AnShi SS: Staying In Each Other's Company. Finished last chp pg:55 - Page 32

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz

it was totally awesome.
ShivIka ka romance and OmRu ki masti..
wow..
continue sooonish .
thanks for the pm.


Thanks Annika...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update dear
i loved it very much
aww shivika stole my heart
plzzz do continue soon
and thanks for the pm dear😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

So guyz...i am dividing the 15th chp into 3 parts...
My Dear Twerps requested...so this part will be finishing of wid shaadi rituals..nd the part c will be shaadi and 18+ stuff☺️
Here it goes.

Part 15 (B): Mehendi...nd...Sangeet

Shivaay finally succeeded in manaofying his Queen. It was Mehendi today. Nd Anika was super excited...
The arrangements were all ready nd Prinku bought Anika down. She was all smiling nd they made her sit.
Suddenly she felt something. She felt HIM. Her eyes started searching for him. But didnt find him anywhere.
Om nd Rudra came in nd Rudra was ogling at all the young nd beautiful girls. Some gave him positve signs..while some chose to ignore him.

"Wah Didi! Kya kamal lag rahi ho... itni acchi ki aaj na khidki hod..na darwaza thod...ek dum ghar-thod lag rahe ho. Shivaay bhaiyya toh aapko dekh kar crazy hojaayenge. Hain na O?"
"Haan Shivaay toh bahane dhoond raha hoga Anika se milne ke liye..phir Anika ko apne taraf keech lega... aur phir...ahem..ahemm" O said nd OmRu hi fived.
Anika turned a shade of red. Her eyes where down. Nd she was smiling.
"Cut it...tum dono..usse tease karna band karo." Jhanvi said pulling their ears.
"Aah..kya Mom..aapne Choti Mom se seekhi na."
"Kya?" Asked Jhanvi confused.
"Yehi...kaan kheechna". Said Rudra Rubbing his ears.
Pinky nd Jhanvi looked at each other nd laughed.
"Vaise baat tu sahi keh raha hai...Shivaay Anika ko dekhte hi uska O My Maata hojaayega." Said Pinky teasing Anika. All the 4 laughed.
"Chup tum sab. Bacchi ko tang kyun tang kar rahe ho?" Dadi came and sat beside Anika.
"Badi soni lag rahi hai tu puttar. Kisi ki nazar na lage." She said applying a bit of kohl behind her ears.
"Meri mehendi mein..tumhare dadaji mujhe chup chup ke milne aaye the. Aur kaha ki.."Savitri..tumne toh uss chand ko bhi hara diya." Saying so Dadi blushed a little lost in thise beautiful memories.
All smiled at the elderly woman as she narrated her ishqbaazi.
"Tumhare Ishqbaazi bhi shuru..." Nd all smiled. Anika blushed.
All went back to wrk. Nd OmRu were standing aside.

Anika recieved a call.
"Iss tarah sharmao mat! Nazar lag jayegi. Waise jab meri sherni sharmati hai...vo bhi mere naam sunkar toh badi aachi lagti hai. Man karta hai ki tumhe...kuch nahi..rehne do.."
Anika turned all the more Crimson.
She was about to respond wen he cut the call. Now she was pakka sure that he was somewhere here. She looked every place to catch a glimpse of him.
Then she saw him standing at the farthest corner of the hall. Folding his hands nd leaning on the pillar, admiring her all the way. Anika couldnt stop the blood rushing to her cheeks under his constant gaze.
Pinky took the phone from her hands nd asked her to focus as the henna applier had arrived.
"Ab tum dono ka yahan koi kaam nahi...tum dono jao." Pinky pushed her nephews.
"Par choti mom.." rudra Protested.
"Par var kuch nahi...jaanta hun ki tum yahan kyun khade ho..tab se saari ladikyon ko signals de raha hai na. Badmaash. Ab jao."
Nd they were pushed out nd everyone giggled at Rudra while he left pouting.
Her hands were beautifully designed with his name hidden. After some time she felt thirsty nd went to drink water. When she was pulled aside by someone. Anika knew it was him.

She looked at him nd there he was holding her need in his hands. Water.
He made her drink it. She just gulped it down as she was very thirsty. As she finished a drop slid down from the corner of her lips.
Shivaay caught it wid his mouth as it started its way down under her chin. He sucked it all the way up till the corner of her lips. He kissed her there. Anika closed her eyes nd clutched a handful of her dress. She gasped. Shivaay pulled himself back nd saw her. He just couldnt take his eyes of her. She was breathing heavily. Her chest was heaving up nd down. Her cheeks flushed. Nd her angelic eyes started to open slowly. Their gazes met nd the time stopped. Shivaay kept the glass aside nd inched closer.
"Aaj tak paani itna tasty kabhi nahi tha".
Anika blushed furiuosly nd tried to run but was caught by Shivaay nd he pulled her back into his arms nd her back hit his muscled body.
"U just perfectly fit into my arms!" He huskily whispered
His lips brushed her ears.
"Rudra ek dum sahi bol raha tha...ek dum Ghar -thod lag rahi ho."
Anika was melting under the proximity.
He kissed her cheek. Nd let her loose. Anika turned to face him. Both looked at each other. She kept a hand on his shoulder nd kissed his right cheek.
"Thank u..." she whispered.
Shivaay smiled.
"Your most welcome." Now he held her waist. "Par ye thank u kis ke liye hai? Paani keliye, vo..moment keliye ya phir compliment keliye."
He asked her naughtily. She arched one of her eyebrows at him
"Aapko pata nahi?" She questioned him.
"Nahi..." he said absolutely innocent.
"Toh ye samaj lijiye ki ye thank u sab keliye tha."
ShivIka were staring at each other.

OmRu were passing and saw them. OmRu chuckled.
"ShivIka...BhaiBhi"
"Whats a BhaiBhi?" Asked om..
"O aapke bas baal bade hain..dimmag toh chota hi hai. BhaiBhi means.. bhaiyya+bhabhi= BhaiBhi
"Argh...tumhara kuch nahi ho saktha."
"Jaanta hun..aur in dono ka kuch nahi ho saktha. Agar ek doosron ke aankhon mein dekhe na..toh bas kho jaate hain ki unhe vapas lane keliye paani phekna padtha hai..ya phir paani ka naam lena hai." Rudra smacked his forehead nd Om laughed. Both were about to leave. When Rudra stopped
"Itna accha moment hai...saath mein kitne cute lagte hain..ek photo toh banta hai."
Nd Rudra captured their moment.

"Khaana khaayegi?" He asked
"Haan..meri pet mein chuhe dhaud rahe hain." Anika replied.
Shivaay took Anika nd started feeding her. OmRu captured this moment too.
Pinky nd Jhanvi smiled at them.

Now Shivaay had to find his name in her hands. It was a challenge. It started nd he found it when he was about to say, he saw that Anika wanted him to lose. So he said that he quits. Anika was happy but there was something missing in that happiness. Shivaay felt that Anika wasnt fully happy.
It was night nd they were sitting at the terrace. Nd Anika was smiling looking at her hands admiring its beauty in the moon light.
Shivaay saw it nd smiled.
"Aapne jaan bhooch kar kiya na?"
"Kya?!" He asked not understanding a thing.
"Aapne aapke naam dhoondliya par aapne jhoot bola." She said looking at him.
"Mere liye"
She gave her "i noe" look.
Shivaay couldnt lie anymore. He smiled nd looked down.
She turned Shivaay nd she just hugged him. Close.
"Aap mujhse itna pyaar karte hai..ki apne ego chod diyaaur haar maan li."
"Maine toh pehle hi haar maan li jab maine ye baat accept ki main tumse pyaar karta hun"
Anika smiled nd kissed his shoulder. Nd he kissed her hair.
Both smiled. Nd stayed in each others arms.
The beautiful night passed with the moon capturing these beautiful moments.

It was Sangeet. Nd it was a hit.
TejVi nd ShaNky danced on London Thumakdha when Dadi too joined in nd danced merily wid her daughters nd sons. ShivIka were enjoying every bit of it.
Priyanka nd her friend soumya danced on kar gayi chull.
OmRu danced on badtameez dil. Sahil danced on Aadat se majboor wid some girls. Nd Rudra just envied him.
OmRu enacted ShivIka. Like all their tashan scenes. Nd all laughed their hearts out.

"Ab agar in dono ki love life dekhne ke liye mein apne bhaiyya aur bhabhi ko stage pe bulana chahunga" Rudra announced.
ShivIka went on the stage nd Shivaay knelt in front of her lent out his hand. Nd she gave hers in.
The music started.
Shivaay snaked his arm around her waist nd she put her hand on his shoulder. The other interwined. Nd both swayed to the soft music in the air.

"Raaton ke jaage subha mile hain..
Resham ke dhaage, yeh silsile hain..
Lazmi si lagne lagi hai
Do dilon ke ab nazdeekiyan..
Hmmm
Dikhthi nahi hai par ho rahi hai mehsoos Nazdeekiyan
Do dil hi jaane lagti hai kitni mehfooz Nazdeekiyan."

He twirled her around nd pulled her back into his arms. Now his arms on her waist nd hers where on her shoulder blades. They moved swiftly. He lifted her up nd swirled her around. Nd bought her down. Both lost in the moment.

"Zariya hai ye aankhen zariya..
Chhalaktha hai Jinse ek armaano ka dariya..
Aadatein hein inki puraani
Unkahi si kehde kahaani...
Parchaiyyan do judne lagi hain...
Dekho hawa mein udne lagi hai
Phank jaisi lagne lagi hain...
Do dilon ke ab Nazdeekiyaan..."

Now he pulled her back into his arms nd her back hit his chest... nd both swayed away. He took her arm and turned her towards him. They moved accordingly matching each other's steps pefectly. Now they were back in postion one nd it was all soo magical. Their gazes were fixed on each other. Nd it felt like no one else were there execpt them.
Those lines were true as it reflected their bond... Closeness can only be felt. Their heart felt the safest when they were closest to each other...

"Dikhthi nahi hai..par ho rahi hai Mehsoos Nazdeekiyaan.
Do dil hi jaane lagti hai kitni mehfooz Nazdeekiyaan"

Their trance was broken OmRu came nd picked them up on their shoulders. Nd everyone laughed. Shivaay nd Anika laughed with others.
"Rudra...wah BhaiBhi...kya performance tha...ek dum...romantic..." Rudra said after putting them down.
*muaah* he gave them a flying kiss.

ShivIka blushed.
"Well what's a BhaiBhi now??" Asked Shivaay confused.
"Poocho mat Shivaay..iss dumbell Oberoi ka kuch nahi ho saktha." Said Om.
"Mujhe pata hai..Tumne Bhaiyya aur Bhabhi ko milakar..bhaiBhi bola... Logic" Said Anika doing that logic wala step.
Rudra to joined her.
"Isilye...aap meri hi bhabhi ho...aap hi mujh acche tarah se jaante ho." Nd AniRud Hi-fived. Shivaay nd Om said together.
"U guyz r Impossible."
"So toh hain.." AniRud said in Unison..
The 4 laughed at what just happened.

"Ab hoga...
... fmaily wala performance."
Rudra started nd Om completed him.
TejVi..ShaNky...Dadi..prinku..Sahil...came upon stage to join ShivIka nd OmRu..

They all happily danced on Gallan Goodiyaan.
The day ended with a wide smile on everyone's face... awaiting the auspicious nd precious day.



Twerps...i hope it was atleast up to ur expectations.. nd hope u guyz liked this part too..

Well i will continue part c when i get free time..
For now... i am really excited as my Father is returning back from Dubai after a long time...but only for a few days...
Didnt do proof reading so pls ignore mistakes...
Love Sharmi





OmRu pulling Anika's leg was cute & funny...😆
Janhvi pulling OmRu's ears was really needed...those two were all the time teasing their bhaiya & bhabhi...😆😆
Pinky pulling Anika's legs is something I really wanna see in the serial itself...😃😉
Shivaay ka Anika ko chori-chhipe dekhna was sweet & complimenting her by calling was romantic...😳😉
("U just perfectly fit into my arms!" He huskily whispered) - This line is the best line...❤️
OmRu always keep their eyes on ShivIka...jab dekho romance mein baadha daalne aate hain...& Rudra's BhaiBhi was cool...Om & Shivaay didn't understand as expected & Anika perfectly understood Rudra's logic...😆😆😉
ShivIka night moment was sooo blissful...
OmRu enacting ShivIka tashan scenes was hilarious...😆😛
The family dancing on Galla Goodiyan must be shown in the serial too...It will be very nice to watch the family happily dancing together...😃😃
All in all the update was F-A-N-T-A-S-T-I-C...👏👏
Very well done...😃
I will be seriously missing your FF once it ended 😭, so make sure to write a new one please...😊
Update the next part asap...waiting eagerly...😊


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kusharberry

amazing update dear
i loved it very much
aww shivika stole my heart
plzzz do continue soon
and thanks for the pm dear😊


Thank u lina..😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Roselind




OmRu pulling Anika's leg was cute & funny...😆
Janhvi pulling OmRu's ears was really needed...those two were all the time teasing their bhaiya & bhabhi...😆😆
Pinky pulling Anika's legs is something I really wanna see in the serial itself...😃😉
Shivaay ka Anika ko chori-chhipe dekhna was sweet & complimenting her by calling was romantic...😳😉
("U just perfectly fit into my arms!" He huskily whispered) - This line is the best line...❤️
OmRu always keep their eyes on ShivIka...jab dekho romance mein baadha daalne aate hain...& Rudra's BhaiBhi was cool...Om & Shivaay didn't understand as expected & Anika perfectly understood Rudra's logic...😆😆😉
ShivIka night moment was sooo blissful...
OmRu enacting ShivIka tashan scenes was hilarious...😆😛
The family dancing on Galla Goodiyan must be shown in the serial too...It will be very nice to watch the family happily dancing together...😃😃
All in all the update was F-A-N-T-A-S-T-I-C...👏👏
Very well done...😃
I will be seriously missing your FF once it ended 😭, so make sure to write a new one please...😊
Update the next part asap...waiting eagerly...😊



Thank u soo much Roselind...
Ur feedback just makes me feel high...
Thanx once again..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Thanx😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
what an update dear *muaahhh*❤️
really loved it...each and every bit...❤️❤️
anika got shivaay's talent...i mean she felt him...❤️
really loved that teasing scene...
OmRu are bst...❤️
shivaay helped anika drinking water...that was truly romantic❤️❤️
aww shivaay lose fr his anika...❤️
loved shivika talk on terrace...
sangeet awesome...🥳
and ya loved bhaiya+bhabhi=BhaiBhi...rudy is so cute...
all total that was really an awesome, lovely, romantic, masti...full package update...❤️🥳
really loved...❤️
waiting fr the nxt eagerly...

and yah thnx fr the pm...🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Okay I came through all the chapters ... Sharmi what is this? I was reading this story before but left in middle. And now I do not regret reading all the parts together at all.
U wrote, justified and did everything with your story. There was the crisp and as I read them it got better and better and better. You are really a good writer. Let me praise u with my whole heart contents. U r indeed brilliant in describing situations and the plotting of the story is really good.
Eagerly waiting for Chap-15 part 3...
Love u
mimi👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update
So cute n romantic
Perfect for each other
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_writer

what an update dear *muaahhh*❤️

really loved it...each and every bit...❤️❤️
anika got shivaay's talent...i mean she felt him...❤️
really loved that teasing scene...
OmRu are bst...❤️
shivaay helped anika drinking water...that was truly romantic❤️❤️
aww shivaay lose fr his anika...❤️
loved shivika talk on terrace...
sangeet awesome...🥳
and ya loved bhaiya+bhabhi=BhaiBhi...rudy is so cute...
all total that was really an awesome, lovely, romantic, masti...full package update...❤️🥳
really loved...❤️
waiting fr the nxt eagerly...

and yah thnx fr the pm...🤗


Aww thank u sooo much for ur super duper comment Angel wali Neha🤗

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