Riansh OS - A snowy Walk - Note Page 6 - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: heartbeats123

U said this is your first piece.. This is really good🙂

Light hearted with a fresh feeling..😇😇

Thank you so much 🤗

yes its my first piece ever. glad you liked it.

My aim was to make it fresh and light hearted. 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Ragazza_dolce

Such a peaceful OS Vedika...

First of all ,tera aur bhagwaan ka lakh lakh shukar hai ki RiAnsh Snake clan ko chodkar ek achhi zindagi jee rahe hain🤪...

Secondly,you brought out the emotions of RiAnsh so well dear⭐️...

Imagining RiAnsh like this, itself brings up a smile on everyone's face and it was easier imagining them as a normal couple ,walking around while cherishing each other with love and adoration,by the way you covered every minute detail efficiently, so that everything feels alive❤️...

From Vansh checking whether the road is slippery or not to them holding each other's hands and walking down towards their home,everything was so serene...

It was so amusing to read and imagine Vansh being a mother bear and Riddhima acting childishly😆...

The part where Vansh says to gather and store the memories, for these days won't return back again,it was so so so deep and subtle...

Also ,the beautiful images added to the graphic effect of the OS which eventually helped imagining the setting...

The story has another story in itself,the story where RiAnsh are actually living in the present without worrying about what the future holds for them❤️...

It was truly amazing Vedi!!!👍🏼

Keep writing more🤗...

Also,thanks for tagging❤️...

Shreya 🤗 Meri drama queen 🤪

Thank you so much 🤗

Haan RiAnsh need to get away from nagin gang for sure they deserve better😛

I am glad you liked the small and deep details. ❤️ I tried to get it simple but not miss any small details either.

I wish they would have shown RIansh more a normal couple coz it would be so much more relatable for all of us.

I hope the images helped. I was not sure if it would be easy for u all to visualise it all hence i added them on request of gur. 🤣

Haan I tried to create my own imaginery here what i wanted out of riansh as a couple 😎 Its so much better they live in the present coz knowing vansh woh to past and future mein zyada tension leta hai 🤣

Ur welcome 🤗 Yes I will write more and tag u then. Hoepfully next one is gonna be up soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Kavya.M

Ved ,Finally you posted an os. Am so happy .🤗

it's a beautiful first attempt smiley32smiley27.amazing OS.smiley27smiley27.

It's great that in ur OS we got to see this phase of RiAnsh

It just literary took me to the backdrop . I could see all the scenes floating in front of my eyes.

Such a lovely rendition. ❤️

Do write more dear ....keep surprising us smiley20

Thank you so much Kavya 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Blueberry94

Ved just finished reading and it's a beautiful os ❤️. Emotional and sweet papa vansh and mummy ridhu . Omg baby girl means our vanya. And the place is beautiful tnx to your pics I could imagine riansh there ❤️. Ved this place is so good I'm tempted to visit it .






Ps. Vanshu ko Germany poucha diya😉

Thank you so much Karu 🤗 Haan bilkul if riansh should have it should be a baby girl, daddy's girl ☺️

Ur welcome yes do come its really scenic in winter

Haanji Vanshu mere paas Germany hi ayega 😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Navdeep_08

Ved its amazing .

Riansh away from that snake clan and enjoying chotu chotu moments in life 🥰🥰🥰


Vanshu checking minute details for her and his baby is so adorable .



Thanks Navs🤗

Yes I am so happy they left snake clan.

Vansh is and always will be super protective 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Rubellite

MERIIII VEDUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!


Do you have like, any idea how heartwarming it is? Its 10 in the morning here, and this just brought a smile on my face😭 Im beyond happy to see ya writing even after the show's end!



Coming to the piece, Oh, My, God😭This is so beautiful. RiAnsh leisurely walking down the snowy paths of Germany hand in hand; fried potato fritters, warm chestnuts and mulled wine How romantic


Loved how both of them were being ziddi as hell🤣 Vansh being overprotective about their child and her is so- chuencjskkaxjjajsdh ❤️


A mini pregnancy photoshoot❤️


“cuz the next Christmas they come, it wouldn't only be just the two of them”

This line just melted my already melted heart🤪❤️



This is the perfect Christmas! I'll be seriously waiting for the bigger piece you're planning to release, now

Thank you so much ani this means so much to me 🤗 glad it brought a smile to ur face ❤️

I feel weird actually starting writing after the show ended but its giving me so many ideas now

We all know riansh both were maha ziddi 🤣 Hehe yes its super cute and vansh is super protective

Thanks Ani. I hope to release more soon 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: watersanon_Rose

I was one of those who inspired you....🥺🥺🥺🥺

I am gonna cry in happiness.....


Gur ne to bahut logon ko inspire kiya hoga.... You and me are not alone.....❤️❤️❤️❤️


Germany!!!! Mujhe bhi jaana hai!!!!☺️☺️☺️☺️


Tum bhool gaye tumne Riddhu ka kya naam rakha tha.... ZIDDIMA.....🤭🤭🤭🤭


Ab pregnant woman ke mood swings to jhelne padegen Vansh.....😌😌😁😁


Past events made him overprotective Riddhu.... It shows how much he loves you....❤️❤️❤️❤️


Riddhu playing with snow and Vansh admiring her.... Soooo cuuttee....🥰🥰🥰🥰


Food ke baare mein padh ke my mouth is watering.... But I can't have those delicious treats.... Nhi to meri diet ki band bajegi.....😭😭😭😭


And you posted the pictures too... Aankhon se hi khaa ke mann bhar leti hun....🤧🤧🤧🤧


Vedika.... You blew my mind with your writing skills and imagination...... This was too good....😘😘😘😘

Virtual hugs and kisses from me to you...😘😘😘🤗🤗🤗

Please dont cry rose 🤗 honestly u all inspired me to begin. I read ur stuff and got more motivated to write

Ah jha rose germany mere paas 😎

Hanji Ziddhima to hai uska naam lekin vanshu bhi kam nahi hai.

When do pregnant women not have mood swings. and ridhima had those during the show already 🤣

Yes vansh realised that she is the most important person for him and he loves her a lot.

Arre rose kabhi cheat days bhi chalte hain 😛 Kha le u only get these during christmas

Thank you so much rose for your kind words. 🤗 I am glad u liked my first piece

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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Akkusharma77

It was so captivating update ♥️♥️

So Amazing and Fantastic ♥️♥️♥️

Those images surely help us to imagine things better 😍😍

And Loved it ♥️♥️

Keep writing more

Thank you akku 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Krazzy_Tintin11

Wow! Amazing piece of writing loved it so so much.

Superb.

Thank you so much 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: sanashabirkhan

Diiii, this was so beautiful🤗

Loved it, I was imagining all this while reading it.

Riansh and their cute little moments🥺

Waiting for your next os or ff. Jo bhi hoga :)

Take care❤️

Thank you sana 🤗

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