SaAz OS : Of the Moons and The Woods 13/11 (Index on pg12) - Page 3

Originally posted by: subhkisonu

Ankie is back with a bang!!!!

🤗

Haha ! I needed that push 😆 and that is what the sbb n sbs did to me 🤣

I have already expressed my feelings about this OS to you on WA😳

I can see the old Ankie , "Taabeez" wali Ankie once again😳

U SPEAK TOO HIGH.. 😆 Half kin, that was written in an impulse this is too but that was something which I never can be again 🤣 at least for now 😆 😆

it is just beautiful! so romantic, musical and soothing😳

I loved the last para most

And that last line "Passion overboard" just took my breath away☺️

Ab Arzoo cant be Rizwaan Khan and say "Mandira can we have.. please" ☺️ 🤣

Loved loved loved it!!! Buss!!!❤️

thank you thank you thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: roserox99

Wow, this is exceptional!
You have an amazing talent Ankie!
Write more! 😃😃😃

Originally posted by: TeriGalliyan.

Ankyy Babbyy! <3

This was superb! I love how you showed them married and took us into a flashback. The use of the word "baaz" was well done. I love Sahir's character here, the way how you potrayed him. And last when Arzoo in her sleep says "SGC" was the cherry on the cake! Superb.

Keep the good work coming <3

Love,

Nish

Originally posted by: -ProudHarshad-

OMG Ankie dearest

I loved this OS wah wah good job 👏

Keep it up!! You rocks ❤️👍🏼

Originally posted by: AmbroseFever

Mine! 😊

Unres.

It has been so long since I read some of your works and Allah knows why I am so damn in love with them. Absolute perfection Ankie! Loved it to the core. The fact that the dialogues were minimal was fab. That just added to the beauty of the couple itself. I loved how it was from Sahir's POV and how he reflects on the life he had until she came into his life. The worsd exchanged at the end were simply amazing and then yes, the "passion overboard" had me going gaga. Lol.

The moment I started reading I couldn't stop. My eyes were glued to the screen, simply soaking up every single word, period, comma, exclamation that you wrote. Naturally, when it ended I was on the verge of crying because I wanted to read more and more. Girl, I missed your writing. If time had been lenient on me I would've continued reading all your works but it didn't. I'm so glad I took some time off to read this. Reminded me what I have been missing out on and specially what a fool I am.

Awestruck, amazed, and SaAzified. Thanks so much and please write more on SaAz. Dying to read more of your works. Drats, it's time I hunt down your index again. I remember those AsYa works and gosh they are calling out to me😃.

Love ya!

❤️

Akira (or better known by my middle name: Raz)

Originally posted by: gowtu

Whoa... U hv started write on them...!!!!
Uuummm y I m not surprised !? Haha..

Okie... 1stly sry... I did try to imagine saAz while I reading it...
Hut u knw it was difficult for me to do so :-\

Mere dimag mein tho mangalpuri asya hi the *sign*

But I seriously loved it.. It was so beautiful is ankie...
Simple nd lvly one <3
Nd end of the chappy was cute...

Do write more... I knw u ll ;-)

Originally posted by: Amulya9

OK...though I don't watch humsafars ...
I read it coz I know how much u love this show...
its really awesome ankie ... loved it...

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Hey Ankie, you know I don't follow Humsafars but I read it cause YOU wrote it. Have seen an episode or two and could relate to it a lil bit.

Loved it. Since I don't follow the show this is the most I can say. But definitely a well written piece.

P.S. Keep writing 😃

Originally posted by: s_danger

Ankie Di it is lovely. Could exactly visualize the scene.

Thank you! Whatever I write I always make it a point that one can visualize it.. I might have less words in my dictionary and I consider it as my biggest flaw and I tend to go ocd-iac when detailing about the scenes😆 but anyway thank you! 😊

Wow...Gabbar and his designerbaz nakhrebaaz intern are now married. And she is all upset with him..Haye...and he has taken to his nickname so much "Gabbar Singh"

Yes! that will happen and he will sometime soon in the near future.. 😉 😆

She too continues with Allah knows. Too cute...

The hen pecked husband: I could imagine. The entire world shivered when he was around, and he shuddered when she was around. I could see her hitting him with belan. Shaadi se pehle Jhumroo Khan and shadi ke baad belan, laptop, even hot tawa (with the burnt toast over it)

Ahahahahahhahaa! Isnt it the tale of all men at the end of the day 🤣

Aisa kuchh serial main dekhne ko mila to kitna achha hoga.
Iske aage kuchh aur hain kya?

Hoga hoga zarur hoga.. jaldi hoga! 😳

as per this. nope.. but some more in near future zarur hoga 😃

Originally posted by: -Raj-

Exceptional!!
Fantastic!!
you write just awesome stuff!!

such a pleasure to read something you've written after such a long while!

ty for the pm.

PS who is saaz?