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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome , wonderful, mind blowing, superb, fantastic, kal dictionary me dhundh ke aur laungi tab tak ke liye isi se kam chalao. Wow you made my day. While reading the update sometimes I was so sad and sometimes I was laughing like hell. But now you have to make it a 3S I want to read more of it, I liked it that much.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Oh man...I wish this was longer than a Two-Shot. Seriously, the plot was sheer brilliance. You managed to depict the whole hing in just two updates without any loop-holes that this is seriously a master-piece.
Why is it that the fics I am reading recently making me adore Shivaay more? Is there a conspiracy I don't know about?😆

I loved it how Shivaay goes to court and drops the bombshell and Tej...🤣

Poor Tej...his shock was resounding!!!!!!!

All in all I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for the PM. Will miss this series.

-Niki
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Okay! First I would.like to say I'm totally surprised
By the way the second part turned the whole.story...
I mean never in my wildest dreams.could I imagine, that all this anshi moments could have have that lawyer angle...seriously I'm really surprised!
Brilliant! That's the trait of a great writer...
And shivaay...I love him in this story...
By this story its hence proved shivaay is a human :p
And I really loved the cute.nonsense between anshi
After the court case...this is my one of Tue favourite two shots...

Please I.heartily.request if u could.continue this s story...please I love it but at last the choice is yours :)

Xoxo,
Take.care,
Ananya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Oh God! Please become the script writer for the show!! I love it!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Ayuzawa

Thanks a lot dear
I don't have an index since I have written in various forums 😆
But yes I do remember you from madhubala forum. I had written a single fiction there and then I went off India forum for like a year.
It's so nice to talk to you again😃

Hey nice to meet you again!! I also went off If for like 2 years. Just came back about a month back. I love your writing skills. Great work!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
I was waiting for the update n it's superb as expected. I liked this part of their conversation very much :
"I am rich, handsome and..."
"extremely rude, inconsiderate and cruel" she continued.
"so no redeeming qualities?" he asked obviously enjoying this.
"not exactly. If you work on your personality maybe you can become a good catch...wait...what the hell am I talking about...how did we come here?" ha ha ha it was awesome.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was such a wonderful story! The way you picked up everything from the current track and managed to close every single loop hole, keeping the essence of Shivaay and Anika intact, was such a treat to read! As emotional as the first update was, the second one was packed with intensity, intrigue, lightness, humour and mirth. I enjoyed the way you included Rudr and Omkara in the story. The conversation between the two was adorbs! ❤️

The court scene, and the way Shivaay took the gamble, his emotions and mental state was brilliantly described. The ensuing conversation between Shivaay and Anika, totally on point!

"making you like me will not be easy you see and as I have told you before 'aasan chizon ka shauk bhi nahi hai mujhe'."
I wish the story didn't end here and we got to see Shivaay working on making Anika fall for him.

Thank you for this fantastic piece of work!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Just the right amount of heart string pulling chemistry. ..
Loved it !
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Ohhh LOVED IT SO MUCH❤️
Too good too good!👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Finally I'm back and your SS is the one I read first!!
Loved it beautiful written 👏 You are an excellent writer!!
I wish you continue this too 😉
Do write more and Thanks for the Pm dear

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