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Posted: 14 years ago
Guyz 2 days B4 i started Writtin an Os on AviTa Frm continuition to Mondays Epi buh Neva Finished it 😆 as i my self didnt Like the startin 😆 will copy Paste the 1st half i Wrote n Temme if i should continue 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yaa, i agree sanju, he will surly opp of Avdesh, & i guess, he even has a GF😳
cause once i read his twitter, that he said, i am in a relationship frm 6 months or a yr, something he posted it on 2009😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
today i think will be funny & sad epi🥺
funny cause Avdesh will get ready to meet Arpi with goons🤣
& Sad cause of stupid promo
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Posted: 14 years ago
My AviTa OS 😆 ---

She Ran to her room, Jumped on her bed in tears.

Flash Back : the door bell Rang, She Opened the Door , saw Papu And his Creepy Touch. As she kept remebering the 1st Meetin of her & Papu, She Starts Rubbing her Body In Disgust & Cried!

'How did My Father & Brothers even Allowed him alone in a Room With ME?!' She cried. 'We Not even Engaged and he still tried Crossing his Limits' she shouted.

She stopped n Got Flashback of last Night When She Saw the Paper where papu wrote his number n there was 1 more paper, which she realised now!. She started Looking for tht paper n thn remembered her maid cleaning the glasses n She rushes to the trash bin n throws all the trash out n finally Found the paper. She curiosly opened the paper n Started reading it.

"Priye Arpita,

Humne jabse apko dekha hai, tabse na humare ankhaon mein neend na chain...

Ap tak hum teen baar mile hai ... Humein Kabhi bhi Aisa Masooos nahin howa hai jaise Apko Dekh Kar Huwa hai. Hum Bas Ek Baar apse milna chahtein hain.

Apka Aashiq

Avdesh

....." she just couldnt contol her smile... she just couldnt believe it that the person she loves even before seeing him, also loves her. And then She realised there was a number after his name which was messed by her throwing water last night. "what have i dont?! This was the only way i could have talked to him n i lost that chance too .." she cried.

Some one knocks the door n Shout "ARPITA darwaja Koliye! Buddhe ne Haan Kar di" An Arpita is shock hearin this n thinks "hum iss Insaan Ke Saath Bahar aur woh bhi akele Kaise Jaa Sakte Hain?" she stops n Sees the Letter "Aur inse Milne Ka Ek hi moka hai... lekhin Kaise"

Creepy Papu starts Bangin the Door, which scared Arpita n she Rushes to open the door n he olds her hand in a creepy way n drags her out And force her sit on his bike.

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Should Continue or Not
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Posted: 14 years ago
Its Tumhra deewana
Avdesh😆
his goons said same thing while writing leter
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Posted: 14 years ago
I think u should cont, Manoo, its nice
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ashu u Knw im Not a Writter 😆 Tho Will Continue thn 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
They wrote letter in hindi😔, i was expecting in eng😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ash is in a relationship.. =(( Aa leh lo.. My heart is broken.. 🤣
The goons were sooo funny.. 🤣 🤣 Especially the other day when Kanoo said he's got 3-4 women.. 🤣 I couldn't stop laughin!!

@Manoo: You better continue..! Its really good.. I wanna read more now.. =)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww thnks Ashu n Sanju 🤗 continuin it now 😊

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