||Ishqzaade|| Ishqbaaz SS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello everyone, I really love this show. This is my attempt at writing a short story on the Ishqbaaz couples. Shivika, Ishkara and Roumya being the main couple. We'll see Shakti and Pinky, Tej and Jahnvi too.
I also have added a few new characters. Here's their Character Sketch.

Kunal Raichand
He is a student in Soumya's college who likes her and wants to get her. He's very violent and hates Rudra because he is his rival at college. He's also a greedy person who would leave no opportunity to grab a huge deal. He, unlike Rudra, is in his father's business.

Aakash Mehta
He is Shivaay's business rival. He also hates Shivaay personally. He wants to break the Oberois apart because he knows that their unity is their strength. He also knows Swetlana. His prime motive to to erase Oberois from his competition. He is known to go to any lengths to get what he wants.

Kashish
She is Ishana's mother who is distant from her daughter. Still Ishana loves her mom and does a lot for her. She takes care of her. She's a greedy woman who will do anything for money.


Prologue

"Thankyou, Omkara Singh Oberoi, mujhe yeh batane ke liye ki meri kya haisiyat hai. I never imagine you would do all this. Arey yaar, tumhare liye khud ko badal diya par akhir mein sirf dhoka hi Mila. Omkara Singh Oberoi, aaj tumne prove kar diya ki zindagi Mein pyaar sabse bada jhoot hai. I'll regret ever falling in love with you. Thankyou ki kamsekam abhi toh yeh pata chala ki sacchai kya hai. Meri life ko hi barbaad kar diya." A teary eyes Ishana lashed out on Omkara. All the Oberois present in the room are shocked. Om did not understand what he did. She wiped her tears and stood in front of Om

"Aaj se tumhara mujhse koi wasta nahi hai. Na hi mera tumse koi rishta." She said and walked away. Shivaay was shocked that Ishana said it to Om. He knew that she loves Om a lot. Rudra was beyond shocked. He believed that Om couldn't even hurt a fly, hurting Ishana was far away. Ishana and Om had got quite close to each other. Ishana apologized to Om for breaking his trust and Om forgives her. The two then get closer to each other.
Om was the person who was most shocked. What did he do? Why was Ishana so mad at him? There has to be a misunderstanding.
"Ishana, I didn't do anything." Om said in his defense.
"Don't play the innocent tag, Mr Oberoi. Mere pass proof hai ki tumne his mom ko mujhse dur kiya hai. You told mom ki maine unke deal ko tudwaya hai. Mere pass proof hai." She thew a cd on the floor. The Oberois watched Ishana walk out of the mansion.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am eagerly waiting for your update please pm me if you update any sooner... :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1
Ab Bhi Taaza Hain Zakhm Seene Mein,
Bin Tere Kya Rakha Hain Jeene Mein,
Hum To Zinda Hain Tera Sath Paane Ko,
Warna Der Kitni Lgti Hai Zaher Peene Mein.

Omkara sat near the window in his room. He had recently watched the cd, Ishana left on the floor. It was a video of him talking to Ishana's mom that Ishana caused the failure of the deal her mother was trying to get. He was mad at it.
"Yeh sabh jhoot hai. I can never stoop so low. How can you believe this fake video, Ishana? Tumhe mujhse zyaada is fake video pe yakeen hai?" Om said messing up his room badly. Shivaay and Rudra walk into the room.
"Om, she has a reason to. Us fake video mein Tu real lag raha Tha. Galti uski nahi hai. I'll find out Ki ismein kiska haath hai. Mujhe heartbreaks pata hai... Same happened with Ani.." Shivaay choked on the last words. Rudra pulled both his brothers in a hug.
"She was my everything. I could never imagine kabhi usse dur ho jaaunga." Shivaay said.
"Mujhe bhi abh yahi lagta hai. I mean, she was in love,with me? Mujhe yeh pata nahi Tha but surely she was close to me. " Om said.
"I promise ki jab tak tum dono Ki love story set nahi kar dunga na...tabh tak kisi bhi ladki ko date nahi karunga. Billu bhaiya how can you sit like this...Anika meri bhabhi hai. Koi aur ladka usse aapse dur nahi kar sakta." Rudra said.
"Rudy, yeh pyaar hai jismein you can't see your loved ones in pain. I can't hurt Anika. Baat Sahil Ke life Ki hai." Shivaay said.
"We need to find out kisne yeh fake video banaya hai?" Rudy said.
"Uske baad, usse yeh Ishana ke saamne confess karvana hai aur woh wapas aa jaaegi." Soumya said standing by the door.
"Sumo!!!" Rudra said.
"Haan main. I am with you guys. Anika toh shaadi apni marzi se nahi kar rahi. Uski bua forcefully use yeh shaadi ke liye manaaya hai. She needs to be rescued, Shivaay bhaiya. Woh bohot sad hai." Soumya said. Soumya had contact with Anika but couldn't meet her.
"She doesn't even let me help. Sahil nahi hota toh shayad kabh ka kidnap karwa kiya hota." Shivaay said.
"I have a feeling yeh sabh, I mean Omie bhaiya ka fake video, Anika Ki shaadi...yeh sabh ek hi insaan kar raha hai." Soumya said.
"You're right. Abh jab tumne point out kiya hai toh I feel it too." Shivaay said.
"Akal Ki baat Ki hai, Sumo. Congrats." Rudra teased her.
"Shut up." Soumya said. The four sat together and thought about who could do this.


***______****
Jahnvi was sitting in her room pacing angrily. She had a doubt that it was her husband's plan. Dadi entered the room.
"Bete, shaant ho jaa. Kya Hua?" Dadi said and Pinky entered the room too.
"Oh my Mata, jethani ji. Aap agar aise gussa rahengi toh hum bacchon ki helps kaise karenge? Aap shaant ho jaaiye." Pinky said.
"Pinky, mujhe yeh lagta hai Ki hum dono ke bacchon ki life Mein kaanta Tej hi hain. Business ke liye woh Kuch bhi Kar sakta hai...yeh baad tumse chupi nahi hai. Mujhe toh lagta hai woh fake video bhi Tej ne banwaya hai. Anika Ki bua ko bhi Paise Tej ne hi diye honge." Jahnvi said.
"Bete, mera puttar bohot business minded ho sakta hai par voh itna berehem nahi hai Ki apni bacchon Ki zindagi barbaad kare." Dadi said.
"Mummyji, aap jis Tej Ki baat kar rahe hai woh mar chuka hai. Yeh Tej, stock price ke liye kuch bhi karne ke liye ready hai." Jahnvi said. Just then Tej entered the room and saw all the women there.
"Kyu kiya tumne yeh sabh, Tej?" Jahnvi asked directly.
"Kya?" Tej tried to act innocent.
"Don't play dumb, Tej. Mujhe pata hai Ki tumne hi Ishana aur Om ko alag karvaya hai. Anika ke bua ko bhi tumne his khareeda hai na?" Jahnvi confronted her husband.
"I have reasons, Jahnvi." Tej said sensing that its useless trying to act innocent.
"Tej Singh Oberoi, how dare you? Mere bete ke life decisions lene ka haq tumhe kisne diya? Mujhse puche bina tumne itna bada kadam uthaya. How dare you?" Jahnvi lashed out on him.
"Jahnvi, yeh sabh tumhari samahj ke bahar hai. Stay out of this." Tej said.
"Tej, mujhe divorce chahiye tumse. I had enough of you ruining our marriage, I won't let you ruin my son. Main aur mere bacche abh tumse dur rahenge. Enough is enough." Jahnvi said.
"Jahnvi bete, aisa na kar. Mere bacchon ko aise alag na kar." Dadi pleaded Jahnvi.
"Mummyji, main inhe aur zyada apne bachon ko barbaad karte nahi dekh sakti. Shakti kahan hai?" Jahnvi said. Shakti with her doubted Tej behind all the drama.
"Main papers sign nahi karunga, Jahnvi. Humare business ke liye Maine bohot kuch daav pe lagaya hai." Tej said.
"Tum sign karoge, Tej Singh Oberoi. Main court tak jaaungi." Jahnvi said.
"Jethani ji, mujhe pata hai Ki ek maa ke dil pe kya guzarti hai. Main bhi toh family se dur ho sakti Thi na? Unhone kaha bhi hum apne bachon ke saath alag ho jaaye par woh teeno ek dusre ke jigar ke tukde hai. Om aur Shivaaye dono tut chuke hai." Pinky said in an soft tone.
"Shivaay abhi tak insanses nahi ho gaya hai kyuki usse pata hai Ki uske bhai usse alag nahi honge. Apne pati ke liye na sahi par mere bete ke liye aap mat jaaiye yahan se. Om aur Shivaay dono ka haal ek hi jaisa hai. " Pinky said.
"Haan bete, mere poton ko alag karogi toh toot ke bikhar jaaenge. Tej ke liye na sahi par Shivaay, Omkara aur Rudra ke liye." Dadi said.
"Sirf aapke, Pinky aur mere bacchon ke liye main divorce nahi lungi but soon, Mr Tej Singh Overoi, I and my children will be free of you." Jahnvi said.
"Bachon Ki life ke saath khelna band kardIjiye, bhaisaab." Shakti said before leaving with others.


Hope you all like it. I'll update soon later. Send me buddy request and I'll PM you. Please like and comment.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow awesome update
loved i very much
this tej nah i just hate him
hope shivika and ishkara reunites soon
plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I have read the prologue and part 1 and I LOVED them❤️
Continue whenever you can dear😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Chapter 2 coming soon
Edited by QueenTan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#7
Read the prologue n the first chapter together...
Loved...full of suspense...
Wow ShivOmRuSau...are together...
Anika is forced to marry :(...hope shivaay rok le...
Loved hw janvi lashed out at tej...loved such a strong janvi...
plzzz cont. Soon...
N plzz do pm me if possible...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yaaayyy. Story for rumya too. :)
Loved it. Do continue and PM me soon. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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great parts
loving it
please do continue
bye sumi

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