OS: School Hijacked (UPDATED @ Pg7)

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@bugsbunny12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

I have updated scene 5!!! Tell me if u like it...

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@Misbah12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: kriya37

Oh sorry 😆 i thought ur a boy bcoz ur name is misbah!! 😲😆

I know...many people get confused with name that whether I am a girl or a boy??😆

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Magical_KaSh

@Magical_KaSh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

the story is getting interesting now

btw abhigyan kicking shoaib and making him fall in the hole was serious one

bt i js could not control laughin at dat 🤣 🤣

plz do cont soon and make it like ff i mean post it like ff update on the next page and edit the first page stating on which page the next part is

hope u dont mind the suggestion 😳

btw u have not answered the questions of MOTW 😡

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@bugsbunny12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Bipin2012

the story is getting interesting now

btw abhigyan kicking shoaib and making him fall in the hole was serious one

bt i js could not control laughin at dat 🤣 🤣

plz do cont soon and make it like ff i mean post it like ff update on the next page and edit the first page stating on which page the next part is

hope u dont mind the suggestion 😳

btw u have not answered the questions of MOTW 😡

Thanx for the suggestion bro 😃 Nope i dont mind it...in fact i like ppl suggesting new ideas!

And i have answered all the questions 😕 Each & every question u asked me?!! U didn't see? 😲

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

@Om- I am honoured that my story inspired you and the best thing i feel about my story is you started writing after my story. This is a big compliment for me. You keep writing. Its a amazing story. U r a wonderful writer. After my story shapath got an brilliant writer like you.

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@bugsbunny12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Mansi.
@Om- I am honoured that my story inspired you and the best thing i feel about my story is you started writing after my story. This is a big compliment for me. You keep writing. Its a amazing story. U r a wonderful writer. After my story shapath got an brilliant writer like you.

Thank u dear 😃 Ur also a brilliant writer...after all ur the one who inspired me! 😉 U rock mansi!

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@bugsbunny12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Scene 6

Gautam, Anand, Chandan & Mayank hide behind a school bus. They see Mahesh taking rounds in front of the basement. Gautam sees Shaurya behind the tree and signals to him indicating that they should now make Mahesh unconscious. Shaurya nods.

Gautam takes a stone and throws it near Mahesh. Hearing the sound, Mahesh turns alertly and points his gun at all directions.

Mahesh: Who's there? Show urself!

Shaurya swiftly changes his position from the tree to another tree nearer to Mahesh. Mahesh is looking at all directions & is getting scared.

Shaurya comes from behind and puts his hand on Mahesh's mouth to stop him from shouting, then Shaurya twists Mahesh's head with such force that Mahesh bcomes unconscious.

Gautam: Chandan and Anand...drag his body and hide it somewhere.

Anand & Chandan: Sir!

Shaurya: We should get moving now...

A phone comes to Gautam from Aditya.

Gautam: Hello?

Aditya: Sir another terrorist is strolling to ur right...quickly hide!

Gautam: U mean near the bushes?

Aditya: Yes sir!

Gautam: But Astha is standing there...

Aditya: Yes, she is over there. I will alert her also...but maybe she has already seen him and is hiding now.

Gautam: OK, i will see...

Gautam, Shaurya and Mayank crouch on the floor and move slowly beside the wall. They see Roy taking stroll there...Astha is also there, she is hiding in the bushes. Roy has not yet seen her.

Gautam signals Astha to move away from there as Roy could see her any moment, but Astha is unable to move as if she makes minimum movement, Roy will see her.

Now what will happen? Will Roy see Astha? Will the police be able to save the kids, ACP and Astha? Find out all these only by regularly reading my OS!

I'll update soon...😃