SaAz drabble- glad your mine

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey humsafarians! I'm Sharon my first fiction in the forum, its basically a drabble, i couldn't go much in depth with sahir's character as his past is not yet been revealed.
Its slightly different from the show. here u go





glad your mine

It all seems like a Dream, a blissful dream. I never knew if life could change in few moments, but it did.she came as a breath of fresh air in my unrealistic fashion world. She came as a beaming rays of sunshine in my haunting darkness. She came as a rythm to my lonely cry. She has awaken feelings in me that until now i didn't realise existed, she has made me worthwhile she is the fragrance of jasmine and dew drops of blossom she is my desire my arzoo.i know you are tired of me telling you the same things but i can't help it maybe its because I'm crazily in love with my wife or maybe its just her company that spoils me, I'm getting addicted to her constant blabbering and can you believe I started talking a bit more so that she would cutdown her useless talk and listen to me not all time but atleast sometimes

He could her the washroom door knob open , he closed his dairy hurriedly."i can't believe you sat with your diary again , you talk to that book more than you talk to me"
She was clad in gorgeous green sari with silver embroidery and hairs falling in bunch on her shoulders .
"You look mesmerising" he said moving in her direction. "Dont change the topic "she said fidgeting things in a draw. "What are doing, don't tell me your searching for those tamarind , i hate that sucking habit of yours , I'm tolerating all for my baby"
She closed the draws and sat on their bed and huffed in annoyance "I'm no good to you right, I'm not like those fashion bimbo's , I'm so unlike you, i never allow you to speak but poor you keep listening to me and today also you had to cancel your work because i forced you to take me movie and.I know im overreacting but I'm, i don't know it's my hormonal changes , i get scared and keep puking all day"
He sat next to her tucking her hairs he held her hand.
"It's normal with a 2 month pregnant women , everything will be fine and I'm not like your abbu arzoo you need to trust me on that , i would never ever leave you nor my baby" he said kissing her palms.
" i know you would never do that, i trust you but all those bimbo's they keeping drooling over you " she pouted.
"i cant help it , your husband is too handsome" he winked while he got a glare from her.
" im glad your not one among those bimbo's, i don't speak just because i love to hear when you speak, i craved for someone who could be in my life and share everything with me and may be it has been fulfilled now" he said pecking her lips.
"I hate your dairy, she is my ex "
"I hate your tamarind they like eww"
"I hate you your moustache, they prick me when you" before she could complete his kissed her passionately making them fall over the bed.
" i never asked for a demo now"she breathed through the kisses. " but i thought to give one" "sahir what about the movie" "arzoo we have better things to do now movie could wait" ...
They couldn't go for the movie there were busy you see.
I know its crap but couldn't help from writing.
You can shower me with feedback, criticism welcomed
Edited by smj7 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww that was awesome.
So cute.
loved it.
Do write more plzz.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Sharon 😊
Wow this was good...
I liked sahir s thoughts..the way he was penning in his diary..
I hate that sucking habit of yours😆
I can't help afterall ur husband is handsome😉
I hate that diary..ur ex
N his hair pricking her while he kisses😳
It was super cutteee
Lovely piece of writing
Love
Sara😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was so cute!! just loved it!! do write more!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow this superb.
i love it.
the way sahir penned down his thoughts for his wife were very beautiful.
And then their cute fight was lovely.
It was awesome to read a boring sahir romancing his wife.
So cute one shot 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely...
Surprixd 2 read out hamsafars at such advanced level😉
Means direct pregnancy ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww that was cute and funny, hope your write some more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved it..
first os in this forum..
u inaugurated..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Ms.Foxy.Angel_

Aww that was awesome.

So cute.
loved it.
Do write more plzz.

thanku glad u liked it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinky06

Hi Sharon 😊

Wow this was good...
I liked sahir s thoughts..the way he was penning in his diary..
I hate that sucking habit of yours😆
I can't help afterall ur husband is handsome😉
I hate that diary..ur ex
N his hair pricking her while he kisses😳
It was super cutteee
Lovely piece of writing
Love
Sara😊

hey sara
even i hate that sucking habit😆

husband is very hansome😳

im happy u liked it ..thanku🤗
ya dairy has become sahir bestiee and ex of arzoo😉

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