a poem by me...

hey guys!!

as promised,here is kind of a deep poem written by me...

hope u guys like it...

WALKING DOWN A LONELY ROAD

once i was walking down a lonely road,
i was tired and in my brain there was a heavy load.
i was thinking ,why did this happen to me?
why cant people just let me be?

why is it that gud ppl go through bad things?
and have no1 to turn to when they want to sing.
and suddenly,i saw an old man crying,
nevertheless,he stopped me and asked why i was sighing,

i said it was personal,and had no wish to trouble him,
he just blinked at me and said "do u think i am that dim?"
so i laughed and told him what my best friend had done,
he stayed silent throughout the story,at last said that i'd won.

i said "i dont understand what u mean "
he explained"she did what she did,but the great thing u did was that u stayed silent and didnt make a scene,
u didnt show people what she did to u,
do u kno the power to do that,lies with few"

i smiled and asked him why he was sad,
he said"bcoz i was looking at this created world,and wondering who wasnt bad"
i sat there stunned,i asked "what do u mean?"
he smiled and his eyes twinkled"u will figure it out,u r clever,it seems"

i blinked and he was gone,
oh my god,i had just met the creator of this world,to me it finally dawned.
i looked up and saw a superbright star twinkling at me,
i will make the world a better place god,u will see...

tell me ur views

luv

geet

Awesum.Coincidently i came acroos ur poem ven i was feeling low thanx for giving a ray of hope n light.i hope u keep posting such gud poems 😳 .I ll b eagerly waiting for next poem. 😊

WELL DONE! 👏

awww,thx soo much!!!!i will if u guys wanna read..i even do romantics...... 😉
light stuff u kno but still emotional....

and 1 more thing:dont feel low,ok?
pm me if u ever do and i will get u high up in the sky,flying again,ok?
luv ya
geetu

awesum geetu 👏 a very good poem indeed

hey thts a gr8 poem......

kudos👏