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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

What a mesmerizing comeback dear mehr di with a mesmerizing OS "Mesmerized"!!

First of all, i would love to say that I am really very happy to see you back in this forum with a vidha story.. I know how much dedicated you were to this forum... And i had opened an IF acount only becoz you were threatening the silent non members to contribute to the forum.. 😆Isiliye bohot khusi huyi aapko wapas dekh ke yahan..

Coming to this OS, its really really very nice.. I was infact imagining the benaras ghats, the steps, the mandir, the setting of the show and it reminded me of the first episode of IKRS.. the first encounter of vidha.. Loved the bgm that used to be played during those days..

Oh so here dhani was mesmerized by viplav's sher and viplav was mesmerized by this young beauty who was staring at his back..😳 Viplav ka pata nahin but dhani ko zaroor deja vu feeling ayi hogi us shirtless bande ko paani ke andar nahate huya dekh kar.. 😆
Ur description of shirtless viplav, water dripping down his chest hair.. Wow, i remember how we used to stay in this forum day and night and discuss about all these..
Loved ur story.. Good, sweet memories I have.. And it was wonderful to read such a cute encounter of vidha early morning.. You wrote it down so well.. A big round of applause for you👏👏

But sabse zaada khusi huyi aapko wapis dekhke.. You requested us not to read it but i admit that i was reading your OS from about an hour back, opened your post several times to read the updates😆😆
Keep visiting the forum.. Will love to see our family member often in our se

cond home😃


Hey Bhooki sherni.😆..jus like me u want to roar n satiate..Dnt
u???😆

Im here only dear in n out but i must confess i was very much busy with my inlaws n two weeks bac thy left...its been tiring to handle the responsibilities aftr a long time for a period of 3 n half mnths...Its too much for me...F*Ly pouring in from all places n a auntinlaw xpired...Didnt get much time wen house is full n crowded daily!!But wenever free i hopped in to read watever the members contributed here...Tis is my sec home...i wont go away...

The Os written was due to Vidhas absense in my life..The shor finished at ny home n i felt empty n lonely ...otherwise my daily routine was here...So missed them,the forum n members n discussions n all..So decided to writeup where i could feel connected once again with my couple n u all...I always loved Tat tattoo no matter wat n i wished they had shown Dhanis attraction to it,her curiousness or anything related to it...it wud had been a hell of a scene...Jo bhi hai khair...I wanted all of u to drool on Mrs body so gve a visual of how tempting it is!!Happy tat u njoyed n i pen to write more now for u all..thanx for appreciating dear😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

Mere pyari si Mehr, yeh sirf OS kyu banaya hai? 😲 Please do continue. Your writing has always had the effect of capturing our imaginations and permitting them to run freely. ☺️ I can see you doing quite a bit more with this story and its direction. 😉 As always, you had my attention from the very first line to the last. 👏 I could clearly visualize each word of your story as if I was watching the episode itself. 😃 I find his back just as sexy as you do, Mehr! 😆

Just for you, my dear. 😳





Nooo Dazz😆😆..i wont reply man if u post his back right on my face..😳...it is damn injurious to eyes...I dunno how the ladies around him control themselves...Wat a sexy back ...HAYEEE

Thanx for the lovely comments dear..Tis is Os cos u kno my Ss ka kya haal hai...😆 tats y sticking to short stories so tat i can finish it quick quick...I know all v Vidha lovers had still so much to see n yearn ...but it was shortlived ..Never mind i will be writing some of the scenes which i wanted to see or imagined afterall their chemistry was explosive !!N i still remember ur request 18+😳..very soon i will fulfill tat too...Wat to do now???its only writing n visualising that wud satiate our thirst n love for them...!!

Thanx Dazz once again...it means a lot to me yaar..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: mehraan


Nooo Dazz😆😆..i wont reply man if u post his back right on my face..😳...it is damn injurious to eyes...I dunno how the ladies around him control themselves...Wat a sexy back ...HAYEEE

Thanx for the lovely comments dear..Tis is Os cos u kno my Ss ka kya haal hai...😆 tats y sticking to short stories so tat i can finish it quick quick...I know all v Vidha lovers had still so much to see n yearn ...but it was shortlived ..Never mind i will be writing some of the scenes which i wanted to see or imagined afterall their chemistry was explosive !!N i still remember ur request 18+😳..very soon i will fulfill tat too...Wat to do now???its only writing n visualising that wud satiate our thirst n love for them...!!

Thanx Dazz once again...it means a lot to me yaar..


Please continue writing and participating in the forum, my dear. You've truly been missed! 🤗 I'll be on the lookout for that request. 😉 I'm already excited thinking of your fiery storytelling capabilities. 😳


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Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Magnolia2

Fascinating story!...very visual and energetic...brings back many memories of the show as well as the forum...



Thanks Mag for ur kind words...I really appreciate it😃...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: zajedno

my dear. finally to some of the old members back. and in style. a beautiful story. I have a feeling like watching a Mishal and Eisha this your story. thank you dear. First you came back and got us another hundred pleased with this story.

Dazz. lion remains a lion. the best of his pictures and the front and the back. hmhmhmhm


Oh ur welcome Zaj..Thanks for ur motivating n kind words😃...Actually felt happy cos i nvr had much interaction with u ..but u do have a pleasing personality to bond n gel with members around...Nice to read it u loved it.. Im not tat much of a gud writer but im trying my hands into...as Vidha still do hold my
dreams n wild imaginations..😆.So definately i will b penning down few more..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Hi meher di,
An unique idea to focus on the SHER tattoo.
👏
Please continue, with u here I feel like d old ikrs is back
Want more from u, I read it as d beginning of a great ff.
Viplab is mischievous d same way, but dhani bhi kam nehi, was bz watching ghur ghurke...hahaha.it is really hilarious.
😆
Take care.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Mishfan

Hai hai...Mehr...you are back after a long sabbatical & back with a bang, I should say...

I have to admit, I never have the patience to read thru' FFs / SSs...hence
missed out on reading those lovely romantic stories, i.e., until now.
This is my very first OS I fully read & enjoyed it...as I was reading, I could visualize
Mishal & Eisha acting out these scenes...& your description of a hot hot Viplav...😉
remembered some of those discussions during the show...😆
Thank you dear...thoroughly enjoyed reading it from beg. To the end...👏
Welcome back, stay put & keep entertaining us with more ...



Heyyy Sudha...😃 hru dear???Quite a surprise for me tat u havent read anything on the forums...There are fanfics sections in IF n man wat all of them write...brilliant!! Anyways i take tis as a complement then tat i compelled u to read...It means a lot ...U njoyed reading it...n tats wat i wanted all of us to relive n cherish their moments...Thanku so much for making me feel so happy !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First of all thanks for writing this OS...WELCOME BACK...beautiful one...while reading i just kept visualizing MR and ES as VIP and dhani...Thanks to your writing and their acting...I had ALWAYS loved the cute nokjhoks...both the actors were good at that..I never liked the hurried love confession and marriage...once again I appreciate your efforts...keep writing more😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautifully written Mehraan! Thanks for sharing with the members!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: awida

Wow. you wrote an OS . thank you so much Mehraan. I'll read it later. in sha Allah.


Thanks Awida...i will be awaiting for ur reply dear...wud want to kno any more suggestions...😆😆😆

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