Shivika SS : Turning Point ( ch 12 page 20) 24 sep - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shivaay and Sahil together...Anika😭..Pls don't kill her...eagerly waiting for your update.
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"Ladies first tou suna hoga " she shouted while driving her scooter in middle of narrow road she look back towards him .Shivaay placed his hand on horn without caring for others

"SSO jitna bajana bajo,aaj mein tumko aaga jaana nahi doon ga " she made sure she drives in middle of narrow road so that he can't overtake

Aaj main aage

SSO becha Shivaay who had lower his window could hear her singing on top of her voice

Aaj mein jeeti , she showed him victory sign

SSO haara he narrowed his eyes and increase the speed he was next to her , he easily could hear her

Tell me oh khuda

Mein SSO ko kaise tang karo She sang on top of her voice

She headed towards a narrow turn a mischief smile appear on her face she hit the brake and stopped her scooter in middle of road


"What the wuck " Shivaay immediately hit the brake " pagal ho kya , abhi accident ho jata " he

shouted as he stopped his brand new car few pace away for her's " i am getting late cant you parked your scooter aside " he shouted she acted as if she had not heard him and took of her chameli and started fixing it,Shivaay in anger step down " today i will throw you , your champa , your chameli and what not down the hill " he walked angrily towards her " OM and Rudru are not here to safe her from me " he took few big steps

" kya hai " Anika asked him as she find me approaching close to her , he didn't said a word picked up her bag which she had kept on road

"Agar kuck kiya mera champa ka saath mein aap ki car ke sab tire puncture kar doon gai " she taken out her hairpin and ran towards his car,Shivaya who was about to throw her bag off hill stopped " dekho mein na tumhara champa chameli rakh diya" he quickly give up he ran towards the car, Anika who was kneeling next to wheel stand quickly , she look at him who was a pace away from her" Roka " she screamed

"dekho mein na tumhara bag rak diya hai now stay away from my car " he held her arm and pull her back to him ,He twirl her around , they both look in each other eyes

" chora muhje ko " she struggle to free herself from his firm grip,,The very next second she placed her both hands on his broad chest and with her full force she pushed him back , he was not ready for such reaction , he fall back in road side grass with a jerk , she managed to maintain her balance, she ran back to car quickly opened the door pull its handbrake, as it was parked on steep it started moving backwards ,with in no time it reached at the edge of hill " have you gone nuts , you are destroying my brand new car " Shivaay put all his weight on his fist and tried to get up from dam grass and mud ,Anika gaze at him and then at his car , Car has stopped on the edge as its wheel was stuck with a stone , Shivaay got up ," Shivaay roka "Anika shouted ran towards the car and push it from its bonnet with her full force , a blast echo in peaceful atmosphere .His car blast before she could push it down the steep hill,Shivaaya stand still in astonishment " Anika " he murmur from his dry lips , he ran towards the spot found her lying lifeless on edge of road " Anni " he knelt down beside her and carefully pull her up in his arms " Anni " he huskily call her with his shaky hands he caress her wounded face " Anika " he murmur and held her fist to check her pulse " you will be fine , can you hear me " he almost shakes her lifeless body

" I am calling for chopper " he searched for his cell in his pocket while make her head rest on his thigh ,he took off his jacket and cover her with it" we will reach hospital in few minutes " he panicky said , he dialed for chopper , and then to Om

" Anika " he could not complete his sentence as he heard Om teasing him from other end " Phir naam liya "

" she is injured " he shouted from other end ,he pull her up next to him and made her sit supporting him " tum na abhi challenge nahi jeet suna tum na" , and throw his cell " Anni get up or i will throw your things down the hill " he rub her cold hand next to his face . " I know you can hear me , see helicopter is here " he heard it hovering over their head , he swiftly picked her up , carrying her next him he walked to opened place , chopper landed he quickly climb in with her , " get her everything to home " he asked his staff before it flow back in in air " few more minutes we will reach hospital " he murmur while placing mask on her mouth , he felt she tried to opened her eyes

" Shiv " she murmur in weak voice , he could not hear her due to chopper noise , he lend down next to her lips ,she slowly opened her eyes , find him staring at her , she tried to move mask from her face with hand, he nod his head and held her hand her fingers entwined with his, her eyes smile at him and suddenly it turn dark with pain .

" Shivaay Sahil " she placed her hand over his bread ,he nod she gently caress as if she made promise She tried to run her hand over her head , he saw a smile on her lips, same spark in her eyes ,she failed her hand fall down rested on his heart ,she slowly closed her eyes" Anika " he jolt her with his full force again " dont sleep "


In Hospital

Shivaay was impatiently waiting out side OP when OM and Rudra reached at site " bring Sahil here but take guards with you " he said and started walking

" bhai yeh huwa kaise " they asked him , he raised his hand and shakes his head as he was not in state to reply any of there questions


After 3 hours

"Om i want to say thanks to Anika for saving my life "he said huskily as Om stand next to him and forward him glass of water, He with hand moved his hand aside and walked to Sahil who was sitting on bench all alone

"Anika di ko andhere se daar lagta hai " he said to Shivaay"Kya aap ko bhi aise lag raha hai Di hum se door ja rahi hai " he he place his tiny hand over his heart like few hours back Anika kept, Shivaya hug him in his arms , Anika last words echo in his ear " Shivaay Sahil " he could still feel her last caress over his beard as she asked him to promise her

"Maa Papa ki tarah Anika di bhi mujh ko chor kar chali gai "Shiver ran down Shivaay spin with the thought

" Anika di is a fighter , woh andhere se lar lagi " he murmur

OM and Rudra look at each other

" wasie bhi she knows we both are out here with her " he gave Sahil weak smile

" Anika di ko pata hai ka hum yahan hain " Sahil asked him cutely he nod " you go with Rudra home mein yahan hoon " Shivaay said as he find Sahil tired

" aap un ko akela nahi chora ga " he asked him

" nahi " Shivaay said

"Pinky promise " he offer his pinky to him Shivaay with his pinky held it

" Anika Di Promise " he smiled at him and wiped off his tears " you will stay with Rudra till your Anika di come back home" he told him , Rudra picked him up in his arms and walked out

OM walked to him and sat next to him , at same time nurse came with a packet , before Om could take from her ,Shivaay forward his hand, at once he opened it and taken out her bracelet "it has 5 moons where is one " he checked his wrist watched , and then his shirt , OM closely watched him , he found it stuck in his shirt ,he carefully taken it out and fixed it ,he placed it back in the packet and put it in his pocket as if it belong to him only

"Why they are taking it so long ?" he again stand and started walking in corridor

"Bhai coffee " Om forward him cup as he had found him rubbing his forehead

" not right now Om " he refused to take it

" Bhai you know Anika di ka koi nahi hai Sahil ka sawa , un ka khayal hum sab ko

rakhna hai "Om said in low voice , Shivaay took it from him , he took one sip a weak smiled appear on his lips as he recollect Anika and his encounter


"Who is Shiv among you guys " Nurse walked out and ask them


Shivaay give Om back the cup and walked ahead " ME "

" you come with me "


"Shiv " OM rub his chin

to be continued i could not end it in one chapter , waiting for your comments

readers my mom recently had brain hemorrhage she is paralyzed i am busy with her ,i will add next chapter at my earliest please bear it 😳 you all know i love to write

Edited by naddiya26 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res😛 UnRes...Not fair Naddiya...cliffhanger!! Loved their nokh johk...its so typically the way Annika winds him up. So it looks like she saved his life yet again...didn't she...but this time hopefully not at the cost of her own life!! Plz don't make this a tragic story!!
Edited by --Nargis-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update
Loved it
Awww So Anika tried to balance the car but it blast on her
Shivaay is shocked
He quickly calls chopper and OM takins her to hospital
Brilliant part
Superb
Aww Shivay is so scared and is shivering
OM and rudra brings Sahil to hospital
Aww poor Sahil he is so scared
Thinks even she will leave him
Love how Shivay tries to console him and assure him that Anika is a fighter
she knows he and her brother are outside there for her
he asks him to go home and promises to be with her and even does pinky promise err I mean Anika promise
OM tells him they have to take care of her as she has no one
At last she gain conscious?
Nurse calls out to him as Shiv awww (my dream thank you for including this)
OM surprised and curious
Very emotional one
Thanks for updating
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Brilliant update dear...
Loved it..
Pls dont make it a tragic one...pls...
Its an awesome story nd u shudnt do this...
Lovely..loved Shivaay's concern for her.
Love Sharmi
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Originally posted by: shail_j15

Nice teaser...please update soon and do pm me

i dont pm bookmark it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice story...why did you stop yaar...continue ahead...please update soon
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Originally posted by: --Nargis--

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Res😛UnRes...Not fair Naddiya...cliffhanger!! Loved theirnokh johk...its so typically the way Annika winds him up. So it looks like she saved his life yet again...didn't she...but this time hopefully not at the cost of her own life!! Plz don't make this atragic story!!</font>

so that you wait to read next chapter 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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read the 2 parts in one go awesome updates loved the scenes between anika and shivaay and shivaay is taking care of anika was so sweet pls continue soon




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Shivaay walked in with the nursing staff the room was dark, he could see her lying in center of room under surgical light, Doctors and nurse staff were gather around her, he felt suffocated and weak in his knees ,he wanted to turn around and run out of room as he was not ready for any bad news

" Chala " staff turn back and asked him

Shivaay clenched his fist and drag his feet towards the center , with every step he skip a beat . he closed his eyes as reached close to the table

"Shivaay " he heard his name murmur in a familiar voice ,he slowly opened his eyes , he had a glimpses of her as staff moved a side , he took a deep breath and rush to her side

" are you Shivaay ?" the Dr asked , he nod "every time she gainconscious she murmur your name " he said ,Shivaay mesmerized her pale face ,he saw nurse wiping her wounds , her right arm was plaster he could see burns and bruises on her arm , her face , his vision became burl ,he blink tears run down his eyes , this was the first time he was crying for anyone other than his family , he didn't bother to wipe it he stared at her in amazement ,
" you come here " Dr asked him to come closer to her as he saw her moving her head again , Shivaay stand next to her
" Were you with her at time of accident ?" Dr asked him ," that is why she is so restless " he nod he could not take eyes his off her without blinking he continuously staring at her waiting for her to open her eyes " i think she is scared " he said and stitched her wound as the needle pierce her skin " sss" Shivaay murmur
" unconditional love " he said and cut the thread ,Shivaay wanted to correct him but he could not as she moved again
" Anika " he placed his palm on her forehead and gently caress her cheek
" she will gain conscious soon , make sure she rest and don't stress herself , she is weak at present " he said and walked away from them , he look at her she was fast a sleep , his hand palm was stuck between her cheek and pillow he smiled
" Sir we will shift mama in room " guy walked to him and said , he nod and gently pull out his hand , he step back walked beside her

Om rush to him " how is Anika di ?"
" she is fine " he said ,he pat his shoulder and walked next to her to the room , Om in shock look at him he was himself helping the staff , as they walked out of room he look at Om " you go home tell everyone Anik is fine " he said
" Bhai you go home i can stay with her here " Om said
" Omkara do as i say ,i am staying here " he said in a firm voice and fixed her blanket
Dr walked in room
" it is a miracle she is not badly injured, as what you have told us we thought she must be having multiple fractures" he said
" why she fainted ?" Shivaay asked him
" because of fear she became unconscious ,nothing serious we have done her all the tests,she only need bed rest " Dr said
" we can take her home in morning?" Om asked him
" no not that soon we are keeping her under observation for next 48 hours then we will decide, and it will be better if anyone of you stay here with her and let her rest , she will recover soon " he checked her , he smiled at Shivaay and walked out
" Why he smirk at you ?" Om asked him
" Go ask him why you are asking me " he said and sat on sofa near her bed
" are you serious ? you are going to stay here " Om asked him again ,he gave him an angry look " aap ka Anika di se revenge lana ka mood tou nahi " Om whispered and asked him frown . " Okay okay mein ja raha hoon , per ghar mein kya bolo " he asked him naughtily , Shivaay cell started ringing he look at number and forward his cell to Om
"Kya " he whispered
" tell her i am asleep " he rested his head with back of sofa and said , OM briefly talked to Tia and return him back his cell " why you avoided her ?" he asked him
" right now i want to be alone " he said
" huwa kya tha " Om asked him while looking at Anika
"Like always she was in teasing mood not letting me overtake her , she parked her scooter in middle of road , i walked to move it ,she ran towards my car to take puncture the wheels , there she saw bomb " he paused
" it blast at that very moment " Om curiously asked him
" go home" Shivaay at once stand and walked to other side of room , he started looking out of the window , he waited till he heard the door was closed back , he walked back to her " why you risked your life" he murmur and fixed her hairs and caress her wound

Om look him through the door



At Home

Dadi rush to him " Anika kaise hai ?" she asked him
" woh thek hain " he said and look at others who were waiting for Shivaay " Bhai nahi aaya , woh Anika Di ka saath hospital mein hain" he said
" Shivaay khud kyun roka " Om dad asked him
" because she has risked her life to safe our Shivaay , aur please koi bhai se na pocha ka kya huwa tha" he with eyes asked Rudura to follow him
" Kya huwa " Rudura asked him
"i have never seen bhai like this before " Om said he narrated the whole thing to him
" kya tum bhi woh soch raha ho jo mein soch raha hoon " Rudura asked Om , he nod
" Bhai ko pyar hogaya hai , aur bhai ko pata bhi hai " Om said


At Hospital


Shivaay walked out as Nurse came to attended her , when he walked back in room locking it behind him it was dark a dim night bulb was switched on

"Chutki "she murmur in sleep and shakes her head , she tightly clenched the blanket , she was out of breath , her face was all wet

"Shhh Anika " he lend over her and caress her face wiped away her sweat , she jerk her head violently left to right in sleep she clench her IV tube he sat next to her on bed wrap his arm around her and very carefully frees IV from her firm grip ,their fingers entwined again ,she fall back to sleep he couldn't stop mesmerized her sleeping

" sota huwa kitni " he shakes his head slowly make her rest back to bed , he himself sat on couch placed near her bed ,he was dead tired as he had tough day with in no time he drowse off ,it was hardly few minute he heard her murmuring again " choro chutki ko " she moved and tried to sit "chutki "she screamed. tears were running down her eyes

"Anika " Shivaaya rush to her side " tum hospital mein ho , bura sapna dekha hai tum na " he whispered

He wanted to kiss away her tears and hold her next to him in his strong arms to make her realize she was safe.He find her looking around trying to figure out where she was tried to pick up water from the side table

"Wait " he picked up a glass and pour water as he come close to her she tightly clench her eyes" pani " he smirk and sat next to her bed, and bring close to her lips as the edge brushed her lips she opened her eyes find his intense gaze on her face ,she tries to take it from his hand " mmm " she took a big sip and choked " arama se " he made her rest with the bed back

" Mujhe ko ghar jana hai " She tried get up ,He placed his both hands on her shoulder didn't let her move"you have to stay in bed for next few days don't think of it, Sahil Rudura aur Om ka saath hai " he sat on bedside"sleep you need rest " he said avoid looking at her ,he felt her glance on him " aap yeh sab kyun kar raha hain " she asked him in weak voice,He gave her an intense gaze ,he find her checking him

" kuch nahi huwa hai " his said huskily , he look aside as he again recollected the incident " Anika " he look back at her she was asleep " why you risk your life?"



Happy now comment shall i continue


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