Arylie FF: Full circle, Chapter 21, note updated on Pg 94 - Page 53

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Posted: 3 years ago

Such an emotional chapter!


I'm actually happy that Aditya has decided to accept the help without any attitude and has a great reason (Neel) to go to rehab and work on his addiction!


Neel crying under the table had me shedding tears. I needed to stop for a bit before I continued 🙁.

But kids are resilient and loved how Arpita diverted his attention all the while still explaining to him that it was okay to cry.


Yes, it's going to be a tough journey for all ahead, but Imlie and Aryan are soo amazing together. The communication and understanding they have for and about each other is remarkable.


Malini wanting to tell Neel about her situation and death is just soo heartbreaking đŸ„ș. Goodness it's just a story but I'm crying just thinking how you will write this out to explain to a 5 year old his mother, basically the only parent he has actually had actively in his life won't be around much longer to see him grow up. 😭😭


Amazing update as always!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Rathore. To be edited

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Posted: 3 years ago

Docccc!!

U are faster than Adi switching between Imlie and Malini!!!

Stuck....😭😭

Will come back tmrw...and read!

Sure thing!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Ooo God I don't understand how that little soul is going to handle knowing about his mother health poor boy.

Even I feel bad for malini now. A wife , daughter or friend anyone can be bad but not mother. She always worries for children.

Such an emotional chapter.

Thanks for tagging and as always ur fab😘

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Posted: 3 years ago

For Part 13

And the final showdown happened and what a showdown that was. I was seriously able to picturize that scene in front of my eyes with your words. Such fine written scenes were those. It was more than amazing. 👏

Imlie my darling. I'm amazed how much this girl loves and trusts Aryan. They have come a long way in their journey. They are perfect. Just perfect.

That unedited updateđŸ€Ș

Girl that was soo hot. Aryan loosing that tight control over his dark side and letting it come out to play. đŸ”„ đŸ”„

50-50 partnership is great but this domination is something else.

If only they give even 1% of this Aryan on our screen...... Sigh

Wishful thinkings.

It was an amazing update. Loved every bit of it.

Edited by Sheldon-Cooperr - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

For Part 14

Neel my baby. He is soo adorable and funny and witty. He is the hero, heroine and everything of this chapter for me.

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Walking talking contraceptive.đŸ€Ł

Neel and his Aryan Chachu are such darling. Their bonding is so lovely and funny.

Aditya and Arpita.

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Their scene was really nice.

Finally Aditya decided to get help. Really happy for him and more importantly for Neel. Their scene was so emotional. Their conversation just broke my heart.đŸ„ș

It was a awesome part. Really loved it.

Thank you so much for the tag.đŸ€—

Edited by Sheldon-Cooperr - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

i love neel so much he is such a delightful kid, realistically written without being cheesy or over the top.

i also see GM as this adi, i can't see the new guy at all it just doesn't feel right! i loved this chapter and im glad adi is getting his shit together so he can be a good dad to neel especially when malini is no longer here.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Just read 14 and 15 in one go ( had a dealine so couldnot catch up). Just too sweet. Really hope that Aryan change his mind abt "t walking contraception" and they do have kids. Lovely updates. Thanks again for taking us in another world with your Stories.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Aditya arpita and neel not a bad idea đŸ€©đŸ€©đŸ€© i am eagerly waiting for aditya and arpita scenes after malini and aditya conversation.. đŸ€©đŸ€© and as always ...... the story was lit and aryan imlies understanding is like cherry on top of cakeđŸ„°đŸ„°đŸ„°đŸ„°đŸ„°

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Posted: 3 years ago

For part 15

How amazing it is that you made a 5 year old behave like a 5 year old one not some 50 year old gyaan guru, children likes to behave in fictions.

Arpita and Neel counting their blessing was really heart-warming.

No matter how much devil Malini was, she really does love her child. Her convo with Imlie was nice even thpugh I hardly feel any sympathy for her.

It is difficult to think about Malini's health and its impact on Neel. How is he gonna deal with this news when his papa is also absent?😭

Amazing part.Full of emotions. You really have a way with your words. I'm always amazed by it.

Edited by Sheldon-Cooperr - 3 years ago

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