Inshi FF: ...Hypnotized... Part 4 Page 5

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Hey Guys! This is Andy! Your friend Andrea!!! :)

PART ONE: Below😆

PART TWO: Page Two

PART THREE/Authors Note: Page Three

PART FOUR: Page 5

Please read.. Criticism and comments are more than welcome...!! 😊

I kinda rushed it so please bear with me if there are spelling errors.. :)
Here you go! And if someone personally pms me to continue it... id be honoured! :)
Its kinda confusing because the real story and plot isn't shown... I figured i'd explain that in part 2 that ONLY if you guys want me to continue! 😳 enough bak bak from me.. enjoy the Story!!!!😃
INSHI:

InShi OS

"Kaam chor kahi ki! Chal lag ja kaam pe! Mere joote polish kiye ke nahi?"

"Curse you! Mujhe noker bana kar rakha hai!" Whispered Indira as she looked away from the master of cruelty. His kinky jeans and loose jumpers, and his ruffled up hair, which Indira thought he won't comb till the end of the world. Yes this was the careless, irresponsible man who somehow captured Indira and made her a servant of his house. Don't even ask how...

"Maine tum se kuch poocha? why aren't you answering me?" bellowed MR Ricky Diwan.

"I don't have to answer! Maybe In your dreams Mr Goof!"

"Oooh! So now you want to stalk my dreams and what I do at night?"

"Oh please Mr Goof! Aap na ye chote mote sapne dekhna band ki jiye ok? i'd rather go and shoot goose illegally at night all alone, and don't care of getting raped then stalk YOU!"

"Miss Sharma, you are head of SC company na? Toh aap ye nahi janti ke raath ko goose band hote hai? Ooh Jungly goose right? "

Indira clenched her jaws...

"Mr Goof aap ko to main!"

"Kya? Kya kya kya kya ? Kya kar kya legi aap? Miss Sharma??"

"Meri ek laat se tum America pounch jao ge! Samje! Aur who bhi Passport aur boarding pass ke bina!"

"Acha, Then thats great Miss Sharma! Paise bach jayege mere! Kyu? "

Indira stepped close and was about to lift her leg before he interrupted again.

"Ek minute! ek minute! jab aisa moka mil hi raha hai to cocaine, aur cannabis le kar ao? Aise hi ja raha hu na? Kisi ko kya pata lage ga? Huh? Main abhi aata hu!" Ricky smiled and rushed away too scared incase she literally kicked him.

"God kya larka hai!" said Indira to herself. Then she smiled. "Par ye to manna hi parega ke harkate chote bachu ki tara karte hai!" she laughs.

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"Ricky! Indira come down here! Pandit Ji has come to give blessings!" howling cats sounded like that. Yes that was Simmi Diwan. Ricky's Mother. She was the complete opposite of Ricky. She would pray and be sanskaari all the time but when it came to fashion or beauty, no matter how much freaking shades of lipstick she'd try and even if she took private make-up tutoring lessons for 3 hours a day, 7 times a week. No she would just do what SHE thought was beautiful. Trust me if you wanted to be around her whenever she just got ready, you really had to do 10 minutes research for flashy but sarcastic compliments to pass her HOW-DO-I-LOOK? exam..

"I'm coming Mrs Diwan!... AKA Goof #2.." Indira added.

"MOM! I'M STILL HAVING A SHOWER! I'LL COME DOWN IN A MINUTE!" Ricky shouted from upstairs.

"Oh What an idiot!" Said Indira.

"Oh Indeeera! coome stand here. Pandit Ji tumhara intezaar kar rahee thee!" Simmi said that. Told you she sounds like a cat.

Ricky also comes running down. God he looks so sexy in wet hair! Thought Indira. Oh stop it Indira! what are you thinking??

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"Bhagwaan tum dono ko kush rakhe, Aaj raksha bhandan hai na to tum dono bhai bahen ko ashirwaat deta hu. Ab beta apne bhai ko rakhi pehna do"

Indira and Rishi stared at each other in shock...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very interesting!! Great work! 👏 Eagerly waiting for the next update. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice chapter. You really writes too good. Mr. Goof & mr. Goof #2. I can't stop my laughter. 🤣 And last but not the least InShi as bro-sis. Now I'm more curious. Please Update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting update.

Mr. Goof & Goof #2 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice & interestin update. Lekin InShi aur bro sis??? 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey bhagwaan panditji ne unko bro-sis samajh liya.

Oh God.😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
n pandit ne INSHI ko bro-sis samajh liya hope aisa na ho.pls INSHI ko bro-sis mat banana.n write nxt chapter soon.
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Originally posted by: designersaini

nice update
n pandit ne INSHI ko bro-sis samajh liya hope aisa na ho.pls INSHI ko bro-sis mat banana.n write nxt chapter soon.

bro-sis hote to inshi hote kya buddhu
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UPDATED UPDATED UPDATED UPDATED UPDATED UPDATED UPDATED UPDATED UPDATED
Hey guys I updated It..
Kinda rushed it to make way for studies but yeah ! Hope you like! Oh and Inshi being Bro-sis confusion will be revealed... 😳😆
Please read and comment/criticize/like..
Here you go:

Chapter Two:

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As soon as Ricky heard the Pandit say "Bhai-behen" he was biffed. He wanted to laugh so hard at the Pandit and scream and shout that Miss Sharmma could never be his sister.

Indira, upon hearing those words, just realized and recalled the day Ricky had confessed his love.

***FlashBack***

"I love you Indu and I'm not lying this time! Agar aap ko mere pyaar ka imtehaan lena hai to lijiye par mere pyaar ko abhi se hi joote matt tehrayie!" Ricky blurted out.

"Ricky pishli baar bhi tumne joot kaha tha! Aur Ricky tum jaise insaan se mujhe kabhi pyaar nahi hoga! Ghar pe, Mummy aur Papa dono mil kar meri sagai ki tareeq dekh rahe hai aur main un..." Replied Indira.

"Kya unko? Tumhari zindagi ke faisle woh karege! jo tumare sage ma baap bhi nahi hai! Trust me Indu, Mera yakeen karo! wo tumhari shadi jald se jald sirf is liye karna chahte hai, kyunke jo will aap ke pita ne likha tha, Us me ye saf saf likha hai ke aap ki shaadi ke baad, Unko tumhare ma baap ka aada hisa milega! Unki aadi jaidat ke paise!" Ricky bellowed angrily.

"Ricky buss! Main janti hu ke mere parents paiso ke buukhe hai lekhin is main unki koi galti nahi hai! Unhe kabhi bhi mahelo main rahne ka moka milha hai kya?" Indira said in order to defend her parents.

"Indu tum samaj nahi rahi ho! I know that you love me Indu! I know! Tum mujhse joot zaroor bol sakti ho lekhin tumhari aankhen mujse joot nahi bol sakti hai!" Uttered Ricky.

"Acha theek hai toh saabitt kar dalo! Agar tum mujhe ek mahine ke liye apne ghar main noker banaa kar rak sakte ho, aur wo bhi mujse batameezi se pesh aa sakte ho to phir Maa kasam, parivaar ko chor kar tumare paas aa jaogi!" Commanded Indira as she knew Ricky would never do that.

"Toh theek hai! Idea tum ne hi diya Indu! Tumhe main apne ghar main Noker bana kar rakhu ga! Tab tak jab tak tum khud mujse shaadi ke liye haa kar dogi! " Answered Ricky angrily.

"Ricky tum mujhe tumari noker bante hue dek sakto ho?" Said Indira teary-eyed.

"Nahi! aur na hi dekhna chahta hu! par agar aisa karne se aap hamesha hamesha ke liye meri ho jayegi toh phir main ek mahine ka dard sehne ke liye tayaar hu!" Whispered Ricky.

"I can't believe it Ricky" Cried Indira.

***FlashBack_EndsZ***

Indira shook out the memory and wiped her tears.

"Pandit Ji maaf ki jiye par ye mere Bhai nahi ho sakte, Maaf kardijiye lekhin aaj main yahan kisi ko bhi raakhi nahi baand sakhti!" and with that she raced back up the stairs sniffing.

Ricky smiled at his self as he knew that his Indu did indeed love him.

"Tuum Kyuuu hass rahe hooo Riiickkyy!" Howled Simi.

"Oh ye waaah waaah band karo Mom, You sound like a cat not like Aishwariya Rai!" laughed Ricky.

"Oh shut up Ricky! and anyway, Salman ne mujhe kiss kiya tha! And that obviously means that he misses Aishwariya because I INDEED look liike Aaash!!!" smiled Simi checking her makeup in her poodle shaped mini mirror for the twentieth time that day.

"Yeah right Mom even Aishwariya wouldn't go to sleep wearing a Gucci dress and Jimmy Choo high heels!" Ricky rolled his eyes.

"Raat ko hi to ek aurat apne husbaand keee liyee khuubsuurat lagnii chahiiiyee!" Simi raised an eyebrow.

"Oh gross Mom! Is umar main itni ghatiya baate kar rahi ho! Woh bhi apne bete ke saath! Oh c'mon Mom" Shuddered Ricky and he walked off.

Simi smirked and tossed her butt side to side as she walked off the opposite side.

Indira was watching from upstairs and she laughed.

Oh Ricky! Tume pata nahi hai ke mujhe andar hi andar kitni bechaini se ho rahi hai ke kab ye ek mahina khatam hoga! Chahe bahir se main Jungly billi lagu! Thought Indira shaking her head.

Ricky slowly came behind her unnoticed and put his arms around her and leaned into her hair.

"Mujhe bhi" He Whispered.

Then he gave Indira a small peck on her cheek and left whistling the tune "Le jaye ge, dil wale dluhaniya le jaye ge!"

Indira smiled and sighed. Oh my Mr Goof!! I just love you to bits. She thought then she sighed again.

"Chal Indira safaai karne lag ja!"...

TO BE CONTINUED...

😃!!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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bara rough and tough hai
pls do pm me whenever u update

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