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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi friends.i hv admired neha as Tamatar in qubool hai and really like leenesh as rudra..I actually like rumya more than other couples so wud like to start a new OS..hope u ppl would like it

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Posted: 9 years ago
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OS kitthe hai??? jaldi post karo.. waiting eagerly.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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plz write and post it soon yar
i love them too
i wrote a SS on them plz check it out :
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4696498

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Here's my os on rumya...
"Com'mon sumo..do you really have to go???"complained Rudra in a childlike voice.
"ya rudy..my mother's health is not good..and she doesn't want to leave my native place..so I m going there..but don't you worry..v l always be friends"justified soumya. She herself was not happy leaving the college mid term and especially rudy..after all she was so in love wid him..
R:"Will I get to see you someday??"
S:"Of course rudy..i m not going to die..i l be on this planet only..and Ganpati Bappa ne chaha to hum zarur milenge."
Rudra just shuddered at even the thought of sumo mentioning about her death..she was the only person other than shivay and om with whom he bared all his emotions..mayb even closer than them..becoz she knew his insecurities as well.
R: I l miss you yaar
S: I l miss you too...I will never forget you
And saumya left the house..he never knew when he started crying..and from that day on he never felt the same..something went missing...gone with the paratha girl.
5 YEARS LATER
Rudra Oberoi, the CEO of Oberoi group of companies.so high up in position but so lonely...
Shivay had left his share as he was fully distressed after the fact that Anika's parents were killed by Tej and Shakti..Om could not even bare the thought of sharing same room with them..and so he also went..Both of them had settled in their respective lives with their partners ..only rudy was left so clueless..he had completed his graduation and had immediately become the CEO..
Everday he used to get up, go to office and come back home like a robot..the elders also had their respective differences flared up..he was alone..Everyday he used to be judged for making a decision, of matching upto the splendor of Shivay oberoi..he just laughed at the thought.. he could never reach upto it and he never wanted to either..
That day had again started like the same...only today he felt different..while getting ready he wanted to wear suddenly his lucky vest...while searching for it he found a beautiful watch..it was gifted by saumya..even the thought of her made him feel a little alive..because he knew that somewhr theres a person whom he could trust and not be judged..shivay and om had emotionally distanced themselves from him and each other..
His secretary had called him regarding an interview..he hated giving those boring and monotonous interviews..however something told him that he should definitely give this one..
As he reached the news office he was cordially greeted ...and informed that a guest editor is going to take his interview..as he was sitting waiting for the interview to begin..staring at nothing he sensed her...saumya.. he could tell her presence from far and as he looked up he found her ..with her ever elegant smile..to he say he was stunned would be an understatement...he was bowled over..she was looking more beautiful than ever...and wearing an elegant salwar suit...she looked just the same ...time had just added to her beauty..
S: Oye protein shake will you just stare or give me a hug????
And rudra felt the ultimate happiness in such a long time...
R: Sumo u r back????

To be continued..

Please do tell me how you like the story



INDEX
PART 1 PAGE 1
PART 2 PAGE 2
PART 3 PAGE 2
Edited by malla88 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@fundy hi yr..your ss is really good..i read all the chapters in one go😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gr8 start yaar...would love to read more on rumya dear...pls update soon n if possible pm me pls👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg!!!!
Lovely!!!!!!!
Just beautiful!!!
I am really excited
Plzzz cont ASAP
Its exciting
Poor Rudy boy
I wish he gets his bestiee back!!

P.s Tamatar is always loved!! I miss her...she is nailing it as Saumya...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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os updated

Saumya: Yes rudy..i m back..i m the guest editor who is supposed to take your interview..and winks.

Rudra almost ran and hugged her..hugged her so tight as if his life depended on it. She had worn her all time favorite rose flower smell..smell that evoked so many emotions in him that he came on verge of tears..

S: Rudy hey ... I missed u so much.

R:Why dint u tell me that u came back??

S: coz I came yesterday only..dint even unpack my things...and she made such a cute face that rudra felt like kissing her on the cheek..wait what kissing????rudra was shocked at his thought process..get a hold on urself rudra..its just becoz u have seen her after such a long time..

R: Oh no prob.. I l help u unpack

S: that's so sweet..but thank u..

Just then one of the cameraman came and announced to start rolling...

Both of them took their seats and started the interview..rudra dint even realize wen the interview finished..he felt so much at ease..

S: Chal yr I l take your leave..i l see u soon

R: sumo whr is ur mother ???and whr r u staying???

S: Aai is no more rudy..she passed away last yr..and I have rented an apartment ...it's a 2 bedroom flat..

Rudra stared at her..heres a person who has lost so much in life and is still standing so tall..i m sorry sumo..i dint knw

S: no rudy..its ok.life should go on..that house is enough for me and sandy

R: sandy???...was he her husband???

S: Sandy my tortoise..

rudra felt so relieved as if he had won a war.."why don't u stay wid me???"

Sumo looked at him questioningly..

R: I mean at oberoi mansion

S: No thanks rudy..thats v kind of u but I still would like to be on my own..

And with that she went..rudra felt a warmth spreading throughout..."I l never let u b alone"he thought

Seeing rudra after such a long time made her smile and cry at the same time..happiness of meeting him again and sadness at his loneliness..she had watched him enter the room..he had looked so lost..so lonely..she knew the famous oberoi split..the news channels had made it all too public..she just felt bad..bad for not being with him all that time.." I m here now rudy.. I l never let u be alone"

Days had passed..his meeting with sumo had made him a little more happy..but with this nw project on the head he was not able to contact her..sumo sahi kehti thi mai sach me duffer oberoi hun..at least no.to le leta..

Just then his secretary came " Sir there s a certain saumya who would like to meet you"

Rudra snapped his head and almost yelled at her"What is she doing outside..escort her in..she doesn't need any permission ...EVER..got it"...

Sheena his secretary got stunned for a moment..she had never seen him like this..she had been trying to entice him for so long..and this certain saumya had such a easy pass.."I should be careful from her"

Saumya entered rudy s cabin and was stunned..beautifully decorated with exquisite taste paintings..however what caught her attention was the endless no. of photos in a collage..of rudy and his bros...few of them had her also..

R:"These are my precious gems...you and my bros"

S: that is so sweet rudy..anyways I was going for lunch so I thought I would invite you also..but since your big project was coming so I brought lunch for u...

R: how did u knw abt the project??

S:everybody in the corporate world knows it dumb bell oberoi...

R: hmm I guess..so what did u get???paratha??and he winked

S: no rudy.. I l eft eating paratha..kind of reminds me of my mother..

Rudra went to her and hugged her..he could sense her trying to control herself..such a pure soul

R: hmm so can v start with the Chinese???

S: yes v can and v shall...

To be continued...

I wish to get some feedback and some ideas for further story progression..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Super nice!.
I love reading on "rumya" because find them very adorable.. sorry no ideas though..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's really nice...update soon😛

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