LaKhil SS ~ The Power of Love & Forgiveness~Chapter 2 Page 3 Updat

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Hey everyone, this story I had written it like 3 months ago but finally I have decided it to write it here on the forum. I am not sure how many parts this will get over in that's why I put it up as a short story. Pls everyone leave your feedback and comments, I would like to know where I can improve as it's the first short story I am writing on Gustakh Dil.😳

~ Part 1 ~

London, 2015

It was a cold December evening almost nearing Christmas. The streets were filled with colourful lights and decorations. Kids were in their jolly self-jumping around visiting one store to another and dragging their parents to Santa's Grotto. In this festive atmosphere no one seemed to notice a young man sitting all alone on a bench which was located in the darkest corner of the park. Nikhil who had just walked aimlessly to the park was arriving from his own graduation party, and was thinking about how his life had changed course faster than a car changes lanes to avoid an accident. He couldn't believe that so much had happened in his life before the time he came here to London to pursue an MBA. It seemed to him that now his life had come to a standstill, he still couldn't forget her innocence, her laughter, her big eyes, and her face. Even though he wanted to hate her with all his heart he just could not. He thought running away to here would make things better but it did not. His friends were right he should have thought of a more fixable solution. Breaking free from his thoughts, he saw ahead a couple holding hands and looking so much in love seeing them primed his mind with a memory which he hadn't recalled it in a while yet he never stopped thinking about those days.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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great love to read ss on laakhil . Great Seems like they were seperated . Why nikhil
is hating her ? I think he is thinking about laajo right then why hating her ?
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Thanks😳
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Originally posted by: ziks

great love to read ss on laakhil . Great Seems like they were seperated . Why nikhil
is hating her ? I think he is thinking about laajo right then why hating her ?

Thanks, when I update the next part soon ur questions will be answered, and yep they were separated😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A very nice start 👍🏼
Loved reading it. Waiting for the next part :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG! Uditi 🤗
so happy to find a SS here 😃 thanks hun!!! 🤗

great start .. plz continue soon 👍🏼
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Originally posted by: Marvi_21

A very nice start 👍🏼
Loved reading it. Waiting for the next part :)

Thanks, I will continue it soon😳
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Originally posted by: ...Jes...

OMG! Uditi 🤗
so happy to find a SS here 😃 thanks hun!!! 🤗

great start .. plz continue soon 👍🏼

Jes, Thanks so much😃 I will continue it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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uditi read it on Saturday but couldn't reply earlier...it is amazing ,am so intrigued what would happen next ...lovely to see ss and love ur writing style it is very amazing and connects with the readers
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it Uditi! 👏 Can't wait for the next update!!!

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