Unconditional Love - inshi ff. part 4 on (page 3)

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Gus this is my first attempt to write a ff. sorry for the mistakes. its just my imagination.

This Is Based On The Current Track. After Last Days Episode:

Rishi Decides To Live His Life To The Fullest , But Couldn't Accept Shweta As His Wife But Gave Her Back Their Friendship.Rishi And Indu Became Very Good Friends. She Was Quiet Surprised By Her Dads Sudden Change. He Lived His Life Thinking That His Love Was There Somewhere Near Him.

On The Other Side Zara, Who Was Not Able To Accept Malik As Her Husband. Rishi's Words Were Haunting Her. Once She Met With An Accident. She Was Hospitalized. She Had Injury In Her Head. After That Incident She Got Her Memory Back. She Realized Who She Was. Yes She Was Indira Sharma. No Mrs. Indira Rishi Kumar. She Was On Mission To Find Out How Zara Died And How She Became Zara. She Travelled Through The Life Of Zara And Found That Truth. Once Accidently She Saw The Diary Of Zara Which Was Hidden In Malik Khans Room. She Took It And Read

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"Zara And Malik Were Married And Were Living Happily In Mumbai. One Day A Bomb Blast Happened In Mumbai And Zara Was Given The Responsibility Of The Case. She Was An Efficient Officer. When She Found The Truth She Was Surprised. It Was Malik Khan Who Was Behind It And He Was A Terrorist. He Married Her Only To Know The Information About Terrorist Cases. She Went And Fought With Him And Threatened To Tell Everyone The Truth With Proof."

At Last She Found The Truth. Malik Who Was Cunning Planned And An Accident To Kill Zara Before She Handover The Proof. He Was Successful In His Plan. Zara Was Badly Injured And Taken To Hospital Where Indira Was Hospitalized As She Was Showing Some Signs Of Recovery . From The Operation Theatre Both Of Their Bodies Got Exchanged.

Sharmas Thought Zara Was Indira And Took Her Body Did He Last Rites And Indira Was Taken To Mumbai. Indira Soon Recovered But Lost Her Memory. Malik Thought Since She Lost Her Memory She Wont Harm Him. But He Was Unaware That She Was Actually Indira. Malik Was Now Living In Mumbai But Not With Her.

She After Collecting All Proof Was Went To Malik's House. He Was Surprised And Said He Was Happy That She Accepted Him Finally. But She Said Him The Truth That She Is Actually Indira And Zara Was Dead And She Is Going To Handover Him To Police And Police Is Waiting For Him Outside.

Malik Tried To Run Away From There But Indira Took Her Rifle Out And Ran Back Of Him. She Caught Him And Handover Him To Police. She Then Said Them He Is A Terrorist And Was The One Behind Zara Malik Khans Death. Everyone Was Shocked. IG Asked Her What Was She Saying. She Said That She Was Indira And All What Happened. She Also Gave Her Badge Back And Said She Don't Want To Life As Zara Now. She Resigned And Zara Malik Khan Was Declared As Dead.

After Knowing The Truth She Decides To Go Back To SN.

will be continued...

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dnyanu thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great starting..👏

plz update soon...


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Originally posted by: dnyanu

great starting..👏


plz update soon...


thnx . i ll try to update
.Shree. thumbnail
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watz this guys
so many views but no comments?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Keep it up par pata nehi actually mein kya dikhayenge,I lost all hopes
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start dear 👏
i'd love to read this story
waiting for the next update
please add me to ur pm list 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start..👏 do continue soon..
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Part 2

Why there is only less comments? U people didn't like?

After knowing the truth she decides to go back to SN but not as Indira but as Zara. The day she was leaving she got a call from IG. He said that they are impressed with her efficiency and decided to take her back on duty not as Zara but as Indira Sharma. She was overwhelmed. She was more happy when he said that her posting was on Delhi. She thought to stay in SN. She went there and said she got posting in Delhi and is searching for a house.Rishi and Sheta asked her to stay in their house. She stated staying there as a tenant. She was happy to see her old Rishi back. She was happy to know that Rishi was happy and didn't want to disturb him and Shweta. So she didn't disclose her identity.

She was noticing everyone in the house. All was happy except one. She saw the face of ishaan always gloomy. She went and asked him about this. He said that it was his bua who looked after him not his parents. She was the one who made him ready for school, checked his home work, brought him chocolate and his bua was everything for him. He also said that she settled everyone but with whom did she leave him. He also said that he felt sad not when his mom left him and went but when his bua left him. Indira was so sad to hear this. the whole night she was thinking about his words. At night she went to Ishaan's room. He was asleep. She said there is no need of anyone to leave him with because she is there with him. While she was leaving Ishaan got the hold of her hand. He was not asleep. He said that he knew she was his bua. She hugged him and cried. He was so happy. She made him promise that she won't tell this to anyone.

They both spoke a lot in that night. She said Ishaan they will begin a new start from the next. They both smiled and went to sleep. The next day Ishaan woke up and was so happy. It was new start for him. There was the same mischievous in him which was lost 8 years before. Everyone was surprised with his behavior. He could speak properly and was very happy. Rishi noticed this change in him. He left for school alone. But on the way Indira also joined with him. Rishi who was passing by saw them. He felt something fishy. He followed them. Ishaan actually took leave that day but lied that he was going to school. They enjoyed that day together. She bought ice creams for him, played in the rain and did a lot of masti. They came back in the evening. They were behaving like they didn't meet that day. But Rishi stated noticing this but didn't say anything. But there was some doubt in his mind.

The next day Ishaan got a prize she came running calling his bua and gave her the prize. It was after a long time Ishaan participated in some completion. He gave Indira the prize. She congratulated him. Rishi saw this and asked why didn he call Zara as his bua. Both were answerless. Indira changed the topic by telling she has some work and left. Soon Ishaan also left. But Rishis doubt became more and more strong. he started thinking what his mind told him that day in terrace that she was his Indira.

He decided to know the truth.

To be continued.

Edited by Shree.123 - 12 years ago
aadk thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gud start shree...👏...do continue...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update dear...i loved it 😃

but there is one problem...the pace of the story is too high...kindly slow down a bit
or is it that the actual story starts when Rishi decides to find the truth?
as in how he finds out the truth then InShi re-union and all
about less comments...have paitence dear, your story is good so u'll definitely get more readers 😊

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