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Ramona

@PristineSoul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: yoga23priya
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hey cherry

will come soon with bang like toofan after replying pm😆

your's toofan

Aww, take ur tym darling.. Lubb U toofan.

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Ramona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: rubal223
comfortability on the island
strangers on the island

island without remarks

uncontrollable situation

Getting together all alone

please dont laugh at me ,dont know

baby.. Why would I laugh?? Now see what Pappa does with all this..

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Sidda

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Ramona, I'm excited for your short story of ppl lost on an island. I've read many novels about stories of this such and I have enjoyed them. Have you ever watched the American show Lost, it had a plane crash and many ppl lost on it. The ppl tried to escape it but some got kidnapped or killed.

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PrashT

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

woohooo Ramona...

It seems maha interesting Sweetheart...

Plzzz update it soonnn😎

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Fallen Star

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

WOW Romana, I've just read it now, it seems really exciting...Do plzzz carry on with it!! 😉 ⭐️

Keep up with the rocking work!! 👏

Btw I also thought of a title, don't know whether u will like it or not!! 😃

Adventurous Island

Enchanted Island

Edited by Fallen Star - 14 years ago

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Ramona

@PristineSoul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

this is dedicated to My Jaanu & my baby...

Chapter 1

Re-union

It was half past 11 & Arpita was busy stuffing her things in her black suitcase.

"Gosh... How am I to reach on time? Shikha is surely gonna kill me. Somebody help me."

Just then her mom entered with a glass of her favourite Choco Milkshake.

Arpita- "Mummy.. Help Me Pls"

Mummy- "OMG.. Arpita you're a grown up girl & you still havent learnt to pack ur things? Shame on You"

Arpita- "Why do I need to worry when I have my mommy with me?"

She hugged her Mom tight.

Mummy - "Ya Ya.. I know.. Anyway, Take Care & enjoy urself."

Arpita- "Ok Mamma.. Love You lots. Bye"

Arpita hurried downstairs only to find Shikha ready to pounce on her.

Shikha- "What took you so long? Do U have any idea how late we are?" She was mad at her.

Arpita- "Okay Okay Im sorry.. Just chill."

Shikha frowned- "Come out & I'll show you how to Chill".

Arpita loved irritating Shikha. Afterall, they were best friends. They jumped into Shikha's car & drove away. They were to meet Tanmay, Jagat- Simple & RV. It was a reunion camp for them. All six of them were on their way to what they called the- DESERTED ISLAND.

Arpita- " Are you going to drive all the way? "

Shikha- "Nope.. I dont need to especially when He is around''

Arpita- "That reminds me.. whr are the others? I mean what abt Jagat & Manjari?"

Arpita- " They're out of town."

Just then Shikha recieved a call from Tanmay. But before she could get her cell, Arpita snatched it from her hand.
Shikha- "Give me my phone."

Arpita- "Sorry Babes.."

Shikha rolled her eyes- "Geez.. You're the limit".

Tanmay- "Where are You?"

Arpita- "Dude, we're on our way. We'll be there in an hour."

Tammy- "An hour?! "

Arpi- "Oh Come on Tammy. We're trying our best. Besides, its raining & we are not taking any chance."

Tanmay- "Okay, See Ya.."

The wet & slippery roads made it slightly difficult for them to drive. But still, it didnt dampen their spirit. After an hour and a half, they were greeted by the rest of them. They soon took their seats & resumed their journey.

Simple"I missed all of you."

Shikha- "Me too.."

RV- "It feels great to be back after 3 yrs."

Tanmay- "Btw, Why is this place called DESERTED? "

Jagat- "Ermm.. Its just a resort."

Arpi- " I must say its gonna be fun. I mean, just imagine, a huge cottage only for us & that too on an Island. Wowieee.."

Arpi was very excited unaware of what was in store for her.

Shikha- "You guys are really gonna love that place."

RV- "And why not, after all its been created by Avdhesh Singh Thakur."

The name wiped off Arpita's smile. She went pale with fear. Unpleasant memories flooded her mind. How much she hated that name.. She hated his existence. She thought that her worst nightmares came to an end. But now, it was just the beginning.

pls hit like

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dnt forget to comment

Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago

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PrashT

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Sweetheart🤗🤗

Me First😆

1st...I Love the title😃😃 It creates suspense😆

Wooowwieee... Such an adventurous journey😉

Reunion😍😍
😃
It feels im reuniting😉..

Island is created my AST...Hmmm😎

What happnd between Avita😕😕

Continue soon..Im waiting😃

Love yew<3😳

Edited by prash_t - 14 years ago

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NidhaA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Deserted Island + Avita...hmm adventurous combination...and the start itself is exciting continue soon Ramo

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Cuty16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

It is new and intresting concept dear.
Waiting for the entry of Avi,arpi is scared just by name what will happen when he will cum in front of her.
Do update it dear soon loads of thing to know which will revil later i think.

Edited by Cuty16 - 14 years ago

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Sidda

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

What a thrilling and exciting update? All of our favorite folks except RV is coming on the trip. Will they get the the island by a cruise, jet or plane? Wow, so who is this mysterious Avdhesh Singh Thakur? I can't wait for this hottie's appearance. It wouldn't take long for Arpi to be mesmerised by his looks and voice.

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