Riansh os- Saved by best friend

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey guys so this a combination of request by Akkusharma77, and i have made a few changes as usual.

Seeing his baby sister falling from the stairs was scary, he ran towards her thankfully she wasn't hurt much, he quickly picked her up and laid her on the sofa,

V- Sia, tum theek ho na..

S- Han bhai i am fine..

V- What the hell is happening here? Mein kuch dino ke liye ghar se kya gaya, aap log itne laparwa ho gaye hain..

Ar- Bhai, yeh sab Riddhima ki wajah se ho raha hain..

Anu- Han Vansh, she is blaming us ki humne iski friend ko kidnap kiya hain..aur toh aur iski wajah se ghar mein aag lagi and Ma ko chot bhi lagi thi..

R- Vansh, yeh sab..

V- Don't Sweetheart, mujhe sab saach pata chal gaya hain, Sejal se jo milke aa raha hun..and don't worry aaj shaam ko wo milne aa rahi hain tumse.

Everyone was scared, if their truth comes out they will punished by Vansh, Riddhima panicked too, she saw Kabir who had came as a servant to kidnap Sejal signaling her to meet him, what she didn't see was Vansh looking at both of them, he hid behind a pillar to listen what they were talking about,

R- Kabir tum jao yahan, Sejal is fine now..

K- Riddhima tum bhul rahi ho ki tum yahan kisliye aayi ho.

R- Nahi Kabir, but i think you are misunderstanding Vansh, he can be scary but my instincts say he is not a bad person. He just hides his emotions well.

K- Look at you kal tak you hated him..

R- Yes, but i have also seen his caring side. He just wants someone to understand him..

K- I am warning you Riddhima, he is nothing but a manipulator, phir mat aana mera pass rote hue.

Vansh though angry he still smiled as she had defended him, he had clearly read her emotions well, and he will make sure that Riddhima never goes back to Kabir she is his now.

He went back to the room, he had just taken out his suit jacket, and was opening his shirt when Riddhima came in and she started asking about Sejal,

R- Vansh, tum Sejal ko call karo na, i wanna talk to her. And tumne mujhe phele kyun nahi bataya ki Sejal tumhare pass.

V- (pulls her towards him)- Pati itne dino ke baad ghar aaya hain, and tum Sejal ki baat kar rahi ho..roaming his index fingers on her face..he enjoyed how she shivered..

He leans down and kisses her, just a peck at first but it frustrated Riddhima she slammed her lips onto him and tried to kiss him more, he bit her lip and gained entry into her mouth, after making out for few minutes, they separated a bit but he was still kissing and nipping her neck,

V- I wanted to know what you were going to say when i had called you yesterday..

R- Me, nahi toh i just wanted to know when you will be back😋😋

V- Really, (angry) fine pushing her slightly he went to take shower

R-(thinks)- Isse kya hua? .Then she blushed remembering the kiss they just shared. But she was scared too, if Sejal had met Vansh and what if she had told him everything..he would probably hate her, it's better to tell him the truth now.

Vansh was standing in the shower, shoulders sagging, he couldn't believe that his own Mom is mixed up in all of this, why is it that everyone near him wants to betray him, where did he go wrong?. He gave up his dreams to protect this family and what did he get in return only betrayal, thank god for Sejal that she told him the whole truth.


Flashback


After Aryan had left some food for her, she tried to escape the ropes were not too tight but she was able to wriggle herself out of it, she looked around the room and saw a window, she jumped from it and ended in the backyard, she was careful not be seen.

She somehow manages to get out of the VR mansion only to be almost hit by a car, it was Vansh who came out of the car,

S- Oh, thank god, Mr.Raisinghania, i have to tell you something..

V- Who are you.? And yahan mere ghar ke bhar what are you doing.?

S- Mr.Raisinghania, please meri baat sunai, i have to tell you something about your mother..

V- Listen you...😡😡

S- No, aap samajh nahi rahe hain, she is involved with Kabir..and this also related to Riddhima..

V- What about her? Tell me everything now..he told to get inside the car..but she was scared he promised her he won't harm her..

Sejal told him everything she had heard, how Kabir was using Riddhima and that he never loved her, how Aryan had Kidnapped her and wanted to information about Riddhima and how she managed to save herself,

S- You have to save Riddhima..please.

V- I will..but you need to stay away for some time until i bring you back..okay.

S- Sure, i just want Riddhima to be safe..

V- Me too..

S- Waise, please don't hate her, she loves you very much.

V- How do you know? She was betraying me..

S- Was she? In the three days you were not here..she had called me so many times and told me how she misses you, aapki daant, aapki care..she really does love you..

V- 🥰🥰 Don't worry about her i will keep her safe. And i will bring her to meet you too..

S- Thank you..

V- Driver, Mam ko farmhouse chod ke aao, and Angre ko kahne to make sure she is taken care of.

Dr- Ji Sir.


Present


Vansh had a naughty smile on his, he knew that if Riddhima comes to know about Kabir's truth she will never do his dirty work but before that, he wants to tease her a bit..he came out with a towel around his waist.

Riddhima was pacing around the room, trying to make up her mind to tell him the truth, she stopped suddenly and blushed. She hadn't seen him like this ever before, he smirked and went to the dresser to set his hair.

R- Vansh, i have to tell you something..

V- Hmm.. he ignored her.

R- Vansh 😒😒, meri baat toh suno..

V- Riddhima, i am busy here..irritated she picked pillow from the bed and started hitting him..he caught the pillow and pulled her close..

V- Kya hua Sweetheart, daar lag raha hain? Waise to tell you the truth i already know you and Kabir.

R- Woh..i ..

V- Relax, he kissed her neck and hugged her tightly i know you have feelings for me..so don't worry..

R- You are forgiving me?

V- There are things you still need to know..about that Inspector but before that i wanna show you how much i missed you.

He kissed her again and this time she kissed him back, his hands were roaming around her back and he had almost opened her kurti when a servant knocked at the door,

S- Sir, aapko neeche bula rahe hain..

V- Okay tum jao..

R- I should go..

V- We will continue this later 😏😏😏

Everyone was waiting downstairs for Vansh, they all wanted to know when will Sejal arrive, Vansh smiled seeing them all riled up and scared they had forgotten their place, he was becoming too soft for his Sweetheart..

Anu- Vansh, Sejal kab aa rahi hain?

V- She is not coming tonight, usse kuch kaam hain so i am taking Riddhima to meet her.

V- But this is my warning, iss ghar ke log mere rules ko lightly lene lage hain, don't do that nahi consequences will be bad. Chalo Riddhima..

He took the farmhouse where Sejal was staying, she looked genuinely happy when she hugged her best friend. He felt a bit sad when he realized that she never smiled so much with him,

R- Vansh, you said i had to know things about Kabir..

S- Riddhima, you remember that i called you to tell you i am back, i went to meet Kabir to get your address, there i saw Anupriya and Kabir talking..they were both using you from the start..he never loved you.

S- On top of that Anupriya is Kabir's mother she is doing alĺ this for money and nothing else..

R- I..i can't believe..she started crying and Vansh hugged her tightly..

S- Mr.Raisinghania, we can't let them go so easily..

R- No, Sejal tum kuch nahi karogi..jo karna hum karegaye.

S- But..

V- She is right Miss Sejal, we don't want ki aur logo ki jaan khatre mein ho..

They said goodbye to her and went back home, the whole time Riddhima was silent and Vansh didn't like that she was wasting her time thinking about that Inspector,

R- I am sorry Vansh..

V- For what?

R- For hurting you, knowing that how much you hate betrayals..

V-(stops the car)- Listen Riddhima, you were doing what you thought was right, you didn't know the whole truth and i didn't make it easy for you as well.

R- So, what happens now?

V- We are still husband and wife, you can take all the time in the world..sabr bahut hain mujhme..

R- Thank you..

Vansh smiled, a devious plan formulating in his mind he knows that Riddhima cares about him he just has to do things to bring out that emotions and by the way she responded in the morning, soon she will only think about him and no one else..

Ps- Hey guys, hope you like this. Also in the story hidden truth do you want Vansh and Vyom to be real brothers? Please do comment..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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First of all Thank You So Much 🙏🙏 on writing on my suggestions..

Big Hugs 🤗 🤗 🤗 hug

And coming to the story, it was incredible, superb, mind blowing and fantastic 😍😍😍😍

I want this type of vansh in the show but makers ruined the character.

Anyway loved those quirky dialogues and that kiss 😍😍

And then dressing table romance and that servant kabab ke haddi 😂😂

And Vansh warning 👿👿👿 uff devil rai singhania

And then sabra bahut he mujhme 😂😂😂

Vyom and vansh bhai banakar aage story kaise hoge? But I have no problem, And we want mature scenes 🙏🙏🙏😂😂 or some naughty scenes

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Trying my hand in live commenting.....



Yeh RS clan ka kuch nhi ho sakta.... Aate hi tut pade Vansh par ... 😠😠😠😠

Riddhu ne kuch galat nhi kiya..... She is worried for her BFF.... But yeh emotion inn logon ko kahan samajh mein aane waala hai.....😤😤😤😤


Sejal Vansh ke paas hai..... Dil ko thandak milli.....😌😌😌😌


Riddhu tumhe kuch nhi hoga.... Vansh loves you....🥺🥺🥺🥺

Yeh waala Vansh show se gayab kyun tha.... Iski nazaron se kuch nhi bachta.....😭😭😭😭


Riddhu defending Vansh in front of Kabutar..... Haayeee.....❤️❤️❤️❤️


That Riansh moment in bedroom.....😍😍😍😍😍

Vansh being fake angry..... Sooooo cute .....🤭🤭🤭🤭


Sejal escaped..... Good...😤😤😤😤


She explained everything to Vansh so patiently......


Thank God everything is out.... But Vansh be like.... Pehle romance.... Baaki kaam duja.....🤣🤣🤣🤣


Kam kabab mein haddi nhi hai Riansh ke life mein....🤣🤣🤣🤣


Original VR is back...😎😎😎😎


Sejal telling truth to Riddhu and Vansh comforting her.... Riddhu's wish of caring family is complete 🥰🥰🥰🥰


Ab start hogi Riansh ki love story.....😁😁😁😁



Awesome story Raveena 😘😘😘😘




PS - mujhe lag raha hai ki comment ke naam pe maine bhi story hi likh di....😅😅😅😅

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Aare nahi it's good, tabhi toh pata chalega ki what you liked and didn't..thank you so much for writing it..aise laga tha ki writers ka brain hibernation mein chala gaya..aare yaar Vansh could be lovey dovey with Riddhima yet be smart and dangerous..mere Mafia man ko abla nari bana diye in writers ne..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Interesting story... Proper closure to Sejal too...

If you can extend it to few more parts would love to read how it progesses

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: abby143

Interesting story... Proper closure to Sejal too...

If you can extend it to few more parts would love to read how it progesses


Sorry 🙈🙈 abhi sirf os hi likh rahi hun, people tend to comment more on os they quickly lose interest in ss or ff..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Pls extend this yaar 🙏🙏

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