OS: The Earth is Content, but the Sky is Thirsty

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Snehamadhuri
Beautiful OS Radhika , content is great , you weaved the story around a simple , but highly emotional feeling , the rain , clouds and the sky and the earth , all are blessed because of the blissful presence of the Divine kid ! Though very short [ yes wanted to read more and more to lose myself in that beautiful description !] it has musical musings ! 👏

Thank you so much Didi! I'm happy that you liked the little write-up! Yes, the whole of the creation is blessed when the Lord's gaze touches it!

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06
ya so true dr...😳...it's raining so heavily here in Kolkata......awesome os...⭐️⭐️⭐️...beautifully portrayed...👏👏👏...loved it...❤️❤️❤️...thank u 4 pm...😃...

Thank you so much Jayeetadi! I'm glad you liked it!

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
That was short but a beautiful piece of writing
I love it

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you!

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection
beautiful OS
loved it dear!
really wonderful!

Thank you so much Nehadi!

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Beautiful OS Radhikerani 😳

Thanks Belladi!

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Yashomati
O my god! I cud visualize each and every line. Its so beautifully written. How d shyam ghan drenched our ghan shyam,very beautiful. You are a superb writer Pro!

Thank you so much Yashodi! I'm glad that I could make you visualize the scene!

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Anapneo3003
beautifully written👏

Thank you!

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Avyakta

@Avyakta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

A great OS Radhika . Krishna as a child , famous for his divine displays through his childish naughty mischief !👏

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Mohini

@..Dharma_dasi..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

On this beautiful morning of Sunday just wished to write a poem... as its inpiration are you Radhe and that beautiful song...
I m posting it here. (hope you dont mind... tell if so please)
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Bheeg gaya hai tan phir bhi abhi pyaasa mera mann !!!

Aaj giri dharti par phir ye tip tip boonde aise
Saware baj rahe ho teri payal me ghungru jaise
Pulkit ho uthi khili har daal par ye kaliyan
Sajane ko tatpar ho mano gokul ki sab galiyan...
Jaise ye manmauji pawan chal rahi idhar udhar
Yu lage tujhe chu ke rahi hai ye guzar
Itra rahi hai ye milke tujhse aaj
Aur bata rahi hai ki phir pehna hai tumne kare badra ka taj...
Behek jati hu sunke main machal jaata hai mann
Racha lo raas phir mehka do aaj vrindavan...
Apne chote se kutir me mayur ki bhanti jhoom jate hai hum
Masum aatm boondo ko chum ye palke kar deti hai num
Tumhara prativimb laage ye mausam pyaare
Tumhara hi ashish hai ki harsh me doobe hai hum saare...

😊 😳 😳 😳 😊

Edited by ..Dharam_dasi.. - 10 years ago