, are you feeling better now?"he asked concerned.

"Hmm.
Better"she
left a sigh."But how I came here?"she enquired.

"We
found you at Roseberry point near Davidson Street"Martin informed.

"Where
is my husband? Is he alright?"she asked hurriedly.

"They
are calling him. He will be here within minutes I guess"assured Shivay.

"Why?
Where he went?"She
said puzzled.

"He
was with you?"Shivay
again asked little worried.

"Of
course, we were returning from his colleague's house"she answered.

"But
we found you al-'"Martin spoke.

"Erm
Mrs. Oberoi, he will be here within moments, you take rest"Shivay said cutting
Martin and dragging him out of the room. "But, tell me where is he? He
is fine or not? What's wrong?"she shouted from behind.

"Everything
is fine, have patience Madam"Shivay looked back and ordered. His
voice calm yet powerful.

***

"Shivay,
why didn't you ask her anything?"Martin asked him.

"You
forgot what Doc said, she is pregnant, don't stress her. Tell me if you have
any news related to Om?"

"No,
not yet. He is not receiving any calls. The nurse tried him twice"

"Did
you try once?"

"No,
the nurse tried so I..."

"Give
me the number"

"Okay"Martin gave him the
number.

He
dialed the number. It was ringing.

"Hello"he heard a female
voice.

"Hello
is this Omkara Singh Oberoi's number?"he asked politely.

"Who
are you? Anyone from his work?"she asked in hope.

"You
guessed it right."He tried to know more.

"Is
he with you? Give the phone to him. I am his wife"she pleaded on the
verge of cry.

"His
wife?"he
whispered in shock.

"Isn't
it Omkara Oberoi's mobile number?"Shivay asked again in disbelief.

"It
is. But today he left if home. By the way who are-'"she tried to ask.

"Will
call you later"he
disconnected.

***

She
opened her laptop, after coming back home, depressed and worried.

5
messages from Liquid sulfur.

She
opened the chat box and pinged him.

***

Tiring,
a sound came from his laptop. He casually glanced over it.

Midnight
star messaged. He hurriedly opened the chat box

Hi' her message.

Hey' he pinged back.

He
waited eagerly for her reply. But there was no reply.

Hey what happened? You are okay?' He typed

I am scared' midnight star

Why'reply from Liquid sulfur.

Dunno, feeling like I lost someone close-midnight star

And from where these kind of feelings arecoming?' he typed.

Dunno, it's like.. the weather is also cloudy. Look at
the stars, sulfur, in your Mumbai sky, if you find one' midnight star

Hmm...What if I say I am in your country?' Liquid sulfur

Then I will not beam like a teenage girl and ask you to
meet me-midnight
star

I know' Liquid sulfur

But it's great. As we are not living in two different
time zones so now I won't have to spoil your sleep with my messages'midnight star

You are sounding low'Liquid sulfur

I can't afford to lose him, sulfur'midnight star

***

She
can't lose him. He knew there was someone in her life, but every time she
mentioned him, his heart ached.

You will find him, night. Have faith in your love'Liquid sulfur

Hmmph, how do you understand me so well?'midnight star

Erm, an urgent call, brb in 5 minutes'Liquid sulfur

"Hello..."Okay Martin. I will
be there within 1 hour."

He
came back hurriedly, to see if she messaged something.

Have to go sulfur, byee'midnight star

He
left out a sigh.

***

7:30
pm

They
knocked on her door."Open the door"They choruseSAnika nt>

"You
guys?"Anika
opened the door.

"Police.
Need to talk to you. Urgent"Martin showed his ID card.

"Come"she escorted them
to her drawing room. Martin started asking her small small questions and Shivay
was investigating the room. There was a laptop in the table. It's open. He went
to see.

"We
were then at Mr. Keller's house. She and my husband were talking about some their
work and all, so I was enjoying the rain at the veranda. Suddenly Om came
running'"

Shivay
hurriedly stepped towards her, to listen to the story carefully.

"He
grabbed my wrist and started running. It was all so sudden; I don't know why he
did that. We sat in our car and he drove off. How many times I told him, don't
drive so fast'"she
stopped. Tears were glistening in her eyes.

"Then
suddenly our car collided with the rocks. But we were safe, He ran towards the
forest. He said me to follow him. I followed. Don't know anything after
that'''."She
paused."May be I got unconscious after all the running"she
said again.

"After
that your husband got missing?" Shivy sked.

"Missing?...
Yeah!" she weakly answered.

We
have to search your room. Specially his documents"Shivay told.

"I
should file a report of him missing"she told.

"Sure,
but you have to wait till tomorrow. After 12 hours we can write the missing
report"Martin
told.

"But..."she tried to speak

"Don't
worry Mrs. Oberoi. We already started our work, see"said Shivay to
assure her.

They
looked through possibly each and everything in their house. Shivay took some
files with him. They went at the entrance. Anikacame to see them off. They got
into their car. She was still in front of the main gate, beside a fur tree.
Martin started the engine. Thud a sound came."Ahhh"She
screamed and fell on the ground.

They
got out of their car and ran towards her. Shivay took her head on his lap.
Blood was oozing from her head. There was a sharp branch of a tree, fallen
beside her. He took the branch with his unoccupied hand. There were blood
stains on it.

"Chase,
the attacker must be still near us" He shouted. Martin faded away in the
darkness. He took her shaken body in his arms. She was very much shocked,
afraid. He carried her towards her house. He placed her on the couch of her
drawing room. He was about to leave her body, she held his collar tight. Her
eyes were glistening in fear.

"We
are here. Don't worry."He cooed softly to make her relax.
She pulled her hands back, not convinced fully.

"Shivay,
caught him"Martin
said entering the room.

"Don't
let him enter. Stay with him outside. I am coming"Shivay told and
marched out.

***

Shivay
grabbed the suspect's collar and punched on his face hard.

"Who
send you?"he
demanded.

"I
didn't do anything. Believe me"he started crying hiding own
face."Where did you find him?"Shivay asked Martin.
He was running there on the road.

"I
was running because of my wife. She threw me out of the house as I lost 50 dollars
in race and..and she sent our dog Alexander behind me"he confessed while
crying.

Shivay
left his collar and gave a bloodshot glare to Martin."You should have
searched for him in the forest"he roared.

"Oh,
yeah and leave you to do some romance with the lady! You are using your chances
huh?"Martin
roared back.

Taken
aback Shivay told to the suspect, "Still, you have to come to the police
station Mister" gesturing Martin he said, "You go with him in the police
station, I will take her to the hospital, she is bleeding." Martin rolled his
eyes angrily on him before taking the suspect with him.

***

"Thank
you Sir, for allowing a private investigator to do work with you all"Shivay told to a
senior officer with awe.

"Mr.
Oberoi, we know your career graph. You are genius, even we are fortunate that
you are working with us" He said back."But tell me why
you guys are thinking that the serial killer case has some link with this Omkara
missing case?"he asked.

"We
are not sure about that but..."Martin started

"I
have found something."Shivay said while handing over the officer
a file.

"Sketches
of the victims from Omkara's cupboard, exactly how they were murdered?"he exclaimed.

"Strange,
when we have not disclosed any photographs with the public? How he managed to
draw these?"
the officer exclaimed looking at the sketches.

"That
too, very crucially detailed. Public knows how the killer is killing, like
damaging the face, but how he knows that there is the same wound in every
victim's face?"
Shivay shared.

"Oh
My God!" Martin
exclaimed.

"Yes,
and I guess there's some serious crime is going to happen. We have to find whom
they chose as next victim, before finding the culprit"Shivay stated.

"The
lady, Omkara's wife. Is she okay now?"officer asked.

"Yes,
she has to stay in the hospital for tonight. I think you will do anything for her
security." shivay asked.

"I
will manage one lady constable for her."

"All
right."Shivay
uttered.

***

They
left the officers cabin.

"So,
Omkara is the culprit?"Martin told.

"No,
this is not this much easy, we can't say he is the culprit with only this much evidence"Shivay answered.

"Hmm,
so?"Martin
asked.

"Omkara,
her loving husband will try to kill or hurt her? Confusing'"Shivay expressed
his feelings though deep down he thought about the other lady, another Mrs.
Oberoi, with whom he spoken over the phone.

"Do
you think Anika is hiding something from us?"Martin asked.

"May
be"washis
answer.

**********************************

-Night?

-You
are okay?

-Gd
ni8'

Sulfur
sent three messages with 30 minutes gap that night. No reply.

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Edited by preity_d - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Uribbas! So eventful! Ok, so SSO is working with the police force in this case.

Martin doesn't seem to like him all that much 😉

Anika doesn't remember how she got injured. Omkara is missing and has another wife??

Anika and SSO are chat friends. 😳

Oh lord, and now Omkara is a prime suspect.

Are Shivay and Om related?

Please update soon! This was brilliant!

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strangerthings

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

wow so the intrigue level is increasing in manifolds..its becoming more interesting,right now all plot seem to be tangled with each other, ani om married,om has other wife,sso ani chat friends..
quite interesting.. om kara pr shak to jana hi tha but don't know if he is the murderer,n that grim reaper hmmm who can be that??
continue soon