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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: tasnim.

Fantastic update
loved it so much
very beautifully written
u r wonderful writer- i really loved ur story
PLz Do cont. it and pm me

Thanks dear😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: ..Priyanka..

Awsome Update Preethi ...


I can see emotional development between Sameer- Indira ..

Sameer is changing 😆


Thanks priyanka, ofcourse sameer has to change for Indira - love will change him😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: preethi_m18


Thanks priyanka, ofcourse sameer has to change for Indira - love will change him😆


He is already changing
3 lacks ki painting-BY GOD...😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94


I am about to update dear... very busy in defending sameer and sameer fans in this forum😆

ok give me few minutes will update now
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Posted: 13 years ago
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my friend said that i am dragging the story😆 , i said to her sameer character has to change to match with Indira so i need to show all the emotions clearly without missing 😳

any way here are the next two episodes, both are small parts but I hope you people will enjoy...
please do comment😊
Edited by preethi_m18 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96

Chapter – 21

Sameer thinks about Indira while going to Diwan mansion, smile is playing on his lips. He can see his effect on her, his heart skips a beat when he realizes he indeed has effect on Indira. He sees the slight blush on Indira's face which she tried to hide from him. Sameer "oh my god Hitler blushed for me.. I am died". And laughs at his madness. Sameer who never cared for outsiders first time cared for her. He cannot see another man eyeing her or any one insulting her. He appointment her as his PA and maid to insult her but now he couldnot even see anyone insults Indira. Why this change, from where this change came from. Taking her hand in his hand makes him feel happy, he feels sense of responsiblity for her. Just to keep that happy admiring look on her face he bought that painting for 3 lakhs which is not at all the sameer he knows then where is this 'kanjoos sameer gone'.. 'kanjoos' the word remembers him Indira again the way she calls him. 'oh god that word now feels so good to listen from her lips. Sameer you are getting mad about Indira, get a grip man' with a smile playing on his lips he parks his car in the mansion and goes into the house. As soon as he enters, he sees Rishi sitting in living room with Simi. Sameer felt wave of pain seeing Rishi which remember him that Indira does not belongs to him. Sameer 'does not belong to me, from where this thought came. From when I started thinking Indira as mine' he is totally confused and frustrated with his thoughts goes near to them. Simi is glaring angrily and Rishi is grinning like a fool. Sameer masks is frustration very well and asks "whats the matter". Rishi shows the painting sameer bought in auction which is send to his house after auction. Sameer shuts his eyes with 'oh know'look. Rishi says "kya sam kya baat hain. You bought painting aur obhi 3 lakhs kaa. Kaha gaya mera kanjoos brother". Sameer sighs and about to answer Rishi, simi starts "3 lakhs ka painting karidna ki kya jarurath thi. Oh god mera BP high horaha hai". Sam and Rishi reached simi to catch her, she pushes both their hands and says "sam you are going to sell this painting as soon as possible. Not 3 lakhs but atleast we get some money to recover the loss". Sameer is reluctant to sell the painting and says "no mom I liked it very much and I will keep it in my room" to escape any more argument he take the painting and goes to his room ignoring simi's voice. Rishi looks at sameer with suspicious eyes "sam aur painting kuch tho baat hai, kahe ladkhi ki chakkar tho hai" and thinks 'sam wonot do anything like this for a girl that is the reason why all his girlfriend's comes running to me then for whom he bought this painting, mystery tho solve karna hi padga, who knows maaja aaajaye solve kartha kartha'. He pats is back for gr8 discovery and goes to sameers room.

Sameer enters his room and looks at the picture, he keeps the picture on the wall of his bedroom and admires it. He remembers Indira entering the venue in saree. She is looking like an innocent dove wrapped in a beautiful saree coming only for him. 'Only for me… oh god again the same thought, what happened to me'. Suddenly he thinks 'kya Indira also thinks about me like that' before he could complete this though Rishi enters the room. Seeing Rishi sameer stops his thoughts, his mind shouts painfully 'Indira donot feel anything and everything is your imagination. That's all, she loves Rishi and you only broken their marriage so how you expect her to even like you'. A wave of hurt washes away all sameers happiness in one second. Sameer closes his eyes to control his emotions without showing Rishi.

Rishi "so tell me now, who the girl is". Sameer gets shocked but cover immedidately and stammers "girl who girl no one is there" swallows a lump in his throat and immediately comes to angry mood and says "you know I am not that type of guy who girls love to stay with so stop thinking about my love live and tell me how is your work going on". Rishi gets disappointment to know that there is not girl and starts to share his work status with sameer. Rishi "sam tomorrow CA is coming for audit. It will be good if you stay with me till the audit completes. Can you come to office to help me, as you know this is my first audit?" Sameer "sure I will be there, at what time I have to come". Sameer thinks 'may be if I stay away from Indira I may get distracted and forgot about Indira soon, which will be good for all. I donot want to complicate the relations'. Rishi actively "tomorrow @ 10 AM, meet you there" while going turns "aur hain, tumhare painting vale ko mera hai bolna" with a wink he goes from there. Sameer takes a deep breath and looks at the painting saying "meri painting vale…".

Next day both Indira and sameer decides to ignore each other. So before indira goes sameer goes to gym. Indira comes to his room thinking to avoid him and sees the painting on the wall. A wave of happiness runs through her heart. Indira goes near the painting touches the paint and remembers sameer how he cared for her in Mumbai, how he helped in the party. Suddenly remembers their hand leaving scene on the flight and removes her hand from painting as she got a current shock, she feels bad. She donot know why she is feeling unhappy. She heard the sound of gym room to be opened so she runs immediately from there to bring the breakfast. Sameer sees Indira's bag and confirms she came. He without wasting time goes to get ready. As soon as he comes out Indira is there with his breakfast both did not try for an eye contact and completes their work. Sameer thought of informing her about going to audit but decides against it. Sameer goes directly to the site and then to Rishi's office. Indira goes to her office and unknowingly waits for sameer. It is 10.30 AM but there is not sign of sameer, Indira panics where is he, he should be in office by now… bad thoughts crosses her mind Indira 'kuch hova tho nahin, no no Indira donot think –ve. Let's call him on his cell and see. But how will I call what will I say.'Indira closes her eye with frustration and mind says 'chalo chodo Indira if wants to come he will come', heart says 'atleast find out he is sound and safe". Mind "no need, do he mentioned where he went than why she should wait for him". Heart keeps quiet because it donot know why Indira is waiting for sameer. Indira leaves the matter to mind and starts her working.

Sameer reaches Rishi's office and gets busy in audit. Sameer sees a lot of improvement in Rishi business handling ways. He leaves most of the matter to Rishi to look after, by just helping if he needed. Sameer starts missing Indira but he hides his temptation to call Indira between the files. At the end he takes his phone to call her atleast to listen to her voice. 'What will you say sam to her why you called her' Sameer didnot understand what he will tell to Indira. But his heart pops him to call once to Indira. He calls to his cabin number but Indira did not pick up the call, as she is in ladies room. Office boy lifts the phone and informs that Indira is not at her desk. Sameer gets disappointed and puts the phone down. As Indira returns office boy informs her that sameer called her. She felts wave of relief, feels like school girl who got her favorite candy - lifts the phone and dials sameer number. Sameer who is discussing with CA keeps his mobile on silent mode. He did not see the phone blinking where rishi sees that and lift the call as he sees the number is from sameer's office land line. Indira about to speaks hear's "hello", recognizes Rishi's voice and stops on her tracks. She couldnot respond as she is not expecting Rishi to lift the call. Rishi thinking call got disconnect so keeps the phone down. Indira slowly cuts the call and goes to her desk thinking 'sameer is with Rishi. How did I forgot Rishi so easily and I am craving to see sameer. Am I become so shameless? How can I fall for someone else when I once was ready to marry Rishi'?' I love him right' this was a question to her than a statement. Indira thinks 'wait a minute falling for sameer, from where did this though came from? Do I really love Rishi? If yes, then how can I forgot about Rishi and fall for sameer. I know I am not like other girls who easily dump their boyfriends and go with others but how can I fall for sameer when I was once ready to marry Rishi. Oh god!! why all these emotions are becoming complicated for me to handle'.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter-22

She goes to her hospital thinking to leave all these thoughts behind her back of mind but she feels very heavy heart, she is not accepting but she is missing sameer. The though itself is shocking to her. Indira enters the hospital room. Vidith recovered very soon than expected. She is trying to talk and walk with the help of physiotherapy. Vidith smiles as soon as Indira enter the room. She hides her feels from vidith and says she is very happy to see his speedy recovery. Doctor says she can take vidith home tomorrow. Indira feels happy and thought of calling sameer and ask for leave. Her heart says 'now you got some bahana to call sameer'. Mind glares at heart and says 'stop behaving childishly and call sameer donot know if he will give leave or not'. Heart says 'he will, he cares for me' Mind says 'let's see'. Indira gives an audible sigh gaining Vidith's attention. Indira clears her throat saying she will call her boss and will apply for leave. Vidith smiles and nods his head. Indira goes and calls sameer to his cell. Again sameer misses to lift the call. This time Rishi is also busy in participating in the meeting so he too ignores the call. Sameers phone shows Indira number blinking and stops after some time. Indira leave the matter for now goes back to vidith says she will come tomorrow to pick him up.

Sameer leaves Rishi's office @ 9.30 PM, he knows Indira wonot be in office but still with a small hope he goes to his cabin and sees Indira left for the day. He feels disappointed and goes back to his car, suddenly checks his mobile and sees Indira's missed call. His heart start jumps seeing at her missed call, he immediately calls her. By then Indira reaches SN and get freshup goes to her bed. Sees her phone blinking, it is from sameer, she want to jump seeing the call but controls her happiness and attends the call. Sameer "have you miss-"closes his eyes and correct "have you called me". Indira "yes, I called you"she donot know whatelse to talk she even forgot why she called him listening to his deep male voice.Sameer "why?" Indira stammers "oh oh.." she swallows her saliva and remembers why she called sameer then suddenly shouts "vidith bhaya, ya vidith bhaya is getting discharged tomorrow so I want to apply for leave". Sameer thinks 'oh she want leave so she called, she is not missing me, see sameer you are mad to think she will miss you' aab tho sudarja'. Sameer "ok fine. You can take leave". Indira is disappointed to listen sameer accepted for leave, her heart said 'one more day without sameer' indira clears her thoughts and says "good night". Sameer reluctantly says "good night" and keeps the phone. He is frustrated why donot know may be because Indira did not missed him or he has to spend one more day without Indira around him. With an irritated mood he goes to his house. Indira's heart says to her mind 'see sameer gave me leave to attend vidith bhaya, he cares for me', mind says 'donot be so happy he might have thought of some or other thing to torcher you for taking this leave.' Suddenly heart feels bad and keeps silent. Mind says 'what happened afraid of sameer's torcher come on, youare Hitler how can you be afraid of him'. Heart says 'no I am not afraid but feeling sad one more day without sameer'. Mind shouts 'shuttt uppp'. Indira's heart still dreams about sameer and goes to her sleep.

Sameer reached his house in a bad mood but as soon as he sees the painting he remembers blushing face of Indira and a smile comes on his lips. He thinks I need to solve my emotions as soon as possible and should come to some conclusion or else I will become mad for sure.

A new day with new hope both Indira and sameer starts there day. Sameer gets up in the morning with a hope to see Indira suddenly remembers today Indira is on leave, he reluctantly gets ready no mood to eat breakfast, asks his servants not to prepare anything for him and goes to office. He missed Indira like hell touches the seat of Indira slowly.

Indira goes to hospital to pay bills and collect all medicines, advice and other details from doctor.

[Guys imagine the songs going at the background: song from Dilwale dulhaniya lajayenge]

Sameer stands at Indira desk and Indira stands at hospital receptionist's desk, remembers each other and songs starts

"Na Jaane Mere Dil Ko Kya Ho Gaya

Abhi To Yahin Tha Abhi Kho Gaya

Na Jaane Mere Dil Ko Kya Ho Gaya

Abhi To Yahin Tha Abhi Kho Gaya

Na Jaane Mere Dil Ko Kya Ho Gaya

Abhi To Yahin Tha Abhi Kho Ga"

He sees Indira sitting in his chair and turns pointing to him singing "Ho gaya hai tujhko to pyaar sajnaLaakh kar le tu inkaar sajna" keeps her hands on his desk and bend alittle giving him a seductive smile "Ho gaya hai tujhko to pyaar sajnaLaakh kar le tu inkaar sajna, Dildaar sajna, hai yeh pyaar sajna".

Indira goes takes the bill in her hand, buries her head in reading the detailsnear vidiths room she lift her head to open the door but sees Sameer standing at the door folding his hands to his chest

Sameer slowly opens the door singing "Ho gaya hai tujhko to pyaar sajnaLaakh kar le tu inkaar sajna" and stand at hospital table singing "Dildaar sajna, hai yeh pyaar sajna". All members of Indira's family are present in the room but Indira'e eyes remains on Sameer.

Someone taps on Indira's shoulders she turns to see Munna standing besidesher asking where is she looking. Indira nods her head as no and goes from there.

Sameer sees the sun from his blinds singing "Dekha na tune mudke bhi peecheKuch der to main ruka tha"

Indira "Jab dil ne tujhko rokna chaahaDoor tu jaa chuka tha"

Sameer sits in his chair rolls in to the other end "Hua kya"

Indira keeps her head on the wall "Na jaana" sameer keeps his hands on back of his head leaning to his chair "Yeh dil kyoon", suddenly sameer see Indira touching his nose singing "Deewana"and goes to desk and sits on desk singing "Ho gaya hai tujkho to pyaar sajna Laakh kar le tu inkaar sajna"

Indira bending down to take vidith laugage and lifts her head when she heards sameer singing "Ho gaya hai tujkho to pyaar sajna Laakh kar le tu inkaar sajna "Indira slowly comes from vidith room passing the coffee machine, sameer stand at coffee machine filling the coffee and gives to Indira touches her nose saying "Dildaar sajna, hai yeh pyaar sajna" and disappears.

Both sameer goes towards his house and Indira takes vidith to SN ' the background continues

"Na jaane mere dil ko kya ho gaya ' Abhi to yahin tha, abhi kho gaya, kho gaya" Indira stands at her terrace with her night dress with open hair unknowingly thinikng about sameer, hugging herself.

Amma sitting on her cot observes sad face of Indira and mis-interpets that she is missing Rishi and now as vidith is back she has to talk with Vidith and Rishi to make Indira accept to marry Rishi.

Edited by preethi_m18 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98

U r not dragging this story preethi

Its going perfectly alright

But yes I think dono ka feelings kuch jaldi he develop ho rahe hai-specially Indus as I said it b4…but I really loved the way u r progressing this story…

Aag tou dono taraf lagi hai..lol lol

Fabulous update Preethi-I must say

Waiting for next part

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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
Hey Preethi...
I came across your ff recently and actually liked it... You have taken your own time in showing Indira's feeling as a normal girl would feel when she is exposed to the feeling called 'love'... Rather I would say that you should take more time and show them understanding each other before they completely fall for each other... I dont watch HD but I visit the forum to keep up with the track and to tell the truth I was not at all satisfied by the way they showed Indira falling in love and all that... So your perfectly doing fine with the pace...

I'm not a InShi or SaRa fan in particular... I feel for indira and I want her to get what she deserves... I want her to be happy at least after she finds her soul-mate... I have given up hoping on her family 😕

So finally I would say that I love this ff and please do keep writing 😊
Edited by aysha1989 - 13 years ago
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sweet update dear..i was actualy picturising the whole song in front of me...

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