Speechless: [[One-Shot]]

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Kesar: 21 years old.
Gulaal: 22 years old.
Talli: 19 years old.
I never re-read something. So sorry for the errors.

Kesar's POV:

I felt my forehead being exposed as the breeze worked it's magic. I stood still in the middle of the big crowd, all rushing to one side. I could hear nothing but the soothing voice of
Krishnakumar Kunnath that was blasting in my ears. I stood confused, I looked to my left to see what the caos was about. I established that the group 'Nirmitee' from X-Factor was in town giving a special appearance. I rolled my eyes and headed for the oposite direction as I pushed my contacts back to place, "Ugh! I need to get better contacts. I mean c'mon, the breeze is powerful enough to blur my vision! But mans so skills" I laughed to myself in honour that I placed my contacts back whilst walking. "Oh, sorry" I immediately said when I collided with someone, the next thing you know, all thier bags were chilling on the floor. I bent down to pick them up. "There you go" I returned the bags causing our hands to meet, I looked up and she was stood silent doing nothing but giving me a welcoming smile. It was a smile anyone could die for, it revealed her beautiful set of teeth, that sparkled with left me in complete awe. I sensed me losing my balance, she made my knees weak..."Erm, sorry again" Now my face was buring up.."err..mhmm" I just stood there curving my lips into a smile in timidity. She locked eyes with me and nodded before her scarf met my face as she rushed off. He sighed as he didn't hear a word out of her mouth.

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Few hours later I walked towards the caf as I bobbed my head to my favourite track. I took my seat next to the window so I don't feel so claustrophobic in this tiny caf. I looked up to find the same women I bumped into before. My heart skipped a beat. I watched her drink her coffee with her left hand as I said to myself "..aww, she's a lefty". With her right hand I watched her move a stand of hair behind her ear. I switched my coffee that was in my right hand to my left hand and took a sip, "Kesar, are you mad? What are you doing" I said to myself...Her beauty zoned me out and I followed her every move. I had enough, I got up took my earphones out and moved towards her table..My heart pounding so much I felt my head throb. "Hey" I said to her without thinking. I waited a few seconds and got no reply, I cleared my throat and repeated the same words even louder. Her head flew up as she felt someone infront of her. She looked rather confused which left me confused. "Mein akela hoon aur tum bhi ho, toh meine socha ki hum saath coffee drink kare" I said in total confidence, but she motioned her hand to her ear. Having no idea what was happening I said "ermm..". "Oh there you are" another girl said as she used sign language to get her words across to Gulaal. Gulaal pointed at me, and the other girl said "Hey, tum koon ho?" I felt nervous and replied fast "Hi, mera naam Kesar hai, is she okay?" I asked is total concern. She replied "Im Talli, and yeah she's fine. She's trying to tell you that she is deaf but you didnt understand?" I said "Oh, mujhe nahin pata" Gulaal smiled and nodded at me. Talli noticed I was nervous so she laughed and offered to sit me them, I agreed and took my seat not talking my eyes off his women. "Oh haa, mein bhool gaye..yeh Gulaal hai" she pointed at Gulaal whilst talking to Kesar. I whispered with a big smile "Gulaal, that's a beautiful name" Talli heard me and motioned something to Gulaal. Gulaal looked down with bright red cheeks.


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Talli soon left saying she forgot her phone at home but before she left she passed me a notebook and a pen. Gulaal grabbed the pen and ripped a bit of paper out of the notebook and wrote something down, then folded it and gave it to me. I looked at her with a big smile and opened it.
Gulaal: Hi(: Sorry we cant talk :'('
Me: Sorry? This is fun! =]
Gulaal was about to take the peice of paper to reply but I tugged onto it.
Me: Gulaal, tum bahot beautiful ho.
I looked up to see her reaction and I get a pair of dreamy eyes staring at me with a perky smile. She gently took the pen out of my eyes causing me to force my hand back as soon as she touched me. She started to write something down and I continued to stare at her, analysing her every move.
Gulaal: Thank you, you're too sweet :P
Me: Do you mind if you spend friday night with me?
This time I didn't fold the paper, I wanted Gulaal to quickly read it and give me a reply as soon as possible - To save me from this embarrassment. Gulaal looked up and nodded.


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Four years later.

I slowly opened my eyes to see the love of my life sleeping peacefully. I caressed her warm cheeks just adoring her beauty. She fluttered her eyes and mouthed 'Jai Shri Krishna' to me. I repeated the same words whilst looking straight at her lips. I used signed language that I mastered in the years to tell her that I have something to tell her. I thought to myself 'this better work Talli'. I looked straight into her eyes and said "You know 4 years is a long time being with someone" Gulaal stroked my hair and nodded for me to continue.


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Their love was so silent yet so loud.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww that was so beautiful..👏👏👏.nirmohi...you have a serious fan here..😛..Oh i lubbed it.. I really lubbed your VM making style😛...and I am simply in awe of your OS👏I am short of words now..speechless.🤗...See now you actually beware..😆.becoz If you don't come up with more....I will make your beautiful thread a nightmare for u by chipkaoing ghatiya..shayari.🤣..so we want nxt wo bhi jaldi jaldi.😍...that was awesome nirmohi.👏..just simply superb⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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arrey vaah,nirmohi, that was so cool, ms multi-talented🤗. much happier than the last one, i enjoyed it loads.
made my weekend, without gulaal much happier, 😃.
do keep writing.😊.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I am touched...it was so beautiful. Plz continue writing FF's, you are really talented Nirmohi.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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how sweet is that...so sweet ...loved the love here...abosulatley fantastic and brilliant and so glad u didnt killed anyone...plz continue with ur os its sheer brilliant and awesome

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Posted: 14 years ago
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So many talents in the forum, huh 😲, great OS, loved it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Awww that was so beautiful..👏👏👏.nirmohi...you have a serious fan here..😛..Oh i lubbed it.. I really lubbed your VM making style😛...and I am simply in awe of your OS👏I am short of words now..speechless.🤗...See now you actually beware..😆.becoz If you don't come up with more....I will make your beautiful thread a nightmare for u by chipkaoing ghatiya..shayari.🤣..so we want nxt wo bhi jaldi jaldi.😍...that was awesome nirmohi.👏..just simply superb⭐️



Woah, my 1st fan! <3 Thanks Piyu! :') Thanks for lubbing it and my VM making style, lmfao.. you said that in my last OS. Haha, you're speechless yet you write a paragraph, ahha.. Piyu your a joker :P Thanks again!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: rimjhim1

arrey vaah,nirmohi, that was so cool, ms multi-talented🤗. much happier than the last one, i enjoyed it loads.

made my weekend, without gulaal much happier, 😃.
do keep writing.😊.



😳😳😳 Thank you for enjoying it Rimjhim :) Just one more day now.. Eeep!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachurya

I am touched...it was so beautiful. Plz continue writing FF's, you are really talented Nirmohi.



Thanks man. That really means a lot to me (:



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: arti07

how sweet is that...so sweet ...loved the love here...abosulatley fantastic and brilliant and so glad u didnt killed anyone...plz continue with ur os its sheer brilliant and awesome



Arti, thank youuu! (; Im happy I didn't kill anyone too. :')

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