The Single Coloured Chess - OS

Hi,

I rarely write stories for the simple reason that I don't connect to a lot of stories or characters. I am actually very impressed with Riddhima's reaction of proclaiming her love and being ready to prove it to Vansh because it shows that she completely understands his anger and also the hidden love behind it, you don't agree to die for hatred. And as for Vansh's betrayal, I can see the why with the half information he has, so can't blame him completely, as I have repeated in the forum as well, he died because of the betrayal, it was sheer luck that he survived.

For me, I would love to see the story do justice to all the 3 characters, Vansh, Riddhima and Kabir. Kabir might be evil and all, but he did work hard to be where he is and I respect that hard work to be honest.

So am starting the story from Vansh's proclamation of Riddhima killing Kabir to prove her love to him. Their thoughts are in italics.

Vansh: Tumhe jaan leni hogi, aur woh bhi Kabir ki. Bolo, le sakti ho jaan apne pehle pyaar ki? Apne aashiq ki?

Riddhima: Mera aashiq nai hai woh, nafrat karti hoon main usse. Usne agar ek acha kaam kiya hai life mein toh bas yeh ki mujhe tumse mila diya.

Vansh scoffs at her line, shaking his head: Mujhe tumhari kisi baat pe bharosa nai. Ishq ko sabit karna padta hai and maine tumhare ishq mein khudko maarke usko sabit kar diya, ab tumhari baari hai. Tum Kabir ko maarogi? Haan ya Na? HAAN YA NA Riddhima? - He holds her arms harshly and rattle her to make her answer.

Riddhima: HAAN! Karungi khoon Kabir ka, par meri ek shart hogi!

Vansh angrily leaves her and turns around: Tum iss position mein nai ho ki sharte rakho. Apne saathi ko khatam kardo aur sabit kardo apna pyaar, phir humare beech koi dhokha nai, koi jhoot nai, sirf sur sirf pyaar hoga.

There is silence for 2 minutes in which they are Vansh is thinking in his head, Pyaar ki harr hadd tumne paar ki hai, uss beyhadi ne mujhe maut ke muh mein phek diya. Tum shayad nai samjhi ho ki Kabir ko maarke tum humein ek nai kar sakti, balki usko maarke, tumhari ruh bhi marr jaegi aur uske saath main bhi. Par at least humare marne ke baad humari family toh safe rahegi, shayad yehi iss pyaar ki kahani hai, ishq mein marjaane ki.

Riddhima: Tum yeh khoon chahte ho, toh shart puri karne ki bhi taqat rakho. Kya hua, THE Vansh Raisinghania ki grand master hone ka kya fayda agar woh chaal badal na pae jab udchan aae.

Vansh turns around to Riddhima: Ek mauka hai, maanglo kya chaiye tumhe iss khoon ke badle? Kya kimmat deni hai mujhe aur apne pyaar ki agar maut bhi kaafi nai thi?

Riddhima: Mujhe tumhare pyaar pe shaq nai. Jab sach ka vaada karke tum mana nai kar pae, jab khoon ke badle pyaar ab bhi vaade mein de rae ho, toh pyaar ki kya kimmat maangu tumse. Par chalo phir bhi maangti hoon. Main Kabir ka khoon kar dungi, jaisa tum chahte ho, bilkul waisa hi hoga, par uske badle tumhe mujhe maarna hoga, apne khud ke haatho se......

Vansh screams: RIDDHIMA!

Riddhima: Chillao mat. Main toh khooni se pyaar bhi nai kar pai thi, par tum toh vaada kar rae ho na khooni se pyaar karne ka? Toh bas, uss pyaar ko tumhe bhi sabit karna hoga mujhe apne haatho se maarke. Mind you, koi bandook, koi Angre Ahana nai. Tum, aur tumhare haath mere galein pe. Main tumhari aankho mein dekhke, tumhare haatho se, tumhari baahon mein dumm todna chahti hoon. Vansh Raisinghania apne vaade ka pakka hai na? Toh vaada karo and jaisa tum kahoge, main waisa karungi!

Vansh stands there, angry with tears in his red eyes, refusing to look at Riddhima and promising something he knows he can't do.

Riddhima: Bolo na Vansh, manzoor hai tumhe? Hum dono khooni honge, aur kya hi iss ishq ka saboot hoga, iss ishq ki dastaan hogi. Do aashiq jinhone khooni banna accept kiya, ek dusre ko accept karna nai.

Vansh: Just shut up Riddhima! Tumhari yeh shart mujhe nai manzoor. Main khooni nai hoon aur banuga bhi nai, tumhare liye bhi nai. Tum apna faisla batao aur baat ko yahin khatam karo. Yeh befizool ka emotional drama mat karo yaha.

Riddhima smiles at his answer, even more sure of her next steps now: Toh theek hai, suno mera faisla. Agar yeh vaada nai, toh woh khoon nai. Pyaar ki daastan do log likhte hai, humare ishq ki daastan mein hum dono ke siwai sabne panne likhe, yaha tak ki humare gusse aur dard ne bhi, bas humare dilo ne nai likhe. Toh ab ya toh dono ke dilo ka khoon likhega yeh dastaan ya yeh dastaan apna dumm todegi. Main iss ghar se kahin nai jaungi, tumhari aankho ke saamne rehke tumhara pyaar aur bharosa jeet kar dikhaungi. Haan maine tumhe bahut se dhoke diya, haan meri kamzoriyo ne tumhari jaan li, par tumse pyaar bhi bahut kiya hai. Tum galat ho, tum uss din isliye nai bache jisse mere dhoke ka badla le sako, tum isliye bache jisse mere saath ek nayi zindagi shuru kar sako, humari duniya, jaha sirf tum aur main ho, na koi Kabir, na koi Ahana aur na hi koi Ragini. Tum apne khel khelte raho, mujhe maarne ki koshish karte raho, ya toh main khatam ho jaungi jab tum bachana band karoge, ya tumhari nafrat ko harna hoga, kyunki Mr. Vansh Raisinghania, main Mrs. Riddhima Vansh Raisinghania hoon aur main humare pyaar ko haarne nai dungi. Mere dhoke ne tumhari jaan li thi na, tum apne dhoke se ya toh meri jaan loge ya apne dhoke ko bhologe, aur yeh mera promise hai tumse.

Saying this, Riddhima turns on her heels and walks away with tears flowing down her face. If she had stayed longer, or had seen in the pool, she would have seen the face of the broken man who was at a battle with himself and scared to take the plunge, a man who knew he was right, a man who somewhere knew his wife was also right, but a man who couldn't risk accepting that, knowing that if he is proven wrong yet again, his family will die in Kabir's hands, and that was the price he wasn't ready to pay.

Vansh: Tum jaanti nai ho Riddhima ki tumne kaunsi zindagi maang li hai aaj. Tum pal pal tadpogi, pal pal aaso bahaogi par koi unn aasuo ko pochhne nai aaega. Tum marogi nai, par pal pal ghut ghut ke jiogi ki agla vaar kaha se aa jae. Iss baar bhi jeet nafrat ki hogi kyunki main samaj chuka hoon, pyaar sirf kamzor karta hai and kamzori ki Vansh Raisinghania ko aadat nai.

Riddhima: Tum ab mere pyaar ki hadd dekhoge Mr. Vansh Raisinghania. Mujhe jitna dard doge, tum bhi utna hi totoge, aaj utna toh samaj chuki hoon main aur agar tumhare dard ki dawa mere aaso hai, toh mujhe woh bhi manzoor hai. Pichli baar nafrat jeet gayi thi kyunki pyaar kamzor tha, ab mera pyaar tumhare pyaar se milke bana hai, woh harr nafrat ki deewar ko gira dega, ek baar phir aur humara yehi pyaar meri taqat hai iss ladai mein.

Vansh and Riddhima both: Welcome to the final round of Chess Mrs/ Mr Vansh Raisinghania, jaha haar aur jeet ki ladai mein hum dono ek dusre ke saamne bhi rahenge aur saath bhi! The one game of Chess jismein there are no white and black pieces but only a single coloured pieces at both ends.

Brilliant 😍❤️❤️❤️❤️...please continue the story 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Loved it..I would like u to continue this.
Let’s us know Kabir’s PoV too..I am fed up with the way they are using him in the show..😭😡

If u are planning to continue, pls consider to write With lil hindi or translation for that in english. 😛

So good!

Her asking him to kill her, was just beyond my imagination. It was so good! Also, the little thing with Vansh saying pyaar is for the weak, really shows that he is trying to push her away! In love with the idea that Riddhima is willing to stand to fight for her love rather than prove it.

Loved it, do continue if you can!

This needs to be continued.

This is awesome and freaking amazing. 🥰🥰🥰

Its amazing👏

Please write more🤗

Thank You everyone. I normally don't show my writing, I always feel it isn't good enough, so this means a lot.

Will definitely try to write more when I get a breather from work.

Wow this is really amazing loved it this should be continued.