Wings of Imagination

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Posted: 13 years ago
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(This part of the story that could have been this way:My Imagination)
Rishi sees Indira on his lap,crying in pain;he calls Sumer for help,to take them to a near-by hospital.Sumer board in the car parked outside the house,and drives Rishi and Indira to a hospital.In the hospital,Indira is quickly taken to the emergency ward,where the doctor asks Rishi about the injury.Rishi is asked to wait outside,where he gets impatient,and can't wait to see 'his' Indira.After a while the doctor comes out and informs Rishi that the wound has not pierced deep,which is good for Indira;but stitches are required,and she needs to be admitted.Rishi gets a sign of relief,and he makes some phone calls to arrange money for the hospital.Meanwhile,Indira regains consciousness and she asks for Rishi;the nurse comes out and tells Rishi that,his wife is asking for him.Rishi rushes in and sits beside Indira,who gives a smile to see 'her' Rishi.
Rishi somehow manages money from friends,and gets a room for Indira.Indira is shifted to the room,where Rishi eagerly waits to hug his wife.As Rishi hugs Indira,both of them get lost in each other for the moment.Suddenly Indira whispers in Rishi's ears,aking him where did he get the money for the treatment? Rishi,slowly takes Indira's arms from his shoulders and looks at her,and says that,she need not worry about money,he is their for her and take care of her.Tears start rolling down Indira's eyes seeing the depth of Rishi's love for her;seeing that there is someone in the world,who loves her unconditionally,who has' bewitched her body and soul'.Rishi wipes off her tears and tells her to rest,as he runs his hand over her hair and kisses her forehead.Late in the evening,the nurse comes in to check Indira's BP,and finds both Indira and Rishi deep in sleep like babies.She smiles and taps on Rishi's shoulder,who wakes up and sees the nurse.He gets down from the bed and sits on the chair.The nurse checks and leaves,when Indira slowly opens her eyes and finds Rishi beside her,holding her hand.He adjusts the bed by raising it little high and brings the bowl of soup.He takes a spoon-full of soup and brings near Indira's mouth,who keeps on looking at him with admiration.Rishi tells her to slowly open her mouth and sip it.He feeds her like a child and then cleans her mouth.Suddenly all the bitter moments of the day comes rushing down to Indira's thoughts,the moment when her world had turned up-side-down with the betrayal of her brother Vidith;the person she had loved so much,had so much faith in.These thoughts brings storm in Indira's mind;she starts crying.Rishi,who has been outside talking to a ward-boy for extra pillow and a sheet,comes in to find Indira drowned in tears;he throws the things to the couch and rushes to Indira,who holds him tight and cries out loud in pain;pain that has been caused by her own brother;pain of being betrayed and cheated.Rishi also holds her tight and tells her to cry as much as she wants,and let go all the bitterness from her heart;he tells her to give away all her pain to him and he'll take care of her,as of after this day onwards she will never shed a drop of tear for her father,for her brothers,or anyone from the family,who had caused her pain.Rishi consoles Indira and tells her that from this moment onwards he will never let anyone cause her any pain,or let her father,or brother come near her.After a while,as the storm in Indira's heart starts settling down,she calms down and tells Rishi that if anything good has ever happened in her life,it is him;that he has filled her emptiness with his love;filled her heart with joy to have found such a wonderful life-partner.
Night falls and Rishi starts making his bed in the couch,when Indira calls him.He goes near her and she asks him to sleep near her;Rishi looks in surprise at her and says,"how can I sleep here,I mean near you Makanmalkinji?" Indira pulls his ear and says,"Rishi aap mere Paati hain,toh kesain kiya?" Rishi smiles and says that,he is glad that 'his' hitler is back,to which they both laugh and hold each other's hand.Indira's eyes starts twinkling with water,and she says Rishi that she doesn't want to be alone anymore,that she needs him near her more than ever.Rishi lies beside Indira,who takes a deep breath of relief,and holds him and they both fall asleep.

This is one of the many ways that this episode between Indira and Rishi could have been made.But anyway,the Cvs and the writer seem to have been trying to bring back Rishi-Indira magic,and it works for us as long as they are together.But no one can limit our imagination,it can spread its wing as far as it wishes.So friends share your imagination about this part of Rishi and Indira's story,and fill colors to the canvas of their love.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ah wud have loved if something like this happened. So many Inshi moments and even better so many Rishi the husband moments. I really wanted a proper recovery track. But it seems they are simply rushing into this new track they have in mind.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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agreed.i wished the track was properly handled.it would have been more impactful after the dreaded indira stab scene!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really nice job!! I loved reading this! You penned your imagination on what you wanted to see, really well. I agree with you. Wish the creatives had shown us something like this but what can we do. Hopefully the scenes coming up will be better scripted/directed.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pata nahi kyun creatives ke alawa, baaki sab ko inshi scenes ke acche acche creative ideas hai. Aisa kyun hota hai ki creatives humhare armanom par bhar bhar pani pherthe ja rahe hai.

@earnshaw: very nice imagination. I wish u were HD creative.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful...just too good!

do write more such scenes...god knows...these days almost every scene of HD comes under the 'could have been written dis way' category!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one.. gr8 imagination and very nicely written..👏
cvs must visit the forum every day i say..

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