TS: Madhusudan Dada; Part 3 on page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Lovely Piece Of Writing Choti. ❤️

Well, I haven't heard this story before so it would be interesting to to read this. 😊

Aww, Gopal is such a cutie and I feel bad for him. ❤️

As always, you have your own magic with words.👏👏

Thanx For Pm.

Update Soon.

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Mili

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Never heard it Pro.
Its too beautiful and touching.
Aww,I feel really touched with Gopal's happenings.
I really hope this story brings happy vibes in the end.

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Jayeeta Paul

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Posted: 9 years ago

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awesome start...⭐️⭐️⭐️...poor little Gopal, he is mistreated by his new classmates...😲...he is even scared to go to the forest......waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...

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Semanti Chakraborty

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Posted: 9 years ago

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How could you read my mind? This is my favourite story which I have been reading from my childhood. There are so many devotional stories and songs in Bengali...you know once Debi didi and me planned to make a thread for devotional Bengali songs but due to lack of time that could not be done 😔 but now you are here to share the gems of Bengal with our friends with your unique writing skill 😊 I'm so happy to see that my little sister has narrated my favourite story so beautifully 👏

Please update soon! I love love love the conversations of Kanha and the child ❤️ specially the way He introduces Himself to the boy

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sunitikapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

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I haven't heared this story...and I love the way you narrated.

Beautiful as always.

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Srutha

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa
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I have heard this story so many times 😳

I love this story 😳 It shows the value of Bhakti 😊

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proteeti

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: ..RamKiJanaki..
Wow Pro, this story sounds so interesting! I never heard it before, would love learning it from you! Do post the next chapter soon.

I hope the story has a happy ending! Poor Gopal!

Thank you so very much Janudi! It's a really sweet story, and it dies have a happy ending! I'll update soonish. 😳

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proteeti

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: shabari14
Oh, I have heard of this story before, but the storyline was kind of different. It is one of my favorites(I love a lot of stories!). Thanks for writing this, Pro, and please continue!

Oh, that's really great! This story is rather famous! I'm glad I got to write my version of it! 😳

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proteeti

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