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Posted: 8 years ago
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After his return to Banaras and Danh Vidha realized that nothing else in their life will not be the same as it was before. Vidha is increasingly thought to Dutu a Vidha thought to Duthe junior. The two of them have learned to feel that they mising two of them. Atarvha the video that the two of them have changed and that something strange going on with them. And then one day he decided to take matters into their own hands and started at Dute. When he arrived at Duta was surprised when he saw that the Duta perhaps the richest man whom he met. But he himself did not did not mean to. Duta received Atarvha with a touch of anxiety because he could not have known that Atarvha knows everything. Duta still Duthu invited to attend this meeting. Atarvha estimated that the two of them are very good people and will do everything to his mother and sister to be happy. I Duta and Duthe anxiously asked how Vidha and Danhi. In their voice Atarvha felt genuine concern and he was glad. Duta was offered tea and asked with anxiety in his voice how he could help. And that was a sign that says Atarvha are bothering him. He said that he is clear what happened and that he is sincerely sorry about what happened, and that he will do everything to his sister and mother change their mind. Although both stubborn thought and with tears in his eyes that perhaps my mother's heart, and there he stood. he began to cry and said that Mr. Duta I am shaken by this gest. In the body of my mother's part that belongs to a great person and then he turned his face to the Duthe i said your mother's heart beats in the breast of my mother. Dutha was speechless and just looked at his father who was afraid of the reaction. Atarvha Duthe realized that he knew nothing and now it is too late to withdraw. Duta approached his son and placed a hand on his shoulder and told him everything, it took a long time and when he finished the story, he looked at Duta Duthu and waited for the reaction. A Duthe just said ...
Now I understand why it is all the time you called a murderer. I'm gonna go with her and we just have to say something has to put it on his shoulder and is asking as well. Atarvha stood before him and said angrily, if you think my sister to punch, you better not trying, because you'll be in conflict with me. Dutha looked at Atarvha and said ... do not worry, I'm not sure that she would not allow that, and raise the arms. And by the way i have a wonderful mother and sister. Dutha went, and so did Duta and Atarvha.
They arrived in Banaras and left at the Danhi. Danhi is all confused greeted Dutu and she was glad to see him. A Dutha went to work at Vidha. When he saw the beautiful sari remained speechless. She was busy with work and did not notice that someone stepped into the office. Dutha stood calmly watching. At one point Vidha realized that someone was watching, and she looked after her. She saw the most beautiful sight. Her Dutha stood and watched her smile. To her nothing was more important. Just quietly uttered these .. I then did something I did not think he will ever do. She came Dutha and slapped him and angrily said. Where have you been? Why did you wait this long to show up. Did you know I already thought that neither the feel for me. You're impossible, is not it occur to you to call me, nothing. Angrily she beat him in the chest and he was trying to reassure her. Vidha ... Vidha ... please calm down now I'm here and never again, and never leave you, I promise you that. I love you, silly girl. And I found it hard to wait much but I have first to tell you something ... I then told everything and said that Atarvha came to them because they could no longer see his sister suffer. At first she could not believe in all that she Dutha spoke at the end when he said to her mom and his she fell to the floor and started to cry and to pray for forgiveness.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Meanwhile Duta and Danhi were talking about everything and realize that love. Then Danhi at one time thought that the Duta tied to her heart that belongs to his wife and tried to convince Duta is that it does not matter. And so everybody was happy. Dutha accepted Danhi as her mother and often had the feeling that is in front of him, his mother. Duta and Danhi he married and moved to Banaras. When they were born two grandsons of Vidha and Dutha and two of them were the happiest grandmother and grandfather in the world. Since they were twins boy and a girl Vidha decided to call. Viplav and Nakusha. Duta and Danhi were crying because they realize that they are forever linked, and that in their lives from now on only be happiness and love.the end..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for the beautiful story Sara😃 appreciate your efforts DEAR👍🏼 finally its a happy ending...I love happy endings...👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pearl82

Thanks for the beautiful story Sara😃appreciate your efforts DEAR👍🏼finally its a happy ending...I love happy endings...👏

thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Zajie😃
It's an intriguing story dear and has many elements involved. Best part I liked is how you interwove the stories of Dutta and Nakusha with that of Dhani and Viplav and their families. The special touch was Nakusha living on in Dhani through the heart transplant and Duta and Dhani's connection - a connection of the soul and heart ! They story had a lovely happy ending with Duta's son and Vidha uniting and the two sweet angels adding to the bliss. All's well that ends well!
Thanks for writing and really appreciate your efforts.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Magnolia2

Hi Zajie😃

It's an intriguing story dear and has many elements involved. Best part I liked is how you interwove the stories of Dutta and Nakusha with that of Dhani and Viplav and their families. The special touch was Nakusha living on in Dhani through the heart transplant and Duta and Dhani's connection - a connection of the soul and heart ! They story had a lovely happy ending with Duta's son and Vidha uniting and the two sweet angels adding to the bliss. All's well that ends well!
Thanks for writing and really appreciate your efforts.😊

Mag hI ...
I'm glad you liked the story. Thank you for the compliments. This story was supposed to be a bit longer but I had no patience to write. I said I'd finish it and here I am now is finished. You're right,,, for me is the best part of the price relations between two families. I think I managed to do something different story,.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A beautiful story and a beautiful ending, Zajie! 👍🏼 The spiritual connection between Dutta and Dhani was evident throughout your story. On one hand, Nakusha's heart resided in Dhani's chest; on the other hand, Viplav was killed representing Dutta. Your story was a mix of angst, betrayal, pain, love, enchantment, and unity. 😊 All of the essential features needed for an exceptional narrative! 👏 I never thought of assimilating IKRS and LTL together in the form of two grande love stories, Dutta-Dhani and Dutha-Vidha. A sure hit amongst the IKRSians and LTLians on the forum! 😉 I loved how you unified two families with the birth of the twins, Viplav and Nakusha. ❤️ Thank you for entertaining us with this story, Zajie! 🤗 Appreciate all of the effort you've put into writing this extraordinary tale. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

A beautiful story and a beautiful ending, Zajie! 👍🏼 The spiritual connection between Dutta and Dhani was evident throughout your story. On one hand, Nakusha's heart resided in Dhani's chest; on the other hand, Viplav was killed representing Dutta. Your story was a mix of angst, betrayal, pain, love, enchantment, and unity. 😊 All of the essential features needed for an exceptional narrative! 👏 I never thought of assimilating IKRS and LTL together in the form of two grande love stories, Dutta-Dhani and Dutha-Vidha. A sure hit amongst the IKRSians and LTLians on the forum! 😉 I loved how you unified two families with the birth of the twins, Viplav and Nakusha. ❤️ Thank you for entertaining us with this story, Zajie! 🤗 Appreciate all of the effort you've put into writing this extraordinary tale. 😃

thank you my dear. There is little for me unusual story. The relationship between the two families and also to connect the story I was at first strange and then it just an idea for this story. Maybe it should not take longer but is this enough. I hope you enjoyed the story. Maybe I'll continue to write. Now I have a lot of work because I have been gone too long and for health and for travel. when I can not write the printer something nice and easy.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I return this story again, to read it again once

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