Riansh ts- Don't leave me ever Chapter 3 page 3 complete

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Hey so i have already written a os on the request, but someone wanted a lengthy version of it so, i am writing it again, this is related to Riddhima kidnapping Ragini, and the following episode, no suicide drama.



Kabir couldn't believe his luck, this idiot Riddhima has herself delivered the biggest thing which can help take down Vansh Raisinghania. Ragini was the one person who could tell him the truth and now she is with,

R- I hope you will take care of her.

K- Of course Riddhima, thank you. I am sorry but i told you na that Vansh is a master manipulator.

R- I don't want to talk about him. I have to go before he suspects anything.


Riddhima was coming home back from the station, she cursing her luck was she that unworthy that everytime she will be betrayed by the person she loved? She was deep in her thoughts as she reached home, suddenly Vansh caught her arm and dragged her, to the backyard


V- Kahan se aa rahi ho Sweetheart.

R- Tum se matlab..i can go anywhere i want.

V- Riddhima i am asking you nicely, Ragini kahan hain?

R- How would i know?, tumne ne rakha hain usse kaid karke. And besides aacha hua someone saved her from you.

V- You see this grave?, i have kept it for the person whom you are helping. He pushed her inside. If not them, then maybe you.

V- Tell me the truth.

R- Agar mujhe maarna hain, toh maar dalo, i don't care. And even if i have helped someone, i will rather die than tell you the truth.

V- Interesting, very interesting. He pulls her out. I maybe many things Riddhima but not a murderer. I don't know why you can't understand that.

R- If you are not a murderer, then why did you keep Ragini captive? So that you punish her for betraying you?

V- You hate me that much? Alright, i will tell you the truth. This grave was intended for the person who killed my mother.

R- But i thought that your mom left you?

V- Everyone thinks that but the truth is she was murdered, and Ragini knew who the killer was. But before she could tell me the truth she was shot.

V- I have tried to keep her alive for past three years, just so i can punish my mother's killers and now when she was okay, i again lost her.

V(kneels down and cries)- I can't even fulfill my promise. I don't deserve to be alive 😒😒🥺


Riddhima couldn't believe what a terrible blunder she had done, she took away his chance to get his mother some justice, but she was also scared that if she tells him the truth then he will hate her, and that is something she can never tolerate. The weather was becoming terrible and urged Vansh to come inside.


Tried and emotionally drained Vansh felt dizzy and fell into the grave, hitting his head on a stone. Riddhima was shocked, she jumped into the grave and tried to wake him up,


R- Vansh, please wake up. I am sorry ki meri wajah you to suffer so much. I promise i will bring back Ragini, uske liya chahe mujhe kuch bhi kyun na karna padhe.


With great difficulty she managed to get him back to their room and bandaged his head, she was continously pacing, guilt and suffocation making her hard to breathe,


R- Didn't i love him? So how could i believe that, he wanted to kill Ragini. Why didn't i ask him directly. But he too always manipulated the truth. She looked at him, Kaash tumne mujhe saach bataya hota Vansh. We could have found your mother's killers together.


V- MA.. he woke up gasping. He looked around and saw that they were inside. He looked at Riddhima and said, Why did you save me?

V- I have done so many horrible things to you and yet you saved me again and again. I am so sorry Riddhima. He holds her hand in his tightly.

V- Do you know, after Ragini i thought i will never fall in love. But you made me believe love again. You are so different than rest. You stood up to what is right, you didn't fear me. He stood up and went to other side.

V- I am not a good person, nor a good husband or son. I am so sorry Riddhima, and i am so sorry Ma. He falls down on his knees and Riddhima rushes to him and hugs tightly.

R- Look at me, you are the most strong person i have ever seen, tumne apni family ka khayal rakha, you took care of me. And you protected Ragini as well. Don't ever think you are weak okay.

R- Come on, get up. You rest mein dinner le kar aati hun.

V- I am not hungry.

R- Vansh, hume Ragini ko wapas lana hain na. So, you will need your strength. No argument.


After dinner, Vansh went to his paino he always felt relieved when he plays it. Riddhima tried calling Kabir so that she can request him to give Ragini back but he was not picking up the phone.


R- I have to do something, i can't live with this guilt. I am the open who wronged him and i should be the one too make things right.


She went downstairs, he was sitting on the stool chair near the paino, and playing it, a kalash was kept in front of him,

V- Three years i waited ki Ragini ko hosh aayega, and i will punish the killer. Now everything was for nothing.

R- I am so sorry Vansh.

V- Tum sorry kis liye bol rahi ho. I know that you had nothing to do with this. He stood up and showed her the kalash and said, do you know issme meri ma ki aakhri nishani ki aastiyan hain. I only have this to remember her by.

V- For three years i had a goal, now aise lagata hain, i don't have a reason to live as well.

V- Can you do me favour Riddhima?...


Ps- What is the favour? Will Riddhima tell him the truth?. Hope you guys like the changes i made. Please do comment.

Chapter 1- page 1

Chapter 2- page 3

Chapter 3- page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing update Raveena 👏

So Vansh asking favor from Ridhu 🤪 I guess he will ask her to not leave him 😉

I guess it is high time for Ridhu tell the truth or it will get messed up too soon 😆

Waiting for your next chapter 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Welcome back ji, kahan gayab ho?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you so much raveena 🙏🙏

And I just loved the update 👌👌

Mujhe laga yehe par end kat diya then I go upward and see it is ts 🙈

And A big thanks for writing on my suggestion and I have imagined the same things that you mentioned in the update while I was giving you the suggestion.

Waiting for another update ♥️♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Raveena ji aap bohot badi writer ho😊😊

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Marvelous read raveena 👏🏻👏🏻

Wonder what's the favour that Vansh wants?!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akkusharma77

Thank you so much raveena 🙏🙏

And I just loved the update 👌👌

Mujhe laga yehe par end kat diya then I go upward and see it is ts 🙈

And A big thanks for writing on my suggestion and I have imagined the same things that you mentioned in the update while I was giving you the suggestion.

Waiting for another update ♥️♥️


Thank you 😊💓

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Athira44

Raveena ji aap bohot badi writer ho😊😊

Thank you for the compliment. 😋😋

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Posted: 4 years ago
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U r an amazing writer. Stories are always lovely to read.🥰

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi raveena it's a mind blowing update yaar I make her tell the truth to vansh then the team up together to save ragini after that made a little jealousy track ragini is living in VR mansion

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