omkara os: the game of life black & white

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hi peeps
i'm again come with another pakao story
i love writing so i decided to write an os on omkara 😉
he is my favorite character of ib 😳
i want to write about his thought after confrotation
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its my 2nd os in this forum
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avoid spelling mistake story on below
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OM's pov
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l hate lies & the girl whom i considered my friend told lie to me not just once but repeatedly. everything about her is nothing but a lie. I need to calm down. maybe art can help me.
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s tr( so he tried to make a unfinished sculpture. for the 1st time he can't concentrate his work. sculpturing is alwayz sooths me but now i can only remember her betryal. he think maybe he alwayz met her in his art house. he must do something else.
he loves play chess. after art, chess is something he really loved. chess is his favourite game. so many rule. everything is so ordered. all square & black & white.
while playing chess he suddenly realize that chess is also like a con game.
Figure out a strategy carefully, ruthlessly exibit cunning your manoeuvres & you win. but you have to careful everytime. one wrong decision, you'll be checkmated in a blink.
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Take me instance, I used as a pawn by ishana in this game. pawns won't have any power until you give it to them. they r the ones who protect the second lines of pieces & defend & fight most. they r the ones who the powerful ones use. like a pawn ishana give me the power to protect her fakeness. me also protect ishana's lie, defend her when ridhima felt insecure about her & fight for her.
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Then ishana's father, he is like a king. a king must be protected. thats why the king is the last of all the chess piece to move. He remains stationary until attacked directly, safe & protected. Yet the war happens because of him. one wrong action of the king, the kingdom can go to hell. he acts & others reacts. Being a father, he must protect ishana. protect her not to go wrong path, like a wise father he should have told her the discrimination between wrong & ringt instead of helping her get money in wrong way. maybe he was the one who 1st choosr wrong path & to protect him ishana also choose wrong path. after all A KING MUST BE PROTECTED
.bt once the other pieces r out of board, the king is at mercy of the attacked. it's lonely at top. i wish ishana's father understand this fact that maybe oneday ishana is not there to protect himthen he became alone. he have to take a right decision so that he has not lost ishana like a king lost everyone in this game.
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Now ishana, long ago maybe she was a innocent, sweet, pure hearted girl like bela whom she represented to me. then she conned people for money. con showed her a way to getting money which she desperately wanted. she started got this addiction of power. she learned how to fool people, how to scheme trust. & now that sweet innocent WHITE QUEENturned herself to BLACK QUEEN. but she still a queen. the queen maybe WICKED. but believe me you have to got to admire the power of VILLAINS. her force is enigmatic.
but ultimately the queen losses life because she tried too hard to get what she wants not knowing & caring about what the other pieces go through. like QUEEN ISHANA used me OMKARA SINGH OBROI like PAWN not even knowing the day i know her truth what the hell i go through & as a result she lost a true friend forever but losing my friendship, ishana herself behind the reason.
her power is what causes her vulnerability. because a queen herself don't know, how to channalize her power.
lshana's true power is her dance. l see the potential in her. she definitly earn a good name in dance feild if she tries. she should focus her time on dancing instead of conning people.
She loves dancing isn't she?
or maybe it's only to show me.
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when i know about her reality, i was so angry, i ask myself if she want money, then why not she told me that she need money. l happily give her. why she tell me lie? why she make joke my friendship, my trust?
but when she dared to raised question on my family, my brothers i understand why she never ask money instead of conning me. because A QUEEN NEVER BEGS. she gets what she wants. wrong or right doesn't matter to her.
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but the girl I saw who was sitting on staires, whom i talk she is not a queen, she is like a KNIGHT. a knight fights for the war, but never for HIMSELF, for his king. for ishana maybe her king is her family. she loves her family thats why she dared to yelled at me when i raised question on her upbringing where the total fault is her.
outside ishana is a queen but deep her inside she is a knight who never focus on the wounds she gets. just on her goal.
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maybe it's all a darma to trap me
bt the pair of eyes, i saw on thr stairs & last time when she told me 'one day i remembered her' r those also fake.
Maybe yes or maybe not.
only maybe.
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Om smiled at himself
today nothing can soothes his broken trust
not his art or nor the chess.
because tonight everything connected ishana to him.
Those pair of eyes tonight haunted him.

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